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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Aww.. res

~Unres~

Sooo.. it was such a beautiful OS reee!!👏 At first I thought it would be about a girl and boy falling for each other through SMS chats.. but this was beyond my expectations, and extremely lovely at that..❤️

Firstly... I can understand..life does becomes kinda hectic after marriage and kids and all..😆 though I know nothing about it...😆😆

But the fact that Jalal still loved her a lot, that his love for her was never tarnished. that was sooo beautiful!

Anddd.. the SMS thing!!!

Aww my Jodha..❤️ The idea was soo cute..!😳😳I knew it would be Jo only.. a vibe of some kind but I knew.. and I was soo glad at the final revelation that how he was pleasantly surprised to her dressed in green, his SMS lady and his lady love, wishing him a happy 40th birthday with a cake... awww moment!!!

All in all. a short, sweet and cute OS that captures the essence of love.. It never fades away.. It might get buried with other responsibilities but it only needs a gentle push to become alive.. ❤️

I lovveee you for this OS dii!🤗

Love,

Anu

Edited by ...Anushka... - 10 years ago

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Mushat

@mushat

Stunner

+ 30

Posted: 10 years ago

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editedKrina 🤗 Thank you very much for pm..OMG m shocked ..surprised. mujhe laga koi teenage students ki love story hogi through SMS...Awesome.. mind blowing..15 years after marriage .responsibilities...jodha was so heart broken when jalal forgot their anniversary.. and the SMS..again o thought EMA ..but the end was so beautiful..it's an unique piece krina. .loved it. .baas if only jalal told jodha the truth..again I read the os...read jalal's self talk ...he is not cheating on jodha but want to the unknown friend who changed his life for better..thanks for this story...you are malika e os krina..aise hi surprises deti rehna..love you

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful!!!
loved it completely!!!
write more!!!
thanks for the pm!!

Edited by Sweet_sonai - 10 years ago

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Savindi Abhisheka

@Savi.23

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

awesome os dr...tks for the pm..

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Ambidextrous

@Ambidextrous

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

wow di awesome os

jalal thought she was someone else

and this was his own wife jodha

so nice and lovely os

jalal's 40th birthday and he met that lady means jodha

i think he forgot that it was his birthday😆

love u di thanks for this

keep writing🤗

Edited by .AKDHASWARA. - 10 years ago

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice os update ur ff soon pm me thanked

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Krina

@cuty1997

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...
Aww.. res
~Unres~
Sooo.. it was such a beautiful OS reee!!👏 At first I thought it would be about a girl and boy falling for each other through SMS chats.. but this was beyond my expectations, and extremely lovely at that..❤️

Thank you so much anu for your lovely comment 🤗
Firstly... I can understand..life does becomes kinda hectic after marriage and kids and all..😆 though I know nothing about it...😆😆
i also don't know about any thing.😆
But the fact that Jalal still loved her a lot, that his love for her was never tarnished. that was sooo beautiful!
Anddd.. the SMS thing!!!
Aww my Jodha..❤️ The idea was soo cute..!😳😳I knew it would be Jo only.. a vibe of some kind but I knew.. and I was soo glad at the final revelation that how he was pleasantly surprised to her dressed in green, his SMS lady and his lady love, wishing him a happy 40th birthday with a cake... awww moment!!!

i am so much happy that you like it.😳
All in all. a short, sweet and cute OS that captures the essence of love.. It never fades away.. It might get buried with other responsibilities but it only needs a gentle push to become alive.. ❤️

Thank you so much anu
I lovveee you for this OS dii!🤗

Love you too anu🤗
Love,
Anu