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Chapter- 16

Jodha proceeds towards Jalal's room. Outside her chambers there should have been darkness, but due to the torches there is sufficient light for a person to walk without stumbling. Jodha while moving notices that the security has been doubled during the night especially outside Jalal's chamber. That is when she reaches Jalal's chamber. All the soldiers who see Jodha are left wondering that what the queen is doing so early, in fact too early?, but nobody dared to ask a question, but many were left spellbound by her beauty. That how beautiful she looked without any Jewellery and open hair, just leaving the transparent dupatta of her letting it cover her beautiful, dark, long hair. She is just about to enter Jalal's chamber when guard stops her and says humbly Shehanshah is sleeping. Jodha decides to go, because she did not want to disturb him. She is about to go, when the guard remembers Jalal's words that it does not matter at what time Jodha comes nobody should stop her. The guard says- Begum sahiba hume muaff kariye ap Shehanshah se mil sakte hai. Jodha looked at him with confusion and asks him - Abhi toh apne kaha tha ki Shehanshah vishram kare rahe. Guard recites the lines that Jalal had told him. Jodha is touched by Jalal's gesture once again she fell in love with him. Jodha is just about to step in Jalal's chamber when she stops and thinks what she will say him, the reason for sleeping off when she had called him yesterday herself. She tries to compose herself as she is getting nervous that what will be his reaction. She speaks to herself while entering- Jodha be calm. Be calm everything will be alright. Hey Kanha! Please help me. She enters the room and finds that the room is engulfed in darkness correction utter darkness. Jodha thinks- What not even a single candle is lit? Now how will I find my way towards his bed? What if I bash with some object? Suddenly her legs begin to go automatically go in one direction. She tried to control it, as her movement could be easily controlled by her mind, but not today. Today her legs were not controlled by her mind, but her heart and after all her heart very well knew that very knew where its owner is. Jalal all this while who is trying is level best to sleep, is disturbed to find somebody's presence in his room. Usually he recognized Jodha by the soft tinkling of her anklet, but today Jodha had removed it. Even, by her aura, but during these times a person's mind works faster than compared to his heart. Yes, Jalal recognized the familiar aura, but he ignored it. Jalal thinks it foe that has entered his chambers for harming him. So, he quietly reaches for his dagger which is kept under his pillow for his self defence. He senses are alarmed at a double rate, ready for attack, but he stills acts as if he is asleep. As, he did not want his foe to know that he is awake Jodha who had been obediently following her heart is not all ready for this nor she had expected this kind of reaction from Jalal. She reaches near Jalal's bed without bashing herself anywhere thankfully she takes a deep breath to compose herself as her nervousness is at its peak. Jalal is ready for attack. Jodha is just about to speak when Jalal turns in a flick of a second he catches Jodha hand that particular hand which us wounded and bandaged, he finds something weird but ignores it and pulls her down. Jodha is hell shocked by his behaviour, her hand begins to pain like hell, but she somehow manages not to scream. She falls on the bed with a bang. Jalal gets up quickly and puts dagger near Jodha's neck and says in a fit of rage- Gustak tumhe kisi ne bheja hai bato? Jodha who is hell scared could not speak word, she could clearly fell that a dagger is kept near her neck. She did not why but tears began flow from her eyes she did not know why. She thought maybe because she is hell scared or because Jalal's grip on her hand is making it pain like hell. Jalal says- Gustak kuch bolo. That is when the dawn comes thankfully Jalal's window is open the first rays of this day enters his room through the window, sufficient enough to light the whole room, but these rays fall on Jodha first. Jalal is shocked to see her that to crying silently and frightened, but his also spellbound and mesmerized by her beauty that how beautiful she looked with open hair and no jewellery. He had to agree that when the first ray of the dawn fell on her face she looked so angelic. These thoughts soon go of when he remembers her frightened face. His face turns pale and he says- Jodha tum yahan? He notices that the dagger is still near her neck so he leaves it and quickly shuffles off it under his pillow. He sees her eyes are closed due to fear, he also notices that he is holding her hand too tightly so he leaves it to Jodha's relief she takes a sigh of relief, but little did she know that her wound became fresh again and it began to bleed and there is fresh