TH# 3 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' CH6(Pt 4 TSR) PG:40(27 NOV 2015) - Page 22

I am slightly sad that after a long wait... I wanted a longer scene for Akdha..

Nice Update...jj along with troup reached ajmeer palace...jo missing her family...shivani's story was good now...jo planning something with the help of story...nazir visiting ajmeer nd bhairam khan wil acompany i/o maham...continue soon nd do pm

Hi rasika 😊 I always loved urs story nd was following, just couldn't be active in da forum . Urs story completely is different from other historical stories even from da history, that makes it very interesting😳 both jo nd jalal r unique, intelligent, adorable😳 I love da way of urs writing 😃plz do continue nd pm me 👏

Hey Rasika🤗

Dear Rasika!
Thank you very much, that you sent me the update! t is very interesting and really I want to read more (and somewhat quicker ...😳).

YAYYY!! It is just an awesome, fascinating and an wonderful update 😃 😳 I truly loved it! Although joja moments were less but still the update is worth reading 😉 The way jodha is planning to find the secret places of the ajmer castle and the way shivani tells the story of the dancer and that the castle is cursed is literally building up my suspense! 🥱
Thanks for the pm! 😉 And do update the next part soon 😃

Awesome update
Jo was very naughty in childhood
Shivani's story is very nice
Like jj interaction
So nashir will come to Ajmer
Now story will get more interesting
Waiting for the next update update soon

superb update dear...
so jodha is looking all around to find a way out... nd d way jalal asked her was superb...
shivani narration was lovely... she was scared nd scared other to...
nd I liked maham nd bk talk to...
update next part soon nd thanks for pm...

Sorry for late comment...
Well I m just bewildered... shocked n amused as well by the course of this beautiful tale...
Di you always surprise me with your writing skills... n I loved the way jodha exploded...
Why do I get a feeling that soon the ghost of the dancer is going to be awake... The ghost will run through the corridors n passages of the palace... but that ghost will be our cunning princess... jodha...
Well I can be wrong... n I will be glad if I m wrong... just got this thought on jodha's comment that she needs shivani's anklets...
Gosh these wazir-e-ala/alia... They irritate the hell out of me... I always despise traitors too much...

Well I am excited to find out what will jodha do of those anklets... plz make my suspicion wrong n surprise me once again... well now I am not surprised that you surprise me always... anyway thanks for the pm didu... n update soon