With out you I M Nothing

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Hey guys my new os . So be ready to get bored. and do comment and lyk also n thanks for inspiring me



At Mumbai airport 12:30 pm
a girl almost 23 coming out of the with one of the famous and young business tycoon Surya her fianc and friend too. She does not love him but for the sake of her mother she z marrying him. bt surya loves jodha from the day he met with her at party in US . Surya and Jodha get introduced by each other at one business party they both were young as the party was for businessmen their family's are invited coz both of there fathers r good businessmen and lately became friends too . surya meet jodha there and from dat day he started loving her bt secretly . after that they met in many parties n became friends
one day jodha's father met wid an accident and died on spot from dat day suryas father took care of her fathers business . Before one month they both get engaged coz jodhas mother want her to get married and she think that surya is the best guy for her. surya can do anything for jo that can bring smile on her angelic face But jodha dint smile wholeheartedly since the day she left India the day she left her best buddy JALAL her ONLY love .
People came there to recieve jodha and surya as jodhas family lived in India years ago and her fathers business one branch is also in India . They both went there and welcomed by people wholeheartedly and sit in their car and driver took them to SV singh villa jodha's home. When she enterd in her house she get lost in past memories of her family and jalals family . to whom she tried to ignore but cant as they wrmere her precious moments. jodha dint know when surya came and stand beside her he kept his hand on her shoulder too comfort her little bit he knew about her past but not whole ( about her and jalals love) . she looked at him and smiled at him. then they both went to their respective rooms for rest after resting jodha came out of the room and saw her old maid standing in a kitchen she went to her and gave her a tight hug and said
jo ammo .. how r u
maid -baby ji i m fyn .. you became beutiful and gorgeous on which jodha slightly blush
jodha talk her little then she saw surya coming to the hall.she went to him and aasked him about there business meetings schedule he replied that they are having 1 meeting tomorrow at 2 pm then after 2 days




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they both talk about business meeting presentation and their day went lyk this soon night arrive jodha and surya having their dinner when surya spoke that he want to see india want to roam mumbai to which jodha agreed that so they decided after there last meeting they both vl go for outing at taj gate way n many other places . after dinner both went for sleep
In morning at dine jodha was serving breakdast to surya. when he suddenly asked about her friends of india and specially jalal his sudden question about jalal startled jodhA which was nit unnoticed by surya. so to change the topic he asked her about presentation to which she replied that every thing is ready . after that they both had their breakfast in silence . and get busy in their work and have some talks surya always cracks his jokes to make jodha laugh when ever she get upset.
soon the time arrived and they both get ready for the meeting and attend their meeting with singhnias and finished it with doing best deal ( sorry guys i rarely know about business as m a medical student both r opposite poles :p) after that they went to cafeteria for having some refreshment after their long hectic schedule they were sitting on there table when jodha saw one guy entering in cafe by seeing that guy her heart skip few beats as if z this man known to her same thing happened with that guy when he saw beautiful girl staring at him . (this guy is none other than jalal but as there family broke the bond with eachorher when they both were young so they cant recognised to each other)


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Nice start continue this one and other one also make it fast please plzz don't be late
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Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Nice start continue this one and other one also make it fast please plzz don't be late

