Fasle updated chappy 17 on pg 72 updated on 23/01/17 - Page 42

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Chappy-15

She could feel the adrenaline gush up in her body and her blood rushing to her cheeks making them crimson in color, her eyes widening in shock, her heart leaping like a small kid in joy and a smile creeping on her lips stealthily and the sound of the kiss making her feel as if there are butterflies in her tummy tickling her. The desire for more seemed to arise within her; she feels if she sees him she will lose herself. She knows she is giving full signs to him that the kiss affected her. He enjoys staring at her beautiful cheeks turned crimson in colour, her eyes at first widen then her eyelids bow down with shyness, his heart leaps with joy. She is the one and only lady with whom he could make love forever and never get either bored or tired. He huskily says in her ear- Sharmate hua aur bhi haseen lagti ho jungilli billi, tumhari adayeen abhi mujhe kuch jayada he ghayal kar rahi.(You look more beautiful while blushing, your looks are wounding me to a large extent right now). She could not help but smile; she could feel a small voice inside her say- Jodha control yourself. Remember what he has done. She bites her lips hard to control the incontrollable smile which is continuously playing on her lips and hugs her tummy to control the tickling she felt. The way she bite her lips seemed like an invitation to a feast for Jalal, but he has to control himself because he had promised her that he will not touch her until she permits, but he is ready to play on and see till when she will be able to control herself. She gets up to leave but he takes his chance and holds her wrist and pushes her towards the tents covering and traps her from both sides keeping his hands, by now Jodha had managed to be normal, she masks her usual stern face and she says- Voh kya tha?(what was that?) Jalal says- Voh...? Kya voh...? Hume kuch samajh nahi araha hai(That... what are you asking?) , trying to act innocent as usual to get away with his naughty deeds. Jodha fumes and says- Jayada bhole to ho nahi tum toh bane ki jarorat bhi nahi hai samajhe. Tumhari voh karne ki majal kaise hue? (You are not too innocent so there is no need to imitate being one do you understand that. How did you have guts to do that?) Jalal says - Kya voh, voh bol rahi ho tum , hume sach mai kuch samajh nahi araha (What are you that , that , seriously I am saying I am not able to understand what are you referring to) and he starts itching his head as if trying to recollect something. Jodha finds her golden chance and is about to escape when he again captures her, she gives him a fierce glare. Jalal says - acha yeh(Ok, this) and again kisses on her cheek surprising her, but this time she manages to control herself. Jodha says making an angry face and poking her finger on the cheek he kissed- yeh kya tha? Aur tumhe ijajat kisne di?(what was this ? And who gave you the pemission?) Jalal says- Ijajat toh tumne he di, tumhi to keh rahi thi ki jo karna hai karklo mai bhojan nahi karongi. Toh humare jo maan kiya voh humne kar liya. Aur tum janti nahi Ki voh kya tha, toh phirse karde voh, taki tumhe bhi malum ho voh kya hai par is bar yahaan par hoga voh( poking her lips). Akhir jo voh hua voh galat thodi na tha miyan aur biwi ke bich voh toh hota rehta hai. Tabhi toh ek nani se jaan is duniya mai ati hai. (You only gave the permission as you said do whatever you wish I will not eat food, so I did whatever I wish. And you do not know what was that, so should I again do that again so you will know what was that, but this time that would be here (poking her lips). After whatever happened was not wrong, that keeps on happening between a husband and a wife. Then only a new life enters this world). Jodha could feel the conversation going to intense and the atmosphere around her heating up, and she could feel that her cheeks were turning red again so to avoid the conversation she says- Hume bhok lag rahi hume bhojan karna hai. (I am hungry, I want to eat food) Jalal immediately leaves her and says- Kariye. Vaise acha bahana hai tumhare paas .