~Revenge~ Thread-3 (THREAD CLOSED)

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

congo shongo... wer is update?????

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Congrats for new thread dear..

Update soon.

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Neetu

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+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

...Chapter - 29...

As soon she heard the sound of closing door ... Jodha broke into sobs... She is broken badly, her already shattered soul got more tormented...
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Jalal was aimlessly driving in he himself knows which direction... Tears were flowing from his black brown orbs, his eyes were hurting badly... He immediately stopped in an empty lane, this was a complete new jalal ... He clutched staring tightly and kept his head on it, tightly shut his eyes to stop the flow of salty droplets which are not leaving his eyes... He knows just because of his insecurities he had hurted her and himself too... He cried and cried and cried till his whole energy got flushed out his body... Some moments of solitude helped him to gain some courage... He ignited the engine and accelerated towards the desiered direction...
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jalal reached to the third floor and knocked the door... A girl opened it and gave him a confused look... Jalal pushed her a little and entered the house... "jalal..." girl annoyingly rolled his eyes... " ruqs i hurted her... I destroyed her" he was continously blabbering the same thing again and again... Ruqu got a hint but an other disturbed soul came... Jalal eyes went red seeing him... " jalal what you have done now.." he clutched jalal's collar, jalal got confused "hey shubh leave me man..." he shouted... Shubh left him and said while looking in his eyes "leave her boy... She deserves better" jalal pushed shubh, the force was great that shubh fall out of gate... Hearing voices all the residents got crowded to see what happen but jalal can't control his anger... " biwi hai meri, just look her once and i'll snatch your eyes from you" jalal hissed by holding his neck tightly.. Shubh got problem in breathing so he pushed jalal with the left force... But jalal got misbalanced and fall down from stairs...
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Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago

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Sona bhatt

@Bittu94rawat

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Fynly dear ne update kr diya...

Nyc update bt hoping for long one...koi na betr luk next tym...grt updte...jalu's anger baap re baap...n our poor jo... ;(
thnx for updte dear

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Some times he behaves like he loves her a lot... Some times most weird... Was he confused about his feelings whether he loves her more or hates her ..and feeling guilty hurting her..why he punishing her?.. And mostly himself.

omg he fell from staircase..😲

What happens next.. I know Jo will nurse his wounds by her love and care. 😉Isn't it neetu...?

Its awsm update dear.