AKDHA : Hatred to unknown feeling (Part 8 Updated 18/5/15) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: unknown2592

Jodha is strong nd will be strong,,twist shud not be revealed before dear..bt i m sure u all like it..

Yess twist should be revealed at right time...will wait for your update dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ofcourse nt dear,itz the interesting story

Originally posted by: unknown2592

thank u soo much prithibi ..hope i m not making it boring !!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...interesting storyline...plz pm me when u update next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chappy was good..
i liked now jodha is fiery n jalal started too feel for jodha
plz update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting story...poor jodha but she is strong. ...Jalal ko kuch kuch ho raha hai. ...waiting for next update...
Do PM me next tym
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Posted: 10 years ago
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super-duper.. u fulfilled my wish dear.. i expected this fairy fearless jodha in the show.. continue soon & do pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4 :


"I will go and rescue them" said jodha with a determined voice. All were shocked to hear. Shehensha immediately told everyone to leave the hall except hamida banoo,salima begum,ruqaiya begum.

After many days he was talking to jodha begum " kya keh rahe hai aap?"

Hamidaa bano interfered and asked her jodha what are you doing?are you out of your mind?

Salima begum did not know what to do she was standing there confused as she knew her state,she needs distraction, but at the same time she was worried about her.

Jalal started talking "Jodha begum !! How can u go there?it is not safe for u?and it is me who should be taking care of my people.."

Jodha started talking " shehensha!! What u said is right. But i am marium uz zamani welfare of the people is also my duty..."

"Ur not marium uz zamani anymore jodha begum " came a voice.

(Guyzz dont kill me for this...)

It is none other than our ruqaiya begum.


Hamida bano with much anger " bas !!ruqaiya begum !!!!jodha is marium uz zamani. U have no right to tell her she is not.."

Ruqaiya was shocked and felt insulted,started to talk when was cut off by jalal " this is not the discussion here ..." And was about to continue but jodha told shehensha i will go nd rescue the villagers please allow me to do it as a last duty of marium uz zamani and then i will give away marium uz zamani place.

Now,not even a single person there could speak.

But one soul was happy there "ruqaiya begum!"

Immediately salima begum and hamida hugged jodha begum " suddenly a tear escaped from her eyes,which did not go unnoticed by jalal".

Jalal was in a confused state that he did not know what to do whether to talk with ruqaiya or stop jodha.

In the meanwhile, jodha in a confident tone told all of them shehensha i am going to fight with the attackers and then told hamida and salima begum" dont worry ammijaan,i will be fine , i will return soon and she is prepared to go".

Arrangements were done for jodha to leave.

Shehensha in private talk with Atgah Saab(AS) : AS plzz be careful .take care of my jodha begum .his voice was shaking ,AS could recognize easily that he started loving jodha begum and was worried about her. He gave him assurance look that he would take care of her.

Within no time all left for the village.


Jalal was very much worried about jodha begum ,jodha what has happened to u? Y are u behaving like this? I never wanted u to go. I cant bear if something happens to u and unknowingly tears flow from his eyes which fell on his hand, then he touched his cheeks he is surprised to feel his own tears.he thinks what has happened to me, y am i crying? Do i love her?what...i love her??

I am shehensha i dont have a heart .he kept his hand near his chest he could feel his heart beat. Yes i love jodha begum.


In the village,the fight started between the attackers and the mughal soldiers. Jodha was killing 3 soldiers at a time,she was fiercely moving her sword which was going into the raw skin of the attackers,blood spilled all over her face.Even then we can see the fierce jodha who was killing all of them not giving more chances to the mughal soldiers because they were also her responsibility. Suddenly an attacker from behind where her sword fell down and stabbed her blood was flowing out continuously ,then she immediately took a sword from the near by dead attacker and behead him and she was careful that no one didnt see her wound.She tied a black cloth around her waist so that no one could notice it.


In the palace:

The whole palace was echoing with the cry of the baby (ruqaiya's baby).all were getting tensed .hakima sahib was checking the baby she gave a medicine for the baby to sleep bt he was not responding. Suddenly the baby stopped crying and all of them felt relieved. But all broke down to tears when hakima told them that baby was no more.

Jalal was very much shattered and asked hakima what is the reason for his death? his voice was trembling.Shehensha "Wo..woo..the smoke from the ho.hoo..hookah was the cause. The smoke from the hookah was coming too much the baby could not take it his breathing was blocked.so..so..."and stopped talking.

Hamida bano and salima could not speak anything and were crying profusely. Ruqaiya stood there numb dont know what to do.She went near jalal and was shedding tears then jalal who stood like a statue suddenly pushed ruqaiya and went away.

Precap : Jodha comes to know about the baby.



Suggestions are welcomed.


Sorry if this part was not upto ur expectations.😔

Tomatoes are welcomed.

Edited by unknown2592 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
😭I love this part ❤️
Can't wait to see jodha reaction to d death of her baby 😭
Dis ruq 😡
I wish it was longer 😊
N thanks 4 d pm 😊
#with_love_bubbles ❤️
Edited by Sofia3000 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
awesome oh jalal has started loving jodha
the baby died 😭 continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update, poor jodha😭 and thank you for the pm.

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