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Posted: 10 years ago
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now she gave up and responded him with equal passion due to short of breadth they get apart and looked at eachother wid love but now something hit in jallals mind and was about to go wen jo held him and ask him were he z going he said that he vl meet her at cafe only he told her a time at 4 pm and then he leave to ruks home for completing his rest work to punish ruk n her family members who conspire to make jo fall in his eyes and suffer her family this much he went there nd exposed rukiya and her family in front of his fAmily and punished them by now his family come to knw the truth and they also came to know about jo in india
at 3:55 jodha went to cafe she looked her surroundings n find it decorated according to her taste but she thought dat jallal did it n became happy that he still remember her choice after 5 minutes jallal also came there they both looked eachother woth love suddenly surya came infront of jodha and hugged her she was shocked with this act and looked at jalal who was controling his anger then suddenly jodha push surya from her and said that she want to say something while surya also said same he think dat jo came here for the reason he is here (but his bad luck he was thinking that today he vl make jo his forevr but today he vl lost her forever ) jo said that firstly she want to say but surya didnt gave her a chance he kissed her on her lips which make jalal more angry as earlier he grabbed surya and hit him on his face n said how dare u to tuch her surya who was shocked with sudden punch came to his senses after hearing his voice now its suryas turn he also hit jallal by now both started fighting hiting each other every one gathered there and jo was crying bt no one came there to stop them n jallal hit surya soo much in his anger he saw knife lying on a table beside cake he took the knife and tried to insert in suryas bt jo grabbed his hand and snatched the knife and gave him a tight slap on his right due to which jallal shocked and surya smiled she helped surya to getting up and then faced to jallal surya was still looking at her thinking that about her next step but wat he saw that shocked to the core he saw jodha was kissing jallal on his lips and jallal also kissing her they broke the hug then she said
jo - m sorry i slapped u
ja- but wat about kiss now u vl say sorry for this also
jo slightly blush and hugged him and said that nevr take this step again surya was again get shocked he tried to make them apart bt then he heard jo saying that WITHOUT U M NOTHING JALAL as soon as he heard jalal from jos mouth he feels he lost evey thing and halal also said that I LOVE U JODHA
surya feels defeated bt he understand that jo never love him she only like him as a friend so he left from there without disturbing lovebirds
n here jalal also said WITHOUT U NOTHING JO


phew completed ... let me know that disdu enjoy it or not comment plz and lyk buttom also
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
very nice update dear.😊
keep writing dear.want more os's from u now😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice is continue ur work i want more os from u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome
awesome
awesome
awesome
write more and more dr..and congrats for became a good writer..loved ur stories very much dr..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: savindi.db

awesome
awesome
awesome
awesome
write more and more dr..and congrats for became a good writer..loved ur stories very much dr..

thank u sooo much savindi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Taklema

nice story dear.
update soon😊

updared
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome dear
plz try to write more n more
try to write an ff coz ur really gud in writing dear😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os dear
i liked it very much
waiting for more such os from u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bada samajdar tha surya tho hehehe
loved your os dear
awesome one
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os dear... pm me to from next work...

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