TH# 1 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH1 to CH3) - Page 12

Originally posted by: Rasika29

Will try to update by Monday eve...writing writing...😆

HMPH...hmh...

Originally posted by: ...prithibi...

Can u update tmrw???!my m.b. will get over...then i won't b able to read aftr tmrw 12:01 am..if my dad sends m.b. Then i will b able to read..nd i m so eager to read ur story..did ur xms get over??can u update daily??? 🤗

Exams...😆 No re already completed my degree 2 yrs back...doing job nw...

Can't give that much time to writing and I don't have patience to write long chappy so Im updating in parts...

Daily update not possible...but I think I am updating almost on alternate days...🤔

Will try to update by monday eve...😃

got to go nw...gd night..😳

Originally posted by: anabella

Awesome update. Waiting eagerly for Akdha's 1st meeting. Plzzz continue soon

Thanks Ana...😃

Originally posted by: Rasika29

Exams...😆 No re already completed my degree 2 yrs back...doing job nw...

Can't give that much time to writing and I don't have patience to write long chappy so Im updating in parts...

Daily update not possible...but I think I am updating almost on alternate days...🤔

Will try to update by monday eve...😃

got to go nw...gd night..😳

🤣 🤣 🤣 !!!!!!!!i thought u r a student!!!!

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

That's an awesome start Rasika.. I liked your narration.. 🤗.. well thought and well described.. story looks promising.. please update soon..

Thanks Hema for lovely comment...🤗

awesome update dear.. continue soon & do pm

Rasika wonderful chapter.. 👏 Your writing is excellent especially Jodha flashback with her master how to handle the sword & also it's good to know that JO learn sword fighting skills from a MASTER not from her brothers Sujamal ..

I am waiting to see JO sword fighting soon...😃

I liked the way Nasir made Jalaal say why he sending him to Ameer & Nasir is sharp enough to keep an eye on Shariff what Jalaal marriage is already fixed not again ( not with Ruqu.😡)... Hope Jalaal doesn't get married , if Nazir is not married then get Ruqu married to him 😉 I am getting irritated with Ruqu name itself thanks to JA CVS 😆

Maina doesn't know that JO is learning sword fighting while only BM knows ?

"Jodha, the future of Amer depends on you. Not your brothers. YOU."

Poor Jo doesn't know that she doesn't need to fight in a war, but instead she has to sacrifice by marrying a KING who will help them fight against Sujamal & Mugals for the sake of Ameer

Jo is not even interested to know the name of the person...

Please Rasika no Suryabhan yaar..even though I am not a fan but I did liked the guy in the show .. Poor guy truly loved JO & died in saving Ameer ... You can please bring NEW NAME as he is a little negative character...

Is this your first FF or you did write earlier also..😳

Waiting for JJ meeting finally, and happy to see a different story & excellent writing from you..🤗

Originally posted by: Sofia3000

great part cant wait for part 4 and the part when jalal and jodha meet
#with_love_bubbles

Thanks sofia...😃

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai

awesome update...
loved the flashback part... the lesson taught to jodha was so true...
thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai

nd update soon... will be waiting for your pm...

Thanks Sona...😛

I was waiting for someones comment on the FB of sword fight...glad you liked it.
The lessons...that was the reason for this parts name: 'The Advice' 1st was from Nasir to Jalal and other was from Jo's Master to Jodha...😊

Originally posted by: akdhaswara

awesome continue soon

Thanks Swara...😳