~JJ FF~||Caught In The Web Of Relationships||ch 4 pg 104(9/5) - Page 24

Originally posted by: mushat

sona Maine comment kar diya ..page no 30 ..
and wedding night pe bhi ..page no bhul gayi :(:(

okay I'll check!!😊

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Good start nice update di😊

thanks meera!!

Originally posted by: harshu27

beautiful update sona... u hav penned dwn so wonderfully I really njoy reading...update soon... 😛

thanks di!! Will update soon!!

Originally posted by: sonali96

Nyc update

Continue soon..

thanks dear!!
I'll surely update soon!!

Originally posted by: ISHIKArocks

Hey dii 😃 I jst read the chappy it was gr8 luved the bonding b/w jalal & moti waiting eagerly to read jo's entry u r terrific writer luved u loads dii 🤗 plz updt soon & thanks 4 the pm...! 😃

u'll get to see more of their bonding in next chap!!
thanks a lot dear!!
will surely update soon!!

Originally posted by: mushat

Resss
edited ..
Sona Congo once again..
superb start ...
I don't know much about Shurya character.. as I didn't read the novel. but in this chapter I can see he is an agyakari beta .
and Hamida is typical Sasuma of 20th century..
I loved the bond between dewar and bhabhi ..though their was no scenes of this two ..but Moti gave Jalal the money..
but I don't understand why Moti' s parents are giving money ???
is it a custom ???
anyway i guess Jodha's mom is from England..that Hamida mentioned here...
waiting for the upcoming chapter..
continue soon
and haan you have really penned it down ..I can feel 20 th century rural touch here like Hamida's religious belief..and a hatred towards Modernism..

thanks nishu!!
you can say Surya is the protagonist while revolving around his ja jo love story grows!
dewar bhabi scenes you'll get in next chap!
no! Its not mentioned exactly who's from England and moti gets an amount per year from their zamindari!!

nice chapter dr..update soon..tks for the pm..eagerly waiting for the next chapter..

Originally posted by: savindi.db

nice chapter dr..update soon..tks for the pm..eagerly waiting for the next chapter..

thanks savindi!!
will update soon!!
welcome dear!!

Originally posted by: swetiii

nic chapppi..
update sooin

thanks dear!!
will surely update soon!

Nice update... Good start Sona