!!!!!Salim-Anar!!!! SS note pg8 updated

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

kya bolu me 😆 dis jalal m nt able 2 digest 😆 😉 bt nywyz stry seems interesting do continue further wil b luking frwrd... 😉

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Vtui

@Vtui

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

CHAPTER 2

Ruk begum asked Hoshiyar to take that girl to rakasa area "provide her the room windows and doors opening 2 wards stroll area and ask those rakasas to make her ready for the night" She shud be all ready with all mannerisms and rules, before sending to his room. Also ask security personal not to allow any one in his room , not even jodha begum", she emphasized
"Ji Malika_e_azam" hoshiar bowed his head and asked the girl to follow him .
The rakasas bathed her in warm flower scented water. she was tired of long journey, she tried to feel refreshed.
After bath they starting applying makeup layers to her, instructing her at the same time , how to behave when king is there.
Always remember, u r with king of India, not a common man from home next door. She was listening carefully ,becuming more scared with new and latest instructions. She had never been in such type of relation before. It was merely her bad luck that she had landed in such a situation. She was from an average class family living in village in Kashmir, when the earthquake uprooted the village only five months back. The next thing she knew was that, she was picked up by luteras,who transported her to Kabul . They were a herd of ten . She was the one selected by Kabul Harem Manager, then given the dance training.

"Never try to do anything which can mean neglecting his feelings, the instructions were end-less.
BTW you r one of those luckiest persons who wud get HIS closeness just for u and that too on ur first ever day over here. Look at us except few of us we cud never got a glimpse of him despite being his ladies . All of our life has gone wasted just to catch a glimpse of him. We do get ready night in and night out in hope of a sudden invitation which hardly ever turn out for one of us.
They let her wear harem dress [Arabic style , a very small top front buttoned hugging her body along with slits shalwar as trousers (sort of one jinny wears) in red silk and covered her head with a red nakab of shean material which was flowing down to cover her face and upper body.. She was luking very cute.
"Always remember, HE can touch u any where , don't get freaked or put any resistance to HIS touch and never restrict HIS advancing movements, hardly matters u like it or not " The instructions were going on and on . do use ur brain to satisfy his needs as per his demand
It was nearly 10pm when the dance-daru party which has stated at 6 pm has finished. Every one including shahenshah was drunk a lot.
Jodha Begum had remained too busy in getting cleared the family party mess which was so fun for the whole day.The family and children has enjoyed for the whole long day with lots games,food and fun. That was courtesans who wanted to hold the men party in evening time to celebrate his 40 th . Sure he approved, being always fond of drinks and ladies. It's just because so much happened in his life that he tried to remain away from them , on Jodha's advice. But now life gone smooth, he has stated missing his old days. Jodha cud only say these words before he went to join the men-party "shahenshah hum Aapka wt karenge aapke kuksh me" Seeing his behaviour was a bit changed these days.

Now Jodha was approaching fast to jalal s room when moti told her that party is over now
To her surprise she was stopped to enter in his chamber? "But , u know, whom u dare stopping . " she was real angry at the guards. "Muaf kijiyega Rani-sahiba but malika begum ne kahlvaya hai Ki shahenshah Ka yahii hukum hai." Instead of going back to her room, she thought it better to clear the matter from RUK Begum.

Kya aap abhi tuk nahi jan payi Jodha begum ki mard hote hi aise hain unko full jindagi k liye apne pallu Se bandna itna asan nahi hai. woh toh Jalal cared u so much for so many yrs because u provide him with Crown-prince, which I cud never do, nahi to yahan ladies ka jadu Jalal per kuch days yah to kuch months hi hota Hai

This is royality living and phir itne old b nahi hue hain Ki apni young life Ko enjoy nahi kir saken.Accha abh aap hi batayen woh yahan ane-wali her ladki ko behan begum ya beti to nahi bana sakte na.

BTW if u think it from Jalal point of view, If he can support so many unsupported poor ladies for their whole life by staking his life on risk going in wars to expand the empire and wealth for them so asking to spend a night from a rare one of those off and on with him is not a big deal , this is his pervilage being a king. and he has never gone to ask them to be his ladies. Either they themselves becum part of Harem to enjoy a royal life or they were gifted and many times war-widows, without any other support. I am sure if u go and ask those ladies, their reply would be preference to spend an occasional night with a man rather spending every other night with a different man.

Moreover it's only fair for ladies as well at least few of those get a chance to come near to him rather than spending their whole life without seen a man ever. Jodha did not feel like to argue with ruku begum ,so she returned to her room with sad face.
While he was returning to his chamber,the guards were saluting him with their heads bowed down. He went inside and saw her standing waiting in a corner in a bright red Arabic Dress.

Wud u help me in taking off my dress. He said, his voice polite.

Quitely she came to help him from behind.He turned around facing 2wards her so the coat can be taken off from sleeves.

Whats ur name
"Nadira" she replied in slow voice

He has gone to sit on bed, his back supported by thick pillows. As instructed by ladies, she remembered to make and serve him a drink.

