#1 JJ SS: Three steps above heaven CLOSED - Page 39

Originally posted by: swriter

Wow bro and sis 🤣 plz update soon buddy

Originally posted by: 155pari

Ya sure... I'd be glad to call you 'Nidhi'😃

me too 😃

Superb update namita
Loved reading it dear ,wow jalal is so protective of jodha,:-) :-)
Jalal realised his feelings for Jo and now he wants to propose her but Jo is royally ignoring hehehe he deserves this .
Jodha and her father convo ,it was too emotional and unknowingly Jo confesses her love .
NNow jalal wants to apologise
Let's see how he will do that
Continue soon
Thanks for pm :-) :-)

Lovely update
Waiting for jalal's confession
Thanks for pm

My dear Pari,

First things first. You do this Mills and Boon stuff very well. My problem, as you know, is that I am, at my age, not interested in romantic fluff. What impressed me was your strikingly well done descriptions of nature - the sea, the sky, the luminiscence on the waters. I was thus glad to see a couple of paras of this kind in this Chapter 11, and I hope you will keep this up, if only for my sake!

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: 155pari

Chapter 11

Awesome Update Namita..

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Pari,

First things first. You do this Mills and Boon stuff very well. My problem, as you know, is that I am, at my age, not interested in romantic fluff. What impressed me was your strikingly well done descriptions of nature - the sea, the sky, the luminiscence on the waters. I was thus glad to see a couple of paras of this kind in this Chapter 11, and I hope you will keep this up, if only for my sake!

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: Geetbaala

Awesome Update Namita..

Enjoyed reading ur update dear.

So finally Jalal realized his feelings for Jo and he deserves her ignorance..how badly he ruined her day..Now he has to work hard to manofy her.

It was an amazing read.

Thanks for the pm dear.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: lovespari

me too 😃

Originally posted by: avika444

Superb update namita
Loved reading it dear ,wow jalal is so protective of jodha,:-) :-)
Jalal realised his feelings for Jo and now he wants to propose her but Jo is royally ignoring hehehe he deserves this .
Jodha and her father convo ,it was too emotional and unknowingly Jo confesses her love .
NNow jalal wants to apologise
Let's see how he will do that
Continue soon
Thanks for pm :-) :-)