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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: sonylalwani
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PM ME part 2 of this chapter
m silent reader of this chp

I am so happy to see UR comment... Are U from Ahmedabad? Do U know any Bhavini???

I MUST SAY THT REGISTAN KA GULAB IS THE BESTEST CHP TIL NOW I HAV EVER CAME ACROSS IN FAN FITION

Omg... Thank U so much😆

I MEAN THE WAY JODHA I.E.,BEING DASI RADHA WHAT GREAT TAUNTS SHE DOES TO SHENSHAH SUPERB MAN

I feel so good after reading UR comment

WITH FULL RESPECT ALSO N BY MAINTAING HIS EGO ALSO

Yap... Radha is true princess

but its a requeat now patience has ended pls post the chp

Hehehe😆
1 more request if u hav time thn pls post daily 1 chp thought smal in size wil also be ok but gap of minths kills our patience serously u r superb

Omg... daily 1 chapter... seriously U gone crazy😆

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: amitaprasad
thanks bhavini! you came back.always smiling while going through RKG.sorry for late comments,it is not my fault,you were inactive for long time and as you know i am a craziest fan of you.i am saying this without reading ,remaining comments after reading.

Amita... Thank U so much😃 I am speechless😳

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#533

Hey Di 🤗

What an update. U deserves this

myriad of emotions blended nicely and served for us.👏

Its a complete package of emotions..👍🏼 I saw his love, his anger, guilt, stubbornness, caring, helplessness, and her love, envy...

Loved and Enjoyed reading each and every bit of the update.❤️

It was so intense Di at some point I could not control my emotions and got tears.😭

Both are passing through hard phase of love.. Where they love each other so intensely but can't express it to each other.

Now it had turned more interesting.. to see Jealousy in Our king..waiting for Surya.. eager to know how his character unfolds and brings our couple more closer.

It will more interesting to see the Strong Jodha character in our Radha.😳

Now waiting for next chappy Di..

U are on medication inspite of that u gave amazing update Di. Thank u.😊

Love u..❤️ take care..Get well soon.😊

Edited by geeta.M - 10 years ago

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Fabulous update bhavini 👏
Enjoyed reading it dear
These emotions r indeed necessary for realisation of their feelings
Will Jo really kiss Surya to make jalal jealous???
Waiting for next chap
And pls update is it hate or love too
Thanks for pm:-) :-)

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: geeta.M
Hey Di 🤗
What an update. U deserves this

myriad of emotions blended nicely and served for us.👏

Its a complete package of emotions..👍🏼 I saw his love, his anger, guilt, stubbornness, caring, helplessness, and her love, envy...

Loved and Enjoyed reading each and every bit of the update.❤️

It was so intense Di at some point I could not control my emotions and got tears.😭

Both are passing through hard phase of love.. Where they love each other so intensely but can't express it to each other.

Now it had turned more interesting.. to see Jealousy in Our king..waiting for Surya.. eager to know how his character unfolds and brings our couple more closer.

It will more interesting to see the Strong Jodha character in our Radha.😳

Now waiting for next chappy Di..

U are on medication inspite of that u gave amazing update Di. Thank u.😊

Love u..❤️ take care..Get well soon.😊

Love U my cutie pie... 😃 I am feeling relived after seeing your comment... 😊 will reply in detail soon

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: avika444
Fabulous update bhavini 👏
Enjoyed reading it dear
These emotions r indeed necessary for realisation of their feelings
Will Jo really kiss Surya to make jalal jealous???
Waiting for next chap
And pls update is it hate or love too
Thanks for pm:-) :-)

I am so happy to see Ur comment... No I don't think so but U know when I am writing I even don't what I am doing... so many time I have done that , plan something and write opposite😆... but Kiss I doubt... may be hug😆

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swatiluthra

@swatiluthra

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#537

Awesome ch dear...
Loved the way jalal is feeling the pain that he is giving to Radha 😊 .. But sad Radha gutted herself n jalal didn't go to her ... Hate ruks 😡
Oh n Rahim is so cute... Wants to marry Radha in order to keep her in Agra forever 😳

Can't wait for surya now... It's time jalal gets jealous now 😆

Continue soon dear

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Rani1965

@Rani1965

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Posted: 10 years ago

#538

I'm at lost for words!!!! The update was simply fabulous. So emotional. God! Both of them are so adamant. The feeling they have for each other, make them do crazy things. Loved Rahim. He's such an angel. He feels for his choti Ammi. That was so beautiful and so was the song.
By the way, thank you for your PM.
Hope you get well soon. Take care.

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#540

Bhavini di 🤗

i was missing strong jodha since last part but I found her atlast in this part😊

Amazing chapter really👏

I enjoyed reading this chapter.. finally jalal confessed his feelings to himself😳

Liked his punishment to ruks.. Very well understood his physical need too but what i loved the most is when he said,I can never hurt radha like this❤️

Loved every bit of this chapter.. The whole chapter is very interesting indeed..😃

Very nicely you wrote that function part.. describing the atmosphere and tansen's music..👍🏼

That song is one of my favs and it's very apt for our love birds..

I can imagine the whole scene during that song..😊

and yes that part too when jalal said,"Listen carefully Shahid, you look too young to die, if you look at Radha ever again, you will never be able to see anything ever again."

I had a good laugh while reading this,poor shahid😆

hmm,loved jalal when he shouted at radha when she intently hurt herself.. and after that jalal's anger.. omg angry and jealous jalal always makes me fall for him ❤️

huh.. and atlast jodha ..😳 I loved the last dialogues of Jo..😉

I am loving this story as the way you are writing this but still i want to say that I love jealous jalal.. and strong jodha.. plz make him jealous to see surya with radha if possible😆

I know the kiss would not be right but atleast one hug plz and she could pretend to kiss him in front of Jalal.. right? 😉😆

love ya and your story dear❤️

plz update soon.. don't make us wait for long

Tkc..🤗

Edited by sharmacatty - 10 years ago