(have it, you have good excuse to get out .) Jodha says- par hamari ek sharat hai ki tum bahar jao. ( But I have a condition that you will go out) Jalal says- theek hai, par hum tumhara bahar intajar karenge., theek hai. (Ok , but I will wait for you outside, ok.) Jodha says- Jaise jahanpanah Jallad ki agaye. (As emperor Jallad wishes) and he leaves smiling and after he leaves she takes a deep breath and she says to herself- Aj toh Hum bach gaye. Varna is Jallad ke dimag mai pak rahi kichidi ka hume koi andaja nahi hota hai.( Today I managed to get out safely. Otherwise what is cooking in Jallad mind I have no clue.) She touches the cheek he kissed and smiles and says- Pagal Jallad (mad Jallad), and eats her food quickly before trouble knocks the door again, and goes out and sees everyone sitting around a bonfire singing and dancing jovially. She sees Jalal staring at her but she decides to sit opposite to him with few ladies, Jalal immediately comprehends the reason of her gesture. Jalal sees a new person who had just joined in recently sitting next to Jalal. Jalal could easily note the way he stared at Jodha, and she like usual is oblivious to it. Jalal could feel pang of jealously, nobody had the right to stare at his better half that way except him. The emotion called possessiveness seemed to be gripping his heart tighter with each and every passing second. All he desired is to get up and punch his eyes black- blue, but he controls himself because he did not want to create a scene. He is drunk in jealously and when he looks at her she is having a gala time. He wants to get up and hold her tight and shout at the stranger and say- mine, she is mine do you get it. That is when he hears the stranger say something to him- Voh chori kitni khubsurat hai na. (That girl is so beautiful) This is more than enough for Jalal someone is eyeing at his wife and he is sitting as nothing has happened and now he is commenting on her looks, he will surely trash him up, all he needs is just a chance. That is when someone says- bhaya tum ek gana suna do. (Brother sing a song.) Jalal could feel his eyes widen in disbelief, he says- hum (me). The man says- haan tum.(yes, you). Jalal look at Jodha and could see an evil grin on her face, challenging him and that is when he accepts the challenge. He says- theek hai.(ok) and he starts singing

Waaqif toh huey tere dil ki baat se
Chhupaya jise tune qaaynaat se
Waaqif toh huey tere uss khayal se
Chhupaya jise tune apne aap se
Kahin na kahin teri aankhein,
teri baatein padh rahe hain hum
Kahin na kahin tere dil mein,
dhadkano mein dhal rahe hain hum
Tu Har Lamha.. tha mujhse juda..
Chaahe door tha main.. yaa paas rahaa

Uss din tu haan udaas rahe
tujhe jis din hum na dikhe na miley
Uss din tu chup-chaap rahe
tujhe jis din kuch na kahe na suney
Main hoon bann chuka, jeene ki ik wajah
Iss baat ko khud se tu na chupaa..
Tu Har Lamha.. tha mujhse juda..
Chaahe door tha main.. yaa paas rahaa

Lab se bhale tu kuch na kahe
Tere dil mein hum hi toh base yaa rahe
Saansein teri iqraar kare
Tera haath agar chhulein, pakde
Teri khwahishein kar bhi de tu bayaan
Yehi waqt hai inke izhaar ka..
Tu Har Lamha.. tha mujhse juda..