i hve akready pisted my first os it z on two pages 1 and page 2 check it dear and hit lyk and comment too
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Finish the os cum short scene please plzz
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He took his seat table number 34 as table 33 was already taken by jo n surya his face was facing to jodha and jos face also facing to him they both were continously staring each other both wre lost in each other but there staring session was interrupted by a sound of falling breaking if glasses and shouting of a girl on waiter both come to their senses when jalal heard a voice he rolled his eyes and rubbed his temple by his index finger he knew that this voice is belong to none other than ruks . he get up from his seat and went there where this scene was going on to stop this crap after that he told ruks to clean her dress n she went to washroom then again jallal lost in admiring jo bt came bck to the real world by the kiss of ruks though he dint lyk ruks but he always go for outing with ruks only for sake of his mother only coz she wants jallal to have someone in his lyf to whom he can share his pain sorrow happiness but jalal does not want anyone in his life after the departure of jo and her family to US he didnt make any friend except one that was his and jos friend from jos time inly named abdul.
he only shares his pain to abdul somewhere abdul was having this hope that one day jo vil come and maje his friends life full of happiness and soon their misunderstanding vl be cleared
when ruks kiss jalal jo feel suffocated at that tym she feel tinge of jealously and pain in her which was not unnoticed by jalal . he shrugged off ruks and told her to take her seat . here surya orders two cup of coffee with some snacks and they both started eating it but in between jalal and jodha was stealing glances to each other.
Jodha and surya were having there snacks when one female voice heard by jo she was none other than her best friend moti ( after leaving india jo cut ol her connections from india but she remain in touch wid moti they chat onlyn on skype through imo ) moti called her name jodha to which surya and jodha looked at the direction from where the voice came they both stood up jodha gets happy after seeing moti her happiness has no boundations same was with moti . moti te jo and hug her then turned to surya and asked him how he is. While the person sitting to the table next to jo and surya having mixed expressions on his face that was jallal when moti called out jos name firstly she called her jodha then jo to which jodha listen and looked at her he was seeing his love his best friend his miss candy cane ( actly my frnz used to call me by this name) after so many years she has turnd vry gorgeous . his happiness has bo boundation while ruks was feeling jealous when jallal was staring at jo actly she also herd jos name at the same tym she was angry and affraid too angry on jallal and affraid of seeing jo in india
But then she saw a guy standing in front of jo facing his bck to ruks she tried too have a look on this guy but all went in vein
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surya went for paying the bill and moti asked jo that did jalal know about her in india to which she nodded negatively motis question brings jo to her past she remember how jalal accused him by saying that he regret y he make her his friend y he spend time with her y he share every thing wid her she z good for nothing she can only cheat her friends she does not love their friendship but love money and accused her for many things she also know that rukiya has done this coz she always jealous of her but when she tried to tell about the truth to jalal but jalal dint trust her and tell her to get lost from his sight coz of that their parents also broke the bond jus coz of rukiyas family rukiyas mother told hamida that jos father want to take all your money so they r using his daughter firstly they dint listen to ruks parents bt then they shoewd some fake vedios and editted photos on which they trust them and broke ol relations wid singh family and jo parents takes hr to US
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jo came to her senses and saw surya calling her she say bye to moti and went to surya to head their home jalal also went his home bt he become restless so he called to abdul and asked him to come and mert him abdul came to jalals home and went to his room he saw jalal lost somewhere that he didnt even noticed his presence abdul calld him he cme to the reality and saw abdul n welcomed him then abdul curiously asked about way he called him all of a sudden . jallal told everything that had happened in cafe and told him about the guy that was wid jo and asked him to fynd about this guy abdul did that was told by jalal and in 2 days he get ol informatn about jos pst 10yrs life and about surya and jodha about her fathers death also
here jodha also not getting peace she was continously thinkng bout moti questn and about the she saw in cafe her two days went in this restlessness while on the other side surya was planning to propose jo for marriage with the help of moti he planned and book that xafe only n organised party in that cafe (actly that was cafe ,+ rastrauant ) after there meeting he was going to propose jo for marriage
abdul went to jallal office wen he enterd in his cabin he saw jallal was nt there he was in meeting so abdul wait for jallal wen jallal came back to his cabin he saw abdul roaming here n there curiously having roll of paper in his hand he asked him to sit they both sat and abdul told him each n everything about jodha abou her father about har and suryas relation jalal gets shoked to the core and then abdul handed him the paper he read that paper and get irritated without thinking a once he rushed to jos house and rings the bell he saw his angle standing infront of him he dint wait for her to ask anything he just took her and dragged her to her room she was in shock she z not getting wat z happening wid her wat this guy z doing at her home y he z dragging her lot of question goibg in her min


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something she tried to ask him bt she find herself in his arms she also unknowingly wrapped her arms around him aftr dat dey get apart she was feeling guitly on her action y she hug him she didnot even let surya hugged her easily then y this man bt getting some courage she asked him in angry tone how he ce here how he dare to touch her no one can touch her exept her would be husband this make jalal hell angry he grabbed her by her arms and pinned her in wall asked her how could she love nyone one els wen she z only his by saying this he started kissing and nibbling her neck . jo vas shoked she pushed him n gave a tight slap on his face then asked him how z he to say her his . he replied how can she forget him ven she spend her most important moments wid him fight wid him playd wid him by now jodha understood that he z none other than HER jalal they both hugged each other and kissed each other bt jodha came to her senses n asked him y he again came her life after ruining everything not trusting her accusing her for what she has not done
then jalal said sorry to her he explained that how he get manipulated by ruks family how they wash their brain how he get sad ven she left india
jodha was listening eveything to him silently bt then she rememberd the incident in cafe and girl kissing him which makes her angry she geabbed his color and asked him that wat dat girl was doing with him to which he smirked and said that she z ruk his gf this make her more angry and she asked him to leave bt he catch her and started kissing her o her neck and on her face bt she was struggling to come out of his grip the more she try more he tightens his grip on her
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nice story dear.
update soon😊

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