blood on Jalal's hand also. Jalal says Jodha ankhe kholiye? She opens her eyes and all her fears are gone at the very sight of him. She hugs him tightly Jalal also reciprocates the same. He breaks the hug and wipes the leftover tears on her checks with his hand which had no blood. He feels guilty for making her cry, but he did not know that it is not him who made cry, but the pain of her wound made her cry. Jodha puts up a fake smiley face under it immense guilt is hidden and says- Shehanshah hum apse kal rat ke liye shama manga chacte the hain. Hum jante hai humne apko bahut thess paunchaiye hai. Hume kirpiye karke shama kar dijiye. Humare sar mai bahut dard ho raha that is liye pata nahi kab ankh lag gaye. Hum shama kar dijiye Shehanshah. Humse kiripye karke naraz mat hoiye. Jodha hated lying, but she could not let him worry nor she could see him in pain that too because of her, but now her fake smile had disappeared and tears had welled up in her eyes. Jodha had no clue about how many times she had said sorry till now. Jalal could clearly see that she was wearing up a smile, but he did not know why. Jalal says smiling- Koi bat nahi Jodha. Humari yeh majal ki hum humari jaan se naraj ho. Humara koi hak nahi hai ki hum apni jaan se naraj ho. Humara hak toh sirf itna hai ki hum apse mohabbat nahi beinthehaa aur bepanha mohabbat kare. Vaise ab apka sar dard kaise hai? He knew that she is lying as he could easily catch her, because she did not know how to lie. Jalal wanted to know the reason as he could clearly see light dark circles under her eyes and her eyes were slightly red in colour due to lack of sleep . He says in his mind- Jodha you cannot lie to me, leave me not anyone .The lines spoken by Jalal made Jodha smile in the midst of her pain, but not for long. Suddenly her wound began to irritate her and burn, she understood her wound is fresh and bleeding again, but she could not go simply. She could not afford to hurt him not today nor tomorrow, never would she hurt him even though if she knew that she is dying. Jodha could not control her pain anymore so she leaves a low cry- Aaah... She bits her tongue and scolds herself for screaming. Jalal gets hell worried by her scream and cups her face with both his hands this time asks her- Kya hua Jodha? Jodha is like now what I should say? She speaks up- Voh Shehanshah... Jalal says- Kya Jodha? Jodha again plasters a smile- Humne humare paon pai apni juthi rakh di thi is liye chek nikal gaye thi. Jalal knew that she is lying so he says - sach mai Jodha? Jodha says in her mind- Oh! Kanah what know? Why am I always stuck in these kinds of situation? Do you enjoy seeing me stuck in like these situation? Come on stop giggling at my condition and help me na please? Jodha replies- ji. Jalal removes his hands from Jodha's check and is shocked to see one side of Jodha cheek coloured red because of her blood, which had recently coloured Jalal's hand too, but the blood had not dried till know and he had no clue that it is blood. Jodha is confused to see Jalal shocked, but inside she kept reciting a prayer like a mantra the prayer's contents are Kanha! Please give me courage and strength to bear the pain. Please I beg you. She had no clue that in the last few minutes how many times she had said this. Jalal thinks what this is red colour on my hand he sees his hand again he got a shock that his hand soaked in red colour and after all he is a warrior so it is very easy for him to guess that it's blood and that too fresh. He thinks that he is not hurt then whose blood is this then he remembers that he had caught Jodha's hand too tightly, maybe she has got hurt. Jalal decides to check and finds that Jodha is hiding both her hands under her shawl. He says- Jodha apna hath dikho? Jodha gives an expression asking him why? Jalal says this time in a louder tone than before says- Jodha humne kuch kaha tumse. Jodha speaks up her eyes are down casted- Shehanshah apko jane ki tayari bhi karni hai na. Ap tayari kare hum kanha ki pooja karke ate hain. She is trying her level best to avoid the situation, but Alas! To no avail. She is just about to leave when she finds herself in the grip of Jalal. Jalal already noticed that she is ready for flight so he encircled his hand around her waist not allowing her to go, because if she is stubborn, he is more stubborn compared to her. If she is trying her level best to hide something, he will try his level best to find out what is he hiding. Jodha who was not excepting this from Jalal had no option left. So, she had to forcibly sit down. Jalal tries to open her shawl, but Jodha stops him saying- Shehanshah hume thand lag rahi hai. Jalal is cent per cent sure that she is hiding something. Jalal says- toh ajaye bistar mai. Jodha says- nahi hum thek hai. Jalal very well knew about her that she never left a chance to stay close to him. Jalal snatches her shawl in a flick of a second and Jodha could not react also because she was not expecting