*Bonds that are Genuine* Updated Epilouge Completed ;)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hola guys
m really feeling so frustrated... 1st studies then some family matters, now that news of JA going of off air pissed me off... So thought of writing something... Its just a short story containing 5 or 7 shots...

...Plot...

It had been 3 months, both were in same class but didn't bother to notice the presence of other, they were strangers till now...

But the inter school chess competition that had been conducted a month ago, had brought these strangers closer...

The bad boy facade which he depicted infront of all is far away from his real self...

The shy and reserved girl which he thought that she is, is nothing but a bundle of joy and bubbliness...

She is his sunshine which illuminates his world of darkness, darkness of lonliness, the one who mostly face' and can control his major anger issues...

For her he is her permanent heater who breakes the ice inside her, ice of varied emotions, that she can only share with him...

They are friends, best of friends...

For him she is his "Nonu" and For her he is her "Jallad"...

They had kept their friendship hidden from world, only some trustworthy people know about them...

They worship the bond that they share...

Does this bond will break their other relations?? Does the people around them will able to break their bond??

What happen when she will his become his obssession??


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sorry guys wrote it in just 30 mins... Tell me if it is good, bad or worst...
So should i continue??
Pls like and cmnt if u find it worth reading...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Teaser for chap 1

"come down... M here..." jalal hissed angrily, hot tears were rolling down his cheeks...
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Fear griped her heart... Seeing him so broken and angry... She shuddered when his penetrating gaze pierced through her soft ones... "No one can save me now, god his eyes are scaring me... Something was wrong, god save me from his anger"
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Her bruises pained a lot in the cold shower... salty droplets and water were rolling down her cheeks... She can deny the fact that " His pain gave her pain..."
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yipee me first monu
awesome plot dear
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me second
Neetu u didn't told me that you are going to write another story😡
khair update soonish
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I didn't liked ur plot neetu but then also u have to update it because I loved ur concept🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update karna trz I have to pm na neetu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice plot continue soon eagerly waiting for first chapter pm me thanks for pm don't be late
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats neetu for new story .
amazing concept.
really love the prologue.
eager to read it.
update soon nd
thnks for pm.

bt dear plz update ur other 2 stories too...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept dalooo😃
But what about your previous story 😲sweetooo.plz do the both continue 😳

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