TH# 3 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' CH6(Pt 4 TSR) PG:40(27 NOV 2015)

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deepa111

@deepa111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Awesum update rasika 👏

Really penned down well.
Story is going interesting more n more
Waiting eagerly for nxt part.
Update soon!!

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GurKaur

@GurKaur

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Interesting chapter and very well written...enjoyed reading it. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Pls make it fast.

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Deepa

@Deepasub

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Wow! wonderful update after a long time.👏

The story within the story was cute as told by Shivani.

somewhere you have roped in the story of Chandramukhi, but nicely done dear.

Cant imagine the escape plan of Jo & her punishment when caught.

Its a cat & mouse game now.

Please do not delay your next update.

Edited by Deepasub - 9 years ago

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Ambidextrous

@Ambidextrous

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#234

awesome update di

after a very long time

loved it ,shivani's story

lets see how jodha manages to escape

continue soon

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meera

@meeramiss18

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Awesome update

loved reading it

plz cont soon

thnks 4 d pm dear

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Rasika29

@Rasika29

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: Kutty58
I am slightly sad that after a long wait... I wanted a longer scene for Akdha..
Oh well.. I know the story cannot be about them always... 😆

Oh I understand totally...sorry if you are disappointed but as you have said already with only two of them story won't move forward...😳

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Rasika29

@Rasika29

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: rima4ever
outstanding update

Thanks Dear...😊

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Rasika29

@Rasika29

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA
Nice Update...jj along with troup reached ajmeer palace...jo missing her family...shivani's story was good now...jo planning something with the help of story...nazir visiting ajmeer nd bhairam khan wil acompany i/o maham...continue soon nd do pm

Thanks Rani for reading and commenting...😃
Yes Jo is planning many things...
Nasir will reach Ajmer at right time...😉 leading to much awaited prologue...

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#239

hi rasika... h r u...? u seems ti b v busy... 😉 anyways as usual lovely update... 😳 akdha's scene was less but still njoyed their nok jhok... 😆 😉 so now jodha is triygn to find a secret place so that both d sisters can have an easy escape... 😉 I loved shivani's story telling part she is indeed good at xpressing 😉 d maids were truly engrossed and believed her story as told bt her dadisa... 😳I fetl d dancer's suicide story v interesting... and u have jodha and her sis getting a royal treatment from jalal... 😉 I think adham and his mom maham will never sudhrofy I guess... 😆 she is shrewd bt adham is bewakoof opp of his mom... 😆 anywyz m eagerly waiting fr d next update want to know how it unfolds... 😉 moreover want to see if shareef gets to meet jodha and his reactions and obviously our hero jalal's reaction too...want to see his possessiveness... 😆 😉 update soon... 😳

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Rasika29

@Rasika29

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: sonnet87
Hi rasika 😊 I always loved urs story nd was following, just couldn't be active in da forum .
>>Hello dear...I am glad you decided to break the silence...😃 welcome to KOD thread...🤗

Urs story completely is different from other historical stories even from da history, that makes it very interesting😳 both jo nd jalal r unique, intelligent, adorable😳 I love da way of urs writing 😃plz do continue nd pm me 👏
>>Thanks dear...☺️ It is this enthusiasm of all of you that keeps me going(all though with lot of delay 😆)
JJ in this story are everything we want them to specially Jo...
Keep reading and commenting...😃

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