Registan Ka Gulab Thread 3 : Chapter 11 Part 2 Thread closed - Page 52

Bhavini di thank you so much for this lovely update yr...
But mujhe to abhi bhi aapke ff is it hate or love ka hi update chiye yr...
plzzz di pehele WO story complete karo na
ye story bhi superb hai but WO story end tak phucha kr ab aap itna wait mat krwao plzzz off is it hate or love ka bhi ek update dedo short bhi chalega but plzzz update karo

Awesome bhavini diii.. Loved it... Thanx for d pm... Update soon...

Awesome..I read the both parts together. Really ur stories have some magic spell on me. And yeah u will have to write this story till its end because we are not going to lose our interest in ur stories. so keep writing and updating. ...waiting to read the next update nd jealous jalal 😃 thnx for the pm nd yes get well soon [:-)] Nd plz update is it hate or love also along with this

it was long...which is a good thing.. :-)

n most important...take care of urself...n update fast😳

wow di
suprb
amazing chappi
loved it
ja & jo both are going through hell

now ja will face even worse
hehehe

update sooon

I have a request bhavaniji please make Jalal emotionally and tactically stronger than Jodha.other wise he can't be a great king..He won't give up his self respect at any cost

Originally posted by: Swissgerman

I have a request bhavaniji please make Jalal emotionally and tactically stronger than Jodha.other wise he can't be a great king.. He won't give up his self respect at any cost

So far he has not shown weak emotionally... Even though, he wanted to support Radha publicly when Rukaiya shouted at Radha to clean, he kept his silent and when he saw Radha hurt herself, instead of taking her to hakim or carrying her, he shouted at her for her stupidity. He is not weak yet... and probably won't be at least publicly... but when he is alone obviously he is a human and has feelings, he will react accordingly when alone...

So far he is not shown weaker than Jodha. Well may in his thoughts but not in his action.

1. He kicked her out from the palace... Hamida stopped her not Jalal...

2. He changed the law but not for Radha, at least Radha things that... (No one knows why he change the law)

3 In Meena bazar, he didn't gave up... he got what he wanted on his terms and condition. Radha sold the painting even though she was very upset... He wanted to spend night with her... so he played well and won...

4. He proposed her and tried to manipulate her to make her understand this is the best option for her. He didn't bend down... He began to ignore her... to make her realize he kissed Ruku in front of her... for her safety he walked behind her, but she doesn't know that.

5. He punished her, and gave her mental stress for few hours, unfortunately Radha came to know Rukaiya went out with Jalal. Jalal didn't intent to...

6. when Jalal came to know that Radha knows what happened at lake house... he got depressed... and he opened up to Tansen but he didn't disclose much...

7. When other begum were mocking Radha... Jalal had step up... She was with him for that night... he suppose to save her dignity... and in anger, he offered his hand to her... (He is a king and king does have right fall in love... well U can see Salim he is in love courtesan, a dancer...)

8. He has fallen in love with her but not completely otherwise he would not sleep with Rukaiya imagine Radha in her palace... He is slowly progressing... And at least admit to himself that he has fallen for Radha.

I do not think Jalal has bend down enough ... which he suppose to for his love. His Shahenshahi ego is too big.

I don't where to start from👏👏👏, I have read so many stories and books, but none of them were this intense, you put life into characters😛. The way you write, the reader can visualize each instant.😊 Truly, you should think about publishing this story. I have cried seeing not only Jalal and Jodha but Rahim too. Di you certainly deserve appreciation from readers.

The way Jalal and Radha, both shown strong is remarkable. You have to balance on both characters equally.

May be, you will laugh at me, but I enjoyed Ruku and Jalal part👍🏼. Diii Your Jalal is a macho man...😈 I was like, you have shown him so strong, sexually, I enjoyed every line of it. I bet most of the readers loved it too, but shy to admit it. I guess the way you have written gave more impact. Even though nothing happened, like your regular SR, but the effect was same😳. I was flushed di🤣. I was thinking while reading, Radha hoti to kya hota.😆 Par aap ne answer de diya... It would have been different. It shows Jalal loves Radha and care about her more than Rukaiya.

I am glad Rukaiya realized it was out anger, not love, but senseless don't care, I can't believe that how openly she discussed with other begums😲. It was sad😭 Radha heard everything. Jalal ignored her rudely.😡 I hate him.🤢 Best part Gateman... LOL🤣 muje nahi lagta ab who dobara kisi aur ladki ko dekhega.

And that stupid Agent, want to take Jodha in remand. Bevkoof bach gaya warna Jalal uska kya haal karta.

Complete comment later, mummy is calling. Bye love you dii🤗