Chaahe door tha main.. yaa paas rahaa

Throughout the song his eyes are fixed on her and her eyes on him. The song just made her feel that he knows her more than she thinks. The song had left her awestruck. This song cleared showed that he cares for, and maybe he loves her too, just the way she does. She simply gets up breaking the eye lock to get some breathing space. So does the stranger get up finding the perfect chance of the wooing the lady he likes and Jalal also gets up seeing the stranger follow his lady love. The devil inside him seemed to give an evil grin that now he could have a feast, by unleashing the devil on him. Jodha splashes some water on her face to cool herself when she feels a hand on her shoulder and she says- Kya hai Jallad? Tum (What is it Jallad? you)And turns to see him, but is surprised to see the stranger, she immediately apologizes. The stranger says- koi bat nahi hume yeh nam pasand aye.(no problem, I liked the name.) She could feel a weird sensation as his hands were still on her shoulder and Jalal is nowhere to be seen. She shoves away his hand from her shoulder and says- humse dur rahi(stay away from me). That is when Jalal enters the scene and says- are bhaya hum apko he dundh rahe the. (Brother I was finding you.)The stranger says- tum jao hume is chori se kuch kam hai. (You go I have some work with this girl) Jalal says- theek hai(ok ) and is leaves passing a flying kiss to a shocked Jodha. Jodha thinks- Sach mai inka dimag kishak gaya hai . (Seriously his mind has been corrupted). Jalal turns and comes back and says- bhaya(brother) the man gives an annoyed look to Jalal and Jalal punches his eye surprising the man . Man asks- yeh kya tha? (what was that?) Jalal says- Hum toh batana he bhul gaye jise chori ko tum ankhe fad kar dekh rahe ho aur jis saath tum badsulki karna chacte ho voh chori asal mai humari ghar wali hai. Aur hum chacte toh tume wahin mar lete par hum tumhe marna ka maja akele chakna chacte the. is liye humne yeh kiya.(I forget to inform you that the girl you were drooling at and now you are trying to misbehave with , she in reality is my wife. And if I wanted I would have trashed you there then, but I want to enjoy beating you all alone. So I did this) he again punches his other and then he unleashes the devil within him on his prey hitting him where he could. His rage gave her chills to the bone, the way he is trashing him up shows his possessiveness over her she could clearly notice that. She had to stop him before he murdered him, but somewhere deep down she admitted she liked this possessive side of his. She stood in between him and the stranger and says- bahut hogaya, har samaye yeh dekhane ki jarorat nahi hai ki tum Jallad ho.(enough, there is no need to prove that you are a Jallad always) the stranger finds his golden chance and runs for his dear life. Jalal holds Jodha's arms roughly and says- Hum bardash nahi karenge ki koi tumhe us nazar se dekhe, jis nazar se tumhe dekne ka hak sirf hamara hai. (I will not tolerate that anybody sees you with that gaze which only I have the right to ) Jodha shoves off his hand and takes out a pot of water and hands it to him saying- Apne garam dimag ko thanda kar ke he sone ana, varna raat bahar hume tumhara krodh jhelna padegja . Aur haan agli bar jab hum aise bahar aye to saath mai koilya lekar ana hum apne moh mai laga lenge, kamse kam kiske jaan toh nahi loge tum. Aur vaise jab tumhare jalte hirdey ko sukooon mile hi gaye hai toh hume bhi sukoon se sone dena. Vase jalne ki bo toh hume bohot pehle se aranhi thi,( After you cool your mind then only come for sleeping, otherwise I have to face your anger all night. And yes, from next time when we come outside like this bring coal with you, so that I will rub it on my face at least someone's life would be spared. And otherwise now that your burning heart is at peace let me also sleep peacefully. I could smell the burning smell for quite a long time. ) And she leaves an embarrassed Jalal, as he knows that she knew that the stranger was busy staring at her, and he was busy getting drunk in jealously. She turns and says- Jallad. He looks at her standing at a far distance and says- han bolo. (Yes, say) She says- Tumne jo humare liye aj kiya hume acha laga, dhanywad. Aur tum gana bhi theek thak ga lete ho ( What did for me today, I like it, thank you and you sing ok ok ) And she leaves with a smile...

Promo- probably back in Agra.