this from him. Now she is waiting for his reaction after seeing her wound. Jalal is shocked to see a bandage on her palm and that too fully soaked in blood, fresh blood. Tears well up in his eyes as he may have seen millions of bloodshed in his life, but he could never see his beloved's blood. It is like a joke that India's greatest warrior King is afraid of seeing blood and that only of his beloved. Jodha notices the tears that are welled up in his eyes, she feels guilty conscious. Jalal speaks up- Yeh kya hai Jodha? Jodha replies calmly- Kuch nahi Shehanshah, bas ek chota sa ghav hai, aur kuch nahi. Jalal little angrily replies- Chota sa ghav Jodha dekho kitna khon beh raha hai. Tum yeh ghav humse chupa rahi thi na? Jodha gives a similar expression to a person who has been caught red handed. Jodha says- nahi Shehanshah, hum theek hai, sach mai. Chinta karne ki koi avayshakta nahi hai. Jalal gets up from the bed, leaving Jodha confused he goes and pours some water in a bowl and takes out a first aid box and comes near Jodha whose is still sitting on the bed. Jalal says- Hume ache se pata hai Jodha ki hume kab chinta karna chaiye, kab nahi. Laye apna hath dikhaye? Jodha says- nahi Shehanshah hum khud kar lenge. Jalal- nahi ap khud nahi karenge. Jodha did not want to get caught that she is afraid of the burning sensation caused by the lep, since her young age, it was always difficult to put lep on her wounds, but her protest were of no use as Jalal is not ready to listen to her. Jodha is left wondering how Jalal knew about her wound. First, he soaks a cloth and wipes the traces of blood from his hand that is when Jodha understands how he had come to know about his wound and then he wipes the blood trace from her check and after that he takes her hand gently with great caution and opens the blood soaked bandage carefully, he is again shocked to see such a deep wound, he questions - Yeh chot apko kaise lagi Jodha? Jodha is just about to speak up when Jalal speaks again and he says- Is bar hum sirf sach suna chacte hain. Jodha obediently recites the incident, but she did not mention that she is busy thinking about him. Jalal scolds her- Kya ap apna khayal nahi rakh sakti hain. Na jane ap kahan khoiye raheti hai? Is liye toh hum apko chod ke jana nahi chacte hain kyunki agar humari mojudgi mai hi itni laparwa ho sakti hai toh humari gair mojudgi kya ho jayega hume pata nahin? Jodha speaks up- Is liye toh humne rat ko sone ka natak kiya tha? Jalal hears it and understand the whole situation that she did not want to worry him. Jalal says- Kya? This when Jodha notices that she has opened the whole truth herself. She quickly says- voh toh humne yun hi bol diya tha Shehanshah. Jalal says - Sach mai? Jodha keeps quiet as she very well knew her lie has been caught. Jalal says- Chalo chod in bato ko . Mai maram laga deta hon. Jodha says- nahi Shehanshah. Jalal says- Agar ap jiddi hai toh hum kam nahi hai. Jodha pleads for the last time- Nahi Shehanshah. Jalal cleans her wound and is just about to put the lep when Jodha takes her hand back; Jalal is surprised by her behaviour. He gently holds her hand, but this time a little tightly so that she cannot take her hand back again. Jodha speaks- Hume lep se dar lagta hai Shehanshah. Jalal could not believe his ears and breaks into a fit of laughter. Jodha gets annoyed and says- Is liye humne apko nahi batya. Jaye jab dekho humara majak udate rahte hain. Jalal manages to control his laughter- Hume muaff kar dijiye Jodha hum apni hasi rok na paye. Kyonki hume yakin nahi hota ki humari Jungli billi, humari sherni ko lep se darti hai. Jodha speaks up- Jaise ap kisi cheej se nahi darte. Tanko(stitches) se kise dar lagta hai. Jalal very well knew that she is pointing him. So, he keeps quiet. He says Jodha hume dekhiye Jodha keeps on seeing him when Jalal says- lo ho gaya. Jodha says - Kya Shehanshah? Jalal says - apki Mahram pati ho gaya. Jodha looks at him with awe and Kisses him on his forehead gently. Jalal, who had not expected this, becomes exalted. He says- Agar humare aisa karne se inam mile ga toh hum aisa roj karenge. Jodha says - Shehanshah ap bhi na. Jalal says- magar hume inam kahi aur chaiye. Jodha asks him with confusion- Kahan chaiye apko apka inam ? Jalal points his fingers at his lips and says- Yahan par. Jodha says- Shehanshah ap bohot sharati ho gaye hain. Hum ja rahe hain. Before Jalal could caught hold of her she runs quite far from him. Jalal makes a cute face as if he is upset and closes his eyes and protests- Hume humara inam chaiye? Jodha is just awestruck by his cuteness that she goes tippy toe towards Jalal without even letting him know and gently kisses on his lips and runs off outside the room. Jalal whose eyes were closed till know, open wide open. He turns red. Jodha who is standing outside his room says- Kya hua Shehanshah ap lal kyon ho gaye? Jalal says - Jodha and gets up to run behind her, but she runs of before he could catch her.

