Jalal's Diary.... Entry 8 updated....(16/3/15)

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ENTRY 8
I was all set to reveal my identity and save Abdul from the impending danger on his life when the voice of the princess echoed throughout the palace... It made the soldier ready to cut Abdul's head stop in his actions and it also made me remove my hands from the small knife in my waistband..
Surprisingly I looked towards her...

I saw her coming down from the winding staircase with Rani Mainavati following her closely behind!
She came down and addressed her father saying that it's against the Rajput pride to kill a disabled man and thus they shouldn't kill Abdul.. She also said that their main enmity is with me so they should leave Abdul and find me... I saw her would be husband Raja Suryabhaan support her... He promised her that he was going to bring my head in front of her as their wedding gift!!!
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Poor he!! Didn't even know that I was present there itself and had already started my game.. I promised myself that he will get the punishment for this by loosing his own life!!
I couldn't help the grin that started forming in my face and at last gave away a small laugh... I was feeling very happy then!!

It was already evening when I went to a sweet shop... The owner was a fat bellied man and seemed to be pretty brainless..

I started talking to him and he seemed to enjoy my company...

While talking to him I casually asked about the direction of Amer jail...
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He had no idea who I am and thus he gave me the direction to go to the Amer jail... I thanked him and went away on my way to rescue Abdul from the jail...

It was already night when I reached the Amer jail following the sweatshop owner's direction... Poor man!! Didn't even know to whom he gave away the directions!!! I laughed a lot thinking about him... If I say that I didn't like the man, it was wrong... I liked him for his uncontrollable tongue which gave away a great secret of Amer to me today!! The Amer Jail!!!! My friend Abdul is a prisoner of the jail and I went there to take him away with me to the war camp!!
I thought about the reaction of the princess of my dreams when she would come to know that Abdul is missing from the jail...
Allah!! I wanted to see her once again before fleeing with Abdul to the safe periphery of my war camp..

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Hiding myself from the eyes of the Amer soldiers, I reached the roof of the prison gate.. Looking down, my eyes caught a soldier standing in the gate...

I jumped down from the roof behind him and before he could react I attacked him from behind and killed him...
I made his dead body wear the Rajvanshi dress that I was wearing and myself wore his dress... the dress of the gatekeeper of Amer prison!! After hiding his body in a safe corner of the prison I stood with my sword ready to enter the prison and save Abdul!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Updated entry 8...
Hope you all will like this part too!!
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Barnali aka Sonai...🤗

Edited by Sweet_sonai - 10 years ago