I heard u r a gud dancer" he sort of enquired her. holding her by her arm and pulling her close , keeping his hand on her top form over her sheen Kakab. and pressing his hand there.

She bowed her head "Ji Shahenshah I know dancing". She replied meekly scared and still.

"OK-show me ur dance". She followed the orders. She had fine dance skills, but she forgot to shed her clothes during dance steps as told by ladies, or may be she did not do it intentionally.

Nevertheless Jalal enjoyed her dance, not only that, he was impressed by her long slandered legs which kept popping during dance. She was very beautiful ,tall and slim, with her flat tucked in tummy, she was luking just awesome.He threw his pearl necklace 2wards her. She collected it and hooked it by the side of her Salwar.He was now luking her with total lust. He wanted to see her more, but was surprised to hear that slow voice asking" Shahanshah kya mai ja sakti huun;" Jalal instead of replying her, clapped two times, a guard appeared . Hoshiyar ko pesh kiya jaye. khwajasira was sent message , who came running in no time

" How come this girl is sent without teaching her the harem tactics." he barked at Hoshiar. Hoshiar got firghtened at the yelling voice of Jalal.

Muje muaf kijiye shahenshah, issko sub bata diya gya thha. but shayad first day k karan bhuul gayi hogi. saying he turned 2wards her immediately.Hoshiyar was whispering to her in very angry tones, but she was becuming more like a statue. Hoshiar went around towards her back , he pulled her top from behind with jerk, it got torn and fell of on floor. You shud have been out of clothes while dancing, now imagne only what's written in ur fate. Her sheen Nakab was still covering her. He pushed her closer to KINg's bed side pushing her constantly from back.

Ok u can go," came the orders for Hoshiar and he left bidding Salalm to King

Jalal ripped her off her Nakab, the last covering on her face and upper body. And fixed his gage on all her naked body "Anarkali" a word escaped from his mouth while looking at her face .

By now her face was gone white with fear. She was unable to even express gratitude to him for the title offered to her again as instructed by the ladies to follow manners.

He extended his hand to feel her open bs and lifted his face towards her face to see her expression. Her eyes were full of tears which she was trying to control hard not to flow down. His face-xpression changed to frowning "Go Away" He yelled waithdrawing his hand. Very afraid, she cud not move inches. I said "Go Away" He yelled at top of his voice. She hurriedly wrapped herself in Nakab,lifted the torn out top from the floor before leaving his room

Edited by Vtui - 10 years ago

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Guys i m very sorry to shatter ur image of high character Jalal who was totally on control of Jodha begum but that's what only I can think of to star my Salim-Anar love story based on some imagination some Wikipedia search of Anar and some on concubines fate of that era from English movies/serials
Who were the most victimised women when a king would win/ loose war
Anytime if u guys feel offended , from 180 degree turn of Jalal character , just tell me and based on likes/ dislikes I will immediately stop the story

Edited by Vtui - 10 years ago

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Vtui

In a way better, atleast Jodha was spared from making his night-arrangements😉

May be he thought Jodha would be hurt if she is asked to make such arrangements..or kick him😆

Ruks is the right person for the job.She doesn't love him as Jodha does..Loves ony her audha.

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Vtui
Guys i m very sorry to shatter ur image of high character Jalal who was totally on control of Jodha begum but that's what only I can think of to star my Salim-Anar love story based on some imagination some Wikipedia search of Anar and some on concubines fate of that era from English movies/serials
Who were the most victimised women when a king would win/ loose war
Anytime if u guys feel offended , from 180 degree turn of Jalal character , just tell me and based on likes/ dislikes I will immediately stop the story

Yes its truly horrible to even imagine the plight of concubines in that era😭

Its a good attempt to write something on them.

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Namita

@155pari

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Intresting prologue... But i dont like this akbar... Does he really love jodha?

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: nhbr

May be he thought Jodha would be hurt if she is asked to make such arrangements..or kick him😆
Ruks is the right person for the job.She doesn't love him as Jodha does..Loves ony her audha.

😆 😆

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: nhbr

May be he thought Jodha would be hurt if she is asked to make such arrangements..or kick him😆
Ruks is the right person for the job.She doesn't love him as Jodha does..Loves ony her audha.

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Nice update.

Poor Jodha😭 and devil Ruks😡

Feeling bad for Nadira..she is so young..away from family..uper se classes on how to behave with the King.

Jalal..Jalal😡

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harsh

@sirat.kaur

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

nice...but I totally hate this jalal
does he really love jodha or not????by reading this ch I think that he only list for Jo not love...poor jodha...her husband is spending night with another women ...how cheap.how can he give responsibility to his wifes to ready a another woman to whom he want to spend a night...how much hurt they will be ...especially jodha as she love him whole heartly as his other begums want only his attention n auda ...
update ASAP... eagerly waiting... pls don't be late... n thanx for pm.

Edited by sirat15 - 10 years ago

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