TH# 1 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH1 to CH3) - Page 13

Originally posted by: J2lover

Hey sweetie..😳😳...
Hello and welcome here...😃

loved your concept of this story!!!😃😃 ...Sounds very unique!!!⭐️⭐️
Ah thank you so much...

I think...writing medivial times stories looks a bit challenging...though writing A STORY itself is challenging but still.😛😛...this requries more alterness when it comes to language!!!😊😊
True dear...need to maintain the feel of story and all characters talk in very royal and controlled manner.

N u did a gr88 job for that matter!!!👏 👏
Thanks...that means a lot...😳

Alwayss wanted to see early life of akbar.😃😃..in the show they didn't potray much.🤔🤔..here we can enjoy that tooo!!! 😳😳...
Yes...I have not thought so far but this story will show how both Ja-Jo learn from different circumstances in life...love story but with a bit of politics too...😃

Plus applause for your style of writing dear!!!👏👏... Its subtle n unique!!! Gr88 gng dea!!! Continue soon!!🤗🤗
Thanks for the comment...keep reading...🤗

Originally posted by: NikkiReed

Nice update... Continue soon
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Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

awesome update dear.. continue soon & do pm

Originally posted by: abhi786

Rasika wonderful chapter.. 👏
Thanks...😃

Your writing is excellent especially Jodha flashback with her master how to handle the sword & also it's good to know that JO learn sword fighting skills from a MASTER not from her brothers Sujamal ..
Yes, In this story Jo will be a good sword fighter and you can't be a good warrior if not very well trained right? She has completed 8 years of training...so she has to be good...😃

I am waiting to see JO sword fighting soon...😃
Let us see...but it takes time to write a descriptive scene like that, this flashback part to I have re-written 3-4 times...😆

I liked the way Nasir made Jalaal say why he sending him to Ameer & Nasir is sharp enough to keep an eye on Shariff
Yes, that is why this part name is: 'The Advice' 1st was from Nasir to Jalal and other was from Jo's Master to Jodha...😊 and in coming parts both will make use of those advices

what Jalaal marriage is already fixed not again ( not with Ruqu.😡)... Hope Jalaal doesn't get married , if Nazir is not married then get Ruqu married to him 😉 I am getting irritated with Ruqu name itself thanks to JA CVS 😆
😆 😆 Tell me about it re...but how this unfolds will be interesting you know...😉

Maina doesn't know that JO is learning sword fighting while only BM knows ?
Yes it is their little secret...Maina wants to make her daughter Sanskari...😆

"Jodha, the future of Amer depends on you. Not your brothers. YOU."

Poor Jo doesn't know that she doesn't need to fight in a war, but instead she has to sacrifice by marrying a KING who will help them fight against Sujamal & Mugals for the sake of Ameer

Jo is not even interested to know the name of the person...
Yes...Jodha ne kya socha tha aur what BM is asking...😭 but don't worry Jalal hai na...😉

Please Rasika no Suryabhan yaar..even though I am not a fan but I did liked the guy in the show .. Poor guy truly loved JO & died in saving Ameer ... You can please bring NEW NAME as he is a little negative character...
Haan re that is why I am not revealing his name...😆 coz I did not find any suitable name...

Is this your first FF or you did write earlier also..😳
This is my first attempt...and that too medieval times but I was inspired due to a novel I was reading. I have mentioned it in 1st post...😊

Waiting for JJ meeting finally, and happy to see a different story & excellent writing from you..🤗
everyone is waiting for that...I hope I don't disappoint you people...😳

Originally posted by: Rasika29