~Akdha FF~ Unconditional Love chapter 5 updated pg 98

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

@Magpie_

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

congratulations for your new story😊
your prologue is very interesting
i am very excited about your story
continue soon
thanks for the pm😃

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Oh My God!😲😲😲

Seriously the story line is amazing!!! 🤗 And who told you you aren't a good writer, you are and OMG I'm gonna read your story..😎

First things first.. you made me go all awww.. when i read your note!😳🤗 I mean haan I would have killed you for saying thanks but I can't even kill you.. you're so sweet how can I kill a sweet person! na baba thats a bigger crime than killing someone😆 a tighty hug to you!🤗 aww me selfless nd helpful, sachhi..

then the story line... exactly! every girl adores him.. I mean he's like so damn hot and handsome.. hayeee..☺️ 21 year old.. young passionate Romeo😉 ( I know he isn't like one in the starting but he will be like that when he falls for her.. haina?)

And my Jodha.. she's like awww...❤️ such an innocent girl but why Jalal married her forcefully?😲😲😲 I am remembering how Arnav married Khushi forcefully in IPKKND (Season 1) and how they fell in love after that... hayeee..❤️ but there is suspense! why he did that? and tell me one more thing, did he love Jodha when he married her? And did Jodha love him when they were married?😕😕

soo I'm like waiting for you damn impatiently to update the story... please.. and yes, update soon!😆😉 warna..😎 mee chotii writer!😉

thanks a lot once again for this story... and we all love you soo do continue okay?!🤗

Thanku for the pm!

Anu,

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Impairlove

@Impairlove

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

congratulations for ur new story

the prolouge and title is very well

all the best for upcoming chapters

and update soon😊

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meera

@meeramiss18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Hi i hav read d prologue it wad interesting iam waiting 4 ur update. Plz pm me wen u update😊

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Omg!!! Wow what a beautiful start... First of all I would like to thank u so much for mentioning my name in writers. Thank U so much my dear.

I just read the prologue and with that I can tell you that you have unique style to explain about details. Very interestingly you have made me curious to know what happened in their life? What twist change their destiny... 21Year TOP Business got married to this bubbly girl. Interesting😃

I love the part you mentioned that you believe in practical characters and I really enjoy more practical stories.

I might not be able to comment on every chapter but I will keep reading and comment together for few chapter. (lately I am going through very hectic schedule at work)

Keep updating fast fast😆

Thank u for pm my dear.😃👏

Edited by shahbhavini - 10 years ago

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arushi

@...Arushi...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Shivanikadel
congratulations for ur new story
the prolouge and title is very well
all the best for upcoming chapters
and update soon😊

thank you so much Shivani😊 and i will try my level best to upadate soon... And also Pm you ... If you are not in my buddies list then plzzz... Send me the request as i pm to all my buddies...

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arushi

@...Arushi...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: meeramiss18
Hi i hav read d prologue it wad interesting iam waiting 4 ur update. Plz pm me wen u update😊

Thanks a lot Meera...🤗 I will surely Pm u when i update ... I hope you are there in my buddies list...

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arushi

@...Arushi...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...
congratulations for your new story😊
your prologue is very interesting
i am very excited about your story
continue soon
thanks for the pm😃

Thanks a lot Shefa...😃 Yes now i am surely going to continue...