~Akdha FF~ Unconditional Love chapter 5 updated pg 98 - Page 4

Originally posted by: arushibisht

hi Riya thank you dear... I will Pm you and u are already in my buddies list..😃

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Omg!!! Wow what a beautiful start... thanks di First of all I would like to thank u so much for mentioning my name in writers. Thank U so much my dear. Di your name deserved to be there...😊

I just read the prologue and with that I can tell you that you have unique style to explain about details. Very interestingly you have made me curious to know what happened in their life? What twist change their destiny... 21Year TOP Business got married to this bubbly girl. Interesting😃😊

I love the part you mentioned that you believe in practical characters and I really enjoy more practical stories. 😉

I might not be able to comment on every chapter but I will keep reading and comment together for few chapter.it's ok di i can understand it will be honor for me if you at least read my story... because your FF was the first one which i read and got inspired...(lately I am going through very hectic schedule at work) Di you are working too???

Keep updating fast fast😆 Di i will try my level best as i still a student and i will be in class 12th by mid march

Thank u for pm my dear.😃👏 My pleasure di..

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

Oh My God!😲😲😲

Seriously the story line is amazing!!! 🤗Thank you 😃 And who told you you aren't a good writer, you are and OMG I'm gonna read your story..😎

First things first.. you made me go all awww.. when i read your note!😳🤗 I mean haan I would have killed you for saying thanks but I can't even kill you.. you're so sweet how can I kill a sweet person! na baba thats a bigger crime than killing someone😆 No problem i will save you if kill someone ...i will a lawyer in future na...😆a tighty hug to you!🤗 aww me selfless nd helpful, sachhi..yes, no doubt in that...😉

then the story line... exactly! every girl adores him.. I mean he's like so damn hot and handsome.. hayeee..☺️ 21 year old.. young passionate Romeo😉 ( I know he isn't like one in the starting but he will be like that when he falls for her.. haina?)I won't tell keep gusseing🤣

And my Jodha.. she's like awww...❤️ such an innocent girl but why Jalal married her forcefully?😲😲😲 I am remembering how Arnav married Khushi forcefully in IPKKND (Season 1) and how they fell in love after that... hayeee..❤️ I don't know i have not seen that...😕but there is suspense! why he did that? and tell me one more thing, did he love Jodha when he married her? And did Jodha love him when they were married?😕😕Mai yeh bhi nhi bataugi... you tell the suspense of secret crush first...😆

soo I'm like waiting for you damn impatiently to update the story... please.. and yes, update soon!😆😉 warna..😎 mee chotii writer!😉first you give update of I love you...🤣

thanks a lot once again for this story... and we all love you soo do continue okay?!🤗

Thanku for the pm!now you breaking the dosti rule😲

Anu,

Originally posted by: arushibisht

hold on dear ...😆I will update ...and let me correct you this is not a chapter... It's a prologue... I just started the FF and i will post the first chapter soon...😳

Originally posted by: arushibisht

Thanks a lot di...😃 I will continue di i am glad that u r happy...😃

Originally posted by: FAIRYLOVEDESIRE

yes i am dear c 😃 aur apni scrapes bbhi check kar liya karo😆

Originally posted by: lovejodhaakbar

Please ...do continue...

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

Arushi.. I Love You!🤣

(de diya I Love You Ka Update!)🤣