20~NOT just a passionate affair~ 62 (2 pt) One day... another year! - Page 63

Originally posted by: sam_0506

One of the best epilogues I have read in a long time.

☺️ <- Lashy blushy

I so wanted to know what Jodha does in her professional life. I envisioned her in office with Jalal or running a small business herself. But it all felt wrong. Amal is THE right place for her. 👏

Awww I am so glad...

This small peek in the happily ever after of Jodha-Jalal was so enticing that it has left me wanting for more. Can you give us epilogue part 2 where they have a cute kid? 😳

Loool but let the young lover enjoy their freedom for sometime na... 😆

You see Lash, over the last year NJAPA has become a very important part of my life. I remember that feeling of impatience, to have to wait for weekends for an update. The first thing I'd do on opening my eyes would be check for an update. God, you have even made me do impossible things in office for NJAPA. 😆

I know... 😆😆I remember... and thanks for being impatient for it 🤗

After reading epilogue, it struck me all over again that all that has come to an end and like a child I want to cling to it re. 😭 I don't want my NJAPA to come to an end. NJAPA occupies the same space in my mind as Cinderella and Snow White. And the way Disney brought Cinderella part 2 and even 3, I want NJAPA part 2. 😛

Wait... Disney brought Cinderella part 2 and 3... I had no idea!!! 😲

I have admired your work so many times before, that it's just gonna be redundant if write it again. But truly think of getting this published. You have a gift. ⭐️

Thanks so much dearie... thanks a lottt 🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: sam_0506

And far as young love enjoying the freedom is concerned, take a leap. You know how they did in JA 😆

Originally posted by: lashy

Don't remind me of JA leap 😡

Hi Lashy aka Shradha di...

This post is very long but kya karu bhaut chota karna ka try kiya but nhi hua... Plz... take out some time and read this and if time permits plzz... do reply too. As i am new to IF i was not knowing about ur story.. I came to know about it from Anushka. Read it and i was speechless i have no words to express it is one word good, marvelous, awesome the list goes on... in the praise of your story the list is endless feel these words are somewhere less in your praise i need more words to be invented!! your story is so realistic and deals with real life and incidents. And you have really done justice in showing the real problems of a college goer, a woman and a couple in true love... plus guided with great solution too.. A good way to protest against a social evil of our society.You have great writing skills.. you just write like a professional writer. As a reader of your story just wanted to share my experience while reading your story.(i hope u won't mind that ) it took me 10 days to read whole story as i am a school student so have little time on IF plus others stories were also there... but my mind was always occupied with your story till i go to bed to as soon i woke up next day thinking what would happen next?? i am really glad i read whole story together other wise i would have gone mad waiting for update. i don't cry much but ur story was so touching that it made me cry because it was so touching . i cried in green room seen , when akdha got separated, when jo was in coma i could felt their pain.Though i exactly don't know meaning of love because till now i haven't fall in love but if i would i just pray that my soul mate be as caring and understanding as Jalal of your story.Truly the way u have written and expressed your thoughts and as you have portrayed akdha's felling is really commendable . I really had sleepless night i had to scold my self at 2 am to go to sleep as i had my school next day.. i don't know what inspired u to write this story ??? but what ever it is was it was a blessing for me and other readers... I felt so connected to your stories and it's characters as if I was part of it. If u would have published this story as novel it would have been a best seller. As i can not give detail praise of every chapter because then it would be so long... so following are the things i liked the most in the story...

Akdha's 1^st fight

Ring exchange at his place

;last dinner of Rishab and jo

Jo's game plan

Teasing Akdha by their group

When jalal take to jo when she was in coma

When jalal sang the song ( it was so funny)

The list is endless so i would stop it here only..

But di u r really a suspense queen ha.. created lots of suspense in the story. And the stalker one u kept till last.. but like a good guesser i already guessed it beforeJalal . The epilogue was too.. good u ended the story at right time . yeh!! U would have been dragging the story is u would have been continued then the real objective of story would have gone.. u ended at right note!! My first reaction was why u stopped?? But after reading your message i realized that u r right.. i am going to read the whole story again after my exams and gone read it again and again till i by heart it.. soon i will get it print out too.. to keep it safely with me forever. Those 10 days were really wonderful days of my life. Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful story with us. I really wish i could have take to u but no problem i will manage with this post only.. thanks a lot in advance to read all this bakwass..have u written any other story if yes then plzz.. tell me. I have send u buddy request pllzz.. accept it. I don't want to end but i had to ending here.. that's all... thanks a lot!!