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Humdard Lyrics

Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi
Toh khuda se maang lun
Mohalat main ik nayi
Rehna hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jaana nahi
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai

Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri
Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri
Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai

Wooo...

Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri
Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri
Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye
Teri meri jaan jo ek hui
Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan
Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai

hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai...

After a few hours Jalal is ready to leave. Jodha does the Pooja and bids him adieu, but before going Jalal kisses on her forehead and promises her that he will return as soon as possible. Somebody present there is burning with jealousy, it is none other than Rukaiya. Jalal leaves. Rukaiya also leaves to meet the person who is providing her the poison. The person providing her poison is none other than the Hakima's assistant. She informs him after giving the slow poison she will be not able to feel anything, her senses will soon fade away. Rukaiya slaps her and says- I want her to feel the pain do you get it? Give me something that will weaken her, but her senses will not fade away. She gives her potion and strong poison and says her dare you open your mouth otherwise she knows the consequences. Rukaiya says- Jodha tumne jo alvida kaha hai Jalal se, voh tum harr akhri alvida hoga. Agar Jalal mera nahi ho saka toh tumhara bhi nahi ho sakta.

Promo- Jalal gets attacked by enemies and one of the spy's rushes on his stallion to inform Jalal about Rukaiya's plan, and Rukaiya decides to execute her plan in the evening.

Done no proof reading. So, sorry 4 d errors. If you liked it plzzz hit d like button and cmnt. Criticism's also accepted. Thanks 4 reading.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Very beautiful n lovely update
Jodha n jalal are so much in love...finally both are in peace talking to each other...,thier kiss part was nice
Waiting for ruqs execution in next part

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