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chappy-16
She leaves a happy Jalal behind. He was happy because he was winning her back and he knew it for sure, her sarcastic remarks were her way of disguising her emotions as annoyance. She is never annoyed of him, she just acts because shes wants him to win her back. He looks at the tent and says- challenge accepted Jungilli billi, and goes inside to annoy her, but finds her sleeping, he thinks probably she is too tired so she dozed off so early. He goes near her and caresses her cheeks and gently pulls them, he did not know why but he had always found her cute, even though he never confessed it. He kisses on her forehead gently and says- tum sirf meri ho, aur tume hum banake he dam lenge, and he dozes off. Early in the morning the whole crew leaves for Agra as Jalal wanted to reach before nightfall. Jodha had been stealing glances at Jalal during the whole journey. In, the way they stop that is when Jalal comes near Jodha comes and says- Lo hume agayeJodha gives him are you mad wala look. Jalal gives her I'm not mad look and says- Voh kya hai , Jungilli billi tum pure safar mai humari shakal dekhne ki koshish kar rahi thi, is liye socha darshan karwa lon. Jodha turns red due to embarrassment and says- Hume tume kab dekhe? Jalal says- Jungilli billi hume ishq kya koi khata ya chori nahi ki hai. Jodha says annoyed- Apni fati hoye shayari mara na band karo samjhe. Aur haan hume koi ishq vishk nahi hai tumshe samjhe. Aur tumhari shakal kya Kohinoor hai jo hum uske darshan kare? Jalal says- Tumhari nazar jidhar bas jaye voh cheej kohinnor se kimti ho jati hai . For a moment she was quite, but her razor- sharp tongue could not keep quite. So she says- Apne moh miyan mithu( it's a proverb probably used when one's praising himself/herself, but i'm not sure. Sorry if it's wrong) Apni shakal kabhi dhayan se iyene(mirror) mai dekhna phir pata chalega tum Kohinoor jaise nahi koliya jaise dikhti hai Jahanpanah and she smirks. Jalal says- apki nazaron nahi hume kise cheez ke kabil toh samjha, shukhriya and he leaves. She smiles and goes out to and sits in her palanquin. It's almost sun down when they reach Agra. Agra was decorated like a bride, welcoming its lost soul, its pride. Jodha feels touched with this gesture. Finally they were back in Agra, her abode. The place where she has bitter sweet memories, yet, now this was the place where she would love to spend the rest of her life. Her anxious hear was racing like the wind, wildly and untameable. She did not know how would people look upon her? With pity probably, probably not, with downcast eyes or with envy as Jalal had left everything for her. She had never confessed but it was true that his act made her fall for him again. Finally, they were entering the fort she closes the curtains of the palanquin as she was feeling shy correction awkward, that how will she have eye contact with everyone after that unfortunate incident. She kept on mumbling- Jodha calm down, everything is going to be alright, but it did not . She could hear the sound of the horse hooves fading away and finally everything seemed silent. All she could hear was her heart beating. She touches her left breast and feels her heart beating so fast and thinks if her heart beats any faster she might have a heart attack. She chides herself saying- shut up Jodha. Could you please shut up your big fat mouth? By now Jalal had dismounted from his stallion and he headed towards her, as he knew what might be going in her mind. He mentally says- I insulted you and threw you away from Agra, but I promise to restore your pride back, no matter what it costs. I promise I'll mend everything back. At least we can start a fresh again. All I need is your consent. Just once. .. He opens the curtains and says- chalo... giving her his hand. She nods indicating a no she didn't know why she behaved childishly. Jalal's eyes widen and he says softly- Hum hain tumhare saath. She shouts mentally on herself- Jodha stop acting like a baby and get up and get out, face the world. You have not done anything wrong. There's no fault in you. The fault lies within. And she holds his hand and gets up; she comes near his ears in such a way that it doesn't seem awkward and says to Jalal in her usual sarcastic tone- tum ho uski ka toh dar hai. There's a flower shower on her. HB immediately takes her into her embrace and inquires about her , so does Salima, but the most unhappiest of all were obviously Hukka Begum and Maham, their dismay could not been hidden from Jodha's eyes in spite of their rehearsed fake expressions, but she choose to ignore them like she had always done. Atgaha Sahab beamed with Joy, but her eyes were hunting for someone else, when she sees a small figure running towards her, she beams with joy. Rahim- Chotti Ammijan ap agaye? Jodha carries him and kisses on his forehead and says- haan Rahim ke pas toh hume ana he tha. Rahim makes a cute angry face and says - Apko pata hai yahan koi bhi achi kahaniyan nahi sonata. Ammijan bhi nahi, aur badi Ammijan ki kahaniyaan , kahani kam damki jayada lagti haiRukaiya looks with shock and anger. Jodha, Jalal, Salima and HB all try and control their laughter and manage to do so. Jodha says to pacify Ruks - Rahim aese nahi bolte voh apse badi hai. Salima takes Rahim and says- Rahim Chotti Amijaan safar se aye hai thak gaye hain bta. Unhe aram karne do. Rahim nods and leaves for his room. Jodha heads towards her chamber, she could here whispers from wherever she passed but she chose to ignore them for right know. As, right now her concern was how would she mange to survive in that HORROR ROOM, yes that's the new name she gave to her room. Horror room, the title just seemed so apt to her as the room now seemed more like a room in a haunted house, which is possessed by a spirit, but the only difference over here is that she would be not haunted by a ghost but by memories, bad memories worser than nightmares, which were scarier than ghosts. Moti calls her she says - haan. She notices that she has crossed the chamber. She turns back and enters her chamber and feels that the air of the chamber is trying to choke her up, and all the memories of that unfortunate night returned , become afresh again . She immediately steps out of the chamber Moti understands but she does not say a word. Jodha says to herself- You are brave Jodha. You can live in Horror house, you'll be alive. You can fight off that nightmare, those memories; you can keep them at bay. Remember when you were young Sujamal Bhaisa used to ask- who's the dauntless? You used to say me. So Jodha being dauntless does not mean only in the battle field. The person who is really dauntless is the one who manages his / her personal life without fear, so be the dauntless. Wake up Jodha does no Masa, Bapusa, Bhaisa or anyone to whom you can run for shelter. Your alone and probably will always be. So, be your own guardian angel, your own teacher. Don't let your emotions manipulate. You have suffered more than you could tolerate. You have suffered more than you deserved. And your pain has made you numb towards feelings do you understand, so just step in. Step in Jodha. Be the dauntless you always wanted be, and she steps in her chambers. She felt choked again but she did not run she whispered to the air around- try harder, this won't kill me and goes for getting fresh. She wore her dress, but it did not fir, it loosely hung on her body that is when she realizes the amount of weight she has lost. There's a knock on the door and a dasi comes with clothes she says Malika Azam ne bijvaya hai. Jodha nods and she keeps the clothes and leaves. Jodha feels more than grateful. She finishes her dressing up and stares at the mirror- She notices that she looked more like a bag of bones than a royal lady leave a queen. She feels bad. Thats when Jalal enters, he says- Tumhari Khubsurati bayan nahi ho sakti. Jodha is surprised find him there. She is grateful for his compliment, but she maintains her poker face and says- ho gaya tumhara. Jalal says- Hum tayar toh sadiyon pehle hogaye the, vaise tum par yeh hara rang bahut jaj ta hai. Jodha looks with disbelief she should have known that it was him whom sent her the dress. Jodha looked at him and says- dhanyawad , humare pas tumse ladne ka samaye nahi, hume Ammijan ne bulaya haiJalal looks with disbelief and says- tum hume chod kar ja rahi ho? Jodha says- haan. Toh? Jalal says- intizar kab tak hum karenge bhalla, jungilli billi ? Jodha says- Hume toh tume rukne ke liye nahi kaha. Tumhari Rukaiya Begum mari ja rahi hogi tumse milne ke liye and she leaves. Jalal says- Jungilli tumhe hume tadpane mai bahut mazak ata hain na ab humari bari and he gives his signature smirk and he leaves.
Promo- Jalal defends Jodha.
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