Note- sorry for the mistakes i have not read it again after typing...

With lots of love

Arushi

Originally posted by: arushibisht

Hi Lashy aka Shradha di...

This post is very long but kya karu bhaut chota karna ka try kiya but nhi hua... Plz... take out some time and read this and if time permits plzz... do reply too. As i am new to IF i was not knowing about ur story.. I came to know about it from Anushka.

Firstly, a big thanks to yo yo bunny anushka for bringing you here..🤗 though she's been absent on the forum for quite a while now... 😕

Read it and i was speechless i have no words to express it is one word good, marvelous, awesome the list goes on... in the praise of your story the list is endless feel these words are somewhere less in your praise i need more words to be invented!!

Thanks dear... 😳

your story is so realistic and deals with real life and incidents. And you have really done justice in showing the real problems of a college goer, a woman and a couple in true love... plus guided with great solution too.. A good way to protest against a social evil of our society.You have great writing skills.. you just write like a professional writer.

OMG thank you... 😳

As a reader of your story just wanted to share my experience while reading your story.(i hope u won't mind that ) it took me 10 days to read whole story as i am a school student so have little time on IF plus others stories were also there... but my mind was always occupied with your story till i go to bed to as soon i woke up next day thinking what would happen next?? i am really glad i read whole story together other wise i would have gone mad waiting for update.

Awww that is so sweet to know😳... btw before I forget hope your exams went well.. 😃

i don't cry much but ur story was so touching that it made me cry because it was so touching . i cried in green room seen ,

(Just curious - Why green room scene?😕)

when akdha got separated, when jo was in coma i could felt their pain.

🤗

Though i exactly don't know meaning of love because till now i haven't fall in love but if i would i just pray that my soul mate be as caring and understanding as Jalal of your story.

Loool yes don't we all? 😉 Hope your wishes get fulfilled!

Truly the way u have written and expressed your thoughts and as you have portrayed akdha's felling is really commendable . I really had sleepless night i had to scold my self at 2 am to go to sleep as i had my school next day.. i don't know what inspired u to write this story ??? but what ever it is was it was a blessing for me and other readers... I felt so connected to your stories and it's characters as if I was part of it. If u would have published this story as novel it would have been a best seller. As i can not give detail praise of every chapter because then it would be so long... so following are the things i liked the most in the story...

Akdha's 1^st fight

Ring exchange at his place

;last dinner of Rishab and jo

Jo's game plan

Teasing Akdha by their group

When jalal take to jo when she was in coma

When jalal sang the song ( it was so funny)

Awww thank you so much... I am glad you cherished these chapters/parts..

The list is endless so i would stop it here only..

But di u r really a suspense queen ha.. created lots of suspense in the story. And the stalker one u kept till last.. but like a good guesser i already guessed it beforeJalal.

You guessed it... arre cos you got the hint somewhere? 😛

The epilogue was too.. good u ended the story at right time . yeh!! U would have been dragging the story is u would have been continued then the real objective of story would have gone.. u ended at right note!! My first reaction was why u stopped?? But after reading your message i realized that u r right.. i am going to read the whole story again after my exams and gone read it again and again till i by heart it.. soon i will get it print out too.. to keep it safely with me forever.

Hee hee... thak you dear... 🤗 and I am so grateful

Those 10 days were really wonderful days of my life. Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful story with us. I really wish i could have take to u but no problem i will manage with this post only.. thanks a lot in advance to read all this bakwass..have u written any other story if yes then plzz.. tell me. I have send u buddy request pllzz.. accept it. I don't want to end but i had to ending here.. that's all... thanks a lot!!

Note- sorry for the mistakes i have not read it again after typing...

Will send you the buddy request dear 😳 and keep coming back... we'd love to hear from you

With lots of love

Arushi

Originally posted by: lovejodhaakbar

Now iam giving virtual standing ovation for the story..u give a beautiful ending for a beautiful story dear author ( and..i learned so many new vocabularies too through this story 😆) and iam waiting ur other "not just ordinary story" too..

Originally posted by: lashy