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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Phulchukki
Awesome chappy...but it was a short one this time. Plz update a longgg one next time! And about the chapter i hope that you will soon reunite them 😃

Thanks a lot aditi... 😃
Will try
Hope so 😆

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: avika444
Nice update monu
Omg she broke her friendship with jalal
What will happen now
How will jalal find the reason behind their breakup
Update soon
Thanks for pm:-) :-)

Thanks a lot avi di

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
<font size="4" color="#003366">Fantastic chapter Monu😊</font>

Thanks nonie 😊

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Amazing chappy monu
Jalal on mission getting back his nonu
Teen love story going interesting
Updatesoon sweetheart n Thanks for pm

Thanks a bunch di 😃 😳
M glad you like it 😳

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: cuty1997
nice update monu
in one go i read both chappy
it's nice story
thanks for pm me
update soon

Thanks a lot krina di 😃 😳

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: sonali96
Interesting update dear...they are such a good friends...
Continue soon dear...waiting to know how will jalal get his nonu back or will he come to know the truth

Thank you so much sonali
M glad you like it 😃

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: geeta.M
Neetu..jaldi update dedo dear..
Feeling sleepy🥱

Sorry *holding ears*
Updating 😃

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: geeta.M
U didn't keep ur promise😡

Di night is not over yet 😉
But m really sorry about the delay 😭

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#279

_Chapter - 3_

"nonu... M coming... Just wait..." He was determined to get his nonu back... He rushed to get his keys and rode off to her house...

The bike got halted in front of a house... He took out his mobile phone and dialed some number... After two ring the person picked up the phone...
"hey Abdul you wanna meet to your girlfriend??? Right??" he asked his friend...

"yep..." Abdul replied excitingly... Be it any other day, if Abdul had also been begged in front of him, he would show some tantrums and would have refused gradually...
But today the tantrum king himself asking him to meet his girlfriend... So how can he leaves the golden chance...

"then come down fast..." Jalal ordered him and without waiting for an answer cuts the call...

Within 10 minutes Abdul came running to Jalal, who was standing on the main gate leaning on his bike... Jalal with full attitude showed him watch stating that he is late...

"aree m going to meet my gf naa... To it will take some time to get ready..." he replied cheekily... Jalal just rolled his eyes at his wired friend and hoped on bike...

Abdul too sat behind him and both rod off to the destination... They reached near a apartment and stopped the bike at some distance... Abdul immediately made a call to his gf ...

"hi darling, come down m here" he says while looking towards the window of a room... The window got opened and a beautiful girl appears and waved to him...

After some time she came down and hugged Abdul tightly... Jalal got irritated, as he is here just for his nonu, not to see their mushy romance on road...

He cleared his throat to get the attention of the love birds... Both blushed to this... Jalal ignore Abdul and asked sana "hey sis can I use your phone..."

Sana looks confused as for the first time he had asked her about mobile but she agreed due to respect... "sure bhaijaan" she smiled and passed her mobile to him...

He went a little far for some privacy... And immediately pressed the desired number...

*****

Jodha was silently looking at the a photo frame contains sketch of his and hers, which was made by HIM... Tears flowed down from her cheeks...
She immediately wiped off the crystal clear liquid that was not stopping from her eyes... As she heard her sister's voice and goes to her room...
*****
After sometime he came back to couple and handed her phone to sana... "thank you sis..." he smiled...
"Abdul m going..." he declared firmly... Abdul can see moisture in his buddy's eyes... So he patted his back... And wisphers in his ears...
"go and get your nonu back..." and shows him thumbs up...
Abdul had known that
"Jalal is incomplete without Jodha..."

*****

Vina glance at her sister's phone which starts buzzing flashing the name 'sana' on the screen...
After finding out about her sister's affair with some boy... She had snatched her phone from her... "Jodha... Jodha..." vina shouted her sister's name...
Jodha ran towards her di's room... "yes di??"
Vina slide the phone towards her and got busy in her laptop..."see some sana is calling..."
Jodha looks at the phone confusingly... Why the hell sana is calling her and that too at the odd hours???
Shrugging her thoughts aside the confused girl picked up her phone... "hello" she says slowly slipping outside the her sister's room...
No reply from other side is just irked her... "hey sana... Are you there??" she asked annoyed... This girl is testing her patience... She is really very frustrated with the taunts from her maa and di... And now she...
"nonu..." an angry voice came from the other end...
She froze hearing her favourite nickname from the only person who has kept it... But damn his anger!!!
She gulped hard and cut the call immediately... Though they have talked before a lot but now... Now the situations were different from previous time... And now she doesn't have enough courage to talk to HIM...
Again her phone buzzed but this time the name that is flashing is different ... "jallad" she murmurs and again cut the call...
After 25 calls it has become impossible for her to ignore him... So she picked up this time and shouted annoyingly with tears in her eyes
"I don't want to talk to you..." She is literally crying, he was her support system, her problem solver and he has solution for her damn single problem... But above all that he was her best friend and now she has lost him...
Again her phone buzzed, she picked it up in a planning to give him some piece of mind... But before words left Jodha's mouth... The caller shouted...
"shut up.. Just shut up!!" Jalal is damn angry now... Firstly she broke their friendship and now talking like he is some kind of stalker...
He anyhow compressed his anger, and said in a dark tone... "you better, come down or else it'll not take a second to me to come there..." now the barrier of emotions got broke...

"come down... M here..." jalal hissed angrily, hot tears were rolling down his cheeks... Now her ignorance is testing his patience...
Her whole body shuddered thinking about the aftermath of his actions... What if he really came here?? No! It'll probably turn to be the worstest situation which she has never even dreamed of!!
"M coming..!!" she immediately replied and carefully without anyone noticing rushes down...
*****
He closed his eyes to absorb the emotions that are threatening to fall down anytime in form of tears... He glanced at his watch and waited for Jodha, no HIS nonu, to come down...
"nonu... I can't lose you" he whisper to himself helplessly...
*****
Jodha came out of building, looking around making sure that nobody sees her... Phew and finally she succecded...
She saw him, his back is facing her so she took slow steps towards him... Hearing the slow foot steps, Jalal turned around...
Fear griped her heart... Seeing him so broken and angry... She shuddered when his penetrating gaze pierced through her soft ones... "No one can save me now, god his eyes are scaring me... Something was wrong, god save me from his anger" she thought and headed towards where he is standing...
*****

Sorry if it is boring

Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#280

hey monu am crying while reading the emotions penned so well awesome update dear thumbs up... i always had wish to get such friend...their bonding innocent feelings...still we see such cases in society ...pls updte next chapi soon nd do pm