Registan Ka Gulab Thread 3 : Chapter 11 Part 2 Thread closed - Page 55

Thanks bhavani

Di superb writing😊

awsm blossom chappy thanks 4 d pm

Didu... first of all I m sorry... really very very very very sorry for late reading n comment... I m in hostel... so hope u understand...
Awesome... no... it was flawless... seriously...
I m amused on reading how confused jalal is... he tries his best to hurt jodha... he hurts her successfully... but after that he always laments for doing so...
aww... he loves to play games... now when the real cruel n cunning princess jodha of amer will show him how games are played he is surely going to suffer through the hell...tch tch tch... I pity you The great Jalalludin Mohommad Akbar...
Awwiiee jodha is so hurted...
Di you are creating too much suspence... but I like it... even I m doing it in my stories n I m being awarded with warnings to reveal it soon...
Well I m really curious to know what sin this confused-in-love Emperor has done... I hope he hasn't done a unforgivable deed...
Anyway thanks for pm... update when u get time...
N PLZ take care of urself... luv u didu...

awesum ,super,mindblowing update di 👏
wonderfully written each n every part of update.
seriously di, hatsoff to u .
really the way u written is outstanding .
each emotion either of love,hurt,jealousy ,pride,humilation ,revenge pain or guilt u wrote mindblowing .no one can match up u in this .
just luv u di.
such an amazing update.difficult to say which part is the best till now.all r equally awesum .each update is like its the best from the previous one bt update after update just craziness to read only increases.

u not only focus radha n jalal bt others characters too .u amazing handle all other characters play very well .

now what shouldi say about update i'm speecless bt can't hold myself to express n praising ur writing.

ruks already pissed off with radha n now jalal's weird behaviour driving her crazy.she is actually not understanding why jalal suddenly come close to her its not becoz of he want her bt becoz of radha only.
n that witch ruks totally blind in pride n power that she is not understanding anything nd only cursing radha n thinking to kill her .( nd saying it infront of jalal) she already did a crime.nd it angered jalal to an extent that he warned ruks in a deadly tone that scared her like hell.bt for jalal its not enough to left with her warning bt had to give punishment for thinking to harm his radha.
bt i really don't like his punishment.for him its a right punishment for her bt for her it increases her misconception that jalal only want her n start falling in love with her .huh...
may b he is wild during make out session bt he only using ruks to satisfy his manly ego about the refusal..
when he accept that he have a heart n that fallen in love with radha then why is not accepting to left his ego n win her heart .
he is just ignoring her, make her jealous which hv only reverse effect on her ..now she is only thinking that he never love n care her only lust her .nd she is now focussing on her mission.
radha is really hurt after listening ruks n jalal close moment n seeing bites on ruks .
otherside jalal ignoring her n poor shahid become prey of his anger.
again n again his ignorance creating rift n confusion inbetween her heart n mind.
jalal keeping eye on her 24*7 nd his spy thought he had a doubt on her silly he .bt its not his fault actually who can think why a shensha spying on a maid
jalal also hurt after knowing that radha listen ruks talks.nd he is insanely walking bare foot in palace.
tansen get to know about jalal situation n advice him to left his ego as only by love n care he only win someone heart.bt how can a shensha a hind understand this small thing .he only knows to win by hook or crook .only win matters to him.
little rahim is more understanding than him.he too undrstanding that he is ignoring her.

ruks arrange moskey for jalal.
all r gathered to listen tansen.tansen dedicate his music jalal intentionlly to describe his feeling without knowing to anyone..
in whole event jalal's gaze fixed on jo.he don't bothered that all r watching him even hb.
radha also stealing glances of him.
little rahim is too fond of radha that he won't her to let her go.he even resay to marry her to keep her always with him .
all r surprised to hear this .n smiled
bt jalal ans that a shensha can't marry an ordinary maid made her more furious.
maham n ruks happy seeing her insult nd specially by jalal.
nd that cheapo adham eyeing on radha.god knows what will jalal do with him.
nd that ruks again humilate her .hb n salima felt bad .n knowing that ruks doing it intentionally he still can't do anything
radha gaze fixed on him that he will support her bt his his silence break all limit of her patience.
first he shows how much he care for her bt now his ignorance ,rudeness ,make her jealous nd not the least letting her humilate infront of all totally shattered her.
however jalal decide to punish ruks for this bt it don't help him to came close radha now.
radha hurt herself to punish jalal by walking on broken glass .jalal guilty for not supporting her bt again for not let her hurt herself he insult het n said to get out from there.
his limitation can't allow him to support her as she is an ordinary maid.
jalal decide to tell her everything after be get her nd give her all love n happiness to her.
bt atleast a relief that he doing only to get radha with her consent .
while radha is totally broken down n now determined to take revenge from jalal not as radha bt princess jodha .
she will do the same he did with her .
she decided to make him jealous to no extent that he willingly forced himself to marry her as maid.
she ready to do anything whether to kiss surya infront of jalal.
wonder what will jalal do then..he can't sit quietly.he surely kill surya for this .
excitement at peak..
seems like upcoming parts r so thrilling.

deseperately waiting for update.

bt first of all di take care of urself n after when u will get completely fine give us a long update.
eagerly waiting for update di.
till take care n keep smiling.
love u di.

nd thnku for pm.

Omg... I am speechless... so many comments... thank U so so much... I will reply quickly...

wonderful update i totally love it

Res. Can't wait to write comment for this one. I am crying blushing angry fully charged up. need time to calm down Bhavuben. sakhat update