Tujh Bin Jiya Jaye Kaise ss updated chappy 20 on pg 67 on 6/09/15 - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anabella


Sure dear very soon i'll kick her out . I'll update my other ss soon



Oh gosh I m so sorry dr instead of other 3 ffs I hve written 2ffs
Not only u dr I m also bhulakad I forgot about fasle
I m so sorry
Now I m waiting for all u r updates
Update na soon
Thnx for reminding me
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: renuganesh



Oh gosh I m so sorry dr instead of other 3 ffs I hve written 2ffs
Not only u dr I m also bhulakad I forgot about fasle
I m so sorry
Now I m waiting for all u r updates
Update na soon
Thnx for reminding me

i''l update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice chapter ye rukaiyaa har jagah ek hi kaam karti hai jo ko hurt karna I hope jo ko kuch na ho Jo lost in Ja thought and get injured poor girl hope she will fine soon Love the idea of pretending sleep excited for next chapter update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yurimehta11

very nice chapter ye rukaiyaa har jagah ek hi kaam karti hai jo ko hurt karna I hope jo ko kuch na ho Jo lost in Ja thought and get injured poor girl hope she will fine soon Love the idea of pretending sleep excited for next chapter update soon

thanks 4 d cmnt di
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

<font size="6">I have been reading lots of ss ,ff and os . I'minspiredto write one.This is my first ss. Thanks to everybody who has inspire me.Please give me your opinions. If is bad then i'll stop writing. Here is the prologue</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="7"> Prologue</font>
<font size="6">Both the twins have died. Jalal blames Jodha for the death of the kids. He accuses her of being a careless mother. He breaks all bonds and ties with her. She is left heartbroken and depressed. Rukaiya is happy to know that Jalal hates Jodha . Zennat and Qasim are caught. Jalal realises his mistake. He does not find Jodha anywhere. The whole palace is searched, but, there is no trace of her. Is it too late. Has jalal lost jodha forever? Where is she ? if you want to know what happened please read further.</font>
<font size="6">Seriously speaking how was it? Jhota, chappals, tomatoes, eggs anything😆😆😆. Please do comment and like. Thank you again .😊</font>
<font size="6"> Index😊</font>
<font size="6">Prologue- Pg 1</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 1- Pg 3</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 2- Pg 4</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 3- Pg 7</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 4- Pg 7</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 5-Pg 10</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 6- Pg 12</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 7- Pg 14</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 8- Pg 17</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 9- Pg 20</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 10- Pg 22</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 11- Pg 25</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 12- Pg 27</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 13- Pg 31</font>
<font size="6">Chapter 14- Pg 36</font>

update soon plzzz very nice concept plz update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Vaise toh I was not planning to update till feb, but when I saw the Ruklal scene it made me feel sick. It was so Yuck! Disgusting, but I still hoped for Akdha and No Akdha moment made me more sick. So, to make myself feel better I began typing. So here u go.

I'm gonna end this ss soon in another 5 or more chappy's cause I've no more ideas to continue this ss. sorry

CHAPTER-15

Jalal is surprised to see Jodha sleeping and he thinks why Jodha has slept because she has only invited me for dinner? He says- Jodha.. , but he gets no response. He feels bad and he is about to go out when Moti enters Jodha's room with dinner for Jodha. She is also confused seeing Jodha

asleep. Jalal asks moti that why did moti get dinner for Jodha when she is sleeping? Moti justifies herself by saying Jodha was awake before she had gone to fetch dinner for her. Jalal looks at her confused. Then moti understands that Jodha is acting as she did not want to reveal anything in front of Jalal. Moti says that she was quite sleepy when she went to get dinner. So, she might have slept off. He says ok and goes away with lousy and sad face. Jodha sees' this as she is sneak peeking through quilt, she is saddened at this and says - hume shama karna Shehanshah humari mansha apko thes paunchane ki nahi thi. Moti sits on the couch and says to Jodha that Shehanshah is hurt by your behaviour, you should go and talk to him. Jodha says- no I cannot go. Moti says- Can't you see how hurt he is by your behaviour. Come on go and inform him the reason behind your harsh behaviour. Jodha says- I cannot go why don't you understand that he will be surely hurt by harsh behaviour and I will not be able to forgive myself for that, but on the other hand the pain I am giving him right know will is much smaller compared to the pain he will get when sees' me hurt. Why can't you understand my point of view. Please try and understand Moti. Whatever has happened in the past few days has changed both mine and Sheanshah's life drastically. Our love has increased more than ever it could have ever increased, not only our love has increased, but Shehanshah has changed a lot. He... before Jodha could speak up further Moti says- But Jodha... Jodha speaks up cutting Moti (to Moti's disappointment) Moti first listen to me. Moti cannot you see nowadays he care about me the way he has never cared for anyone. You know I feel like I am on the seventh sky when he cares about and his love his so pure, it's purer than a mother's milk. His love makes me feel that I am in Heaven. (she said all of this blushing)You know what when we were married I thought what kind of husband have I got? A husband who is more like horrendous monster and less human. I use to cruse my fate. I hated him to my very core and my blood boiled and my bile rose at the very sight I saw. Slowly I understood that he was not a monster rather he was a prey of circumstances. Slowly I understood he is person who has built walls around himself so that other's would hate him or dislike him, because he was afraid of emotions, because he thought emotions made a person weak. Slowly I began loving him more than my life and this love gets deeper and deeper with each passing day deeper than blood. Do you remember Moti when we were young do you remember we use to make fun of the statement that love is thicker than blood. (Moti nods indicating that yes she remembers) Today see the irony I agree this statement. Today I laugh at myself for hating such a good person. Today I think what good had I done in my past life that I got such a loving and caring husband. You know what Moti I feel blessed to have a husband like him. It is a privilege for me to be his wife. Moti you know he cannot see a single scratch over my body and know you are asking me to go and tell him the reason for my harsh behaviour. I cannot Moti it is not all easy for me. For me this wound is ordinary, but for him this wound is extraordinary. I cannot see his face which bears my pain and I cannot see him in pain. When I see pain in his eyes because of e my heart bleeds. Right know I cruse myself for hurting him. And I do not want him to neglect his duties as a Emperor because not one, but thousands of life depends on him. Do you get Moti why cannot I go to him? Moti Jodha calls, but when she gets no response she sees' Moti sleeping on the couch. Jodha gets annoyed and jumps out of her bed and wakes up Moti and says angrily- How come Moti you are sleeping I was talking to you something important rather I was talking about my emotions and you slept. Moti stands straight and says - No Jodha I have each and every word you have spoken properly. Jodha says- Ok you have heard each and every word I have spoken right? Moti says - Yes. Jodha says- Then tell me what I had said right know. Moti thinks- oh! Kanah I am stuck, totally, badly stuck. What should I do? Jodha says - Moti speak up. Moti speaks up fumbling- You said Blood is thicker than love. Jodha says- wrong! I said the opposite of what you just said. I just do not want to talk to you. Go away right know. Moti says - see Jodha I'm sorry. I promise I will not repeat this again. Jodha thinks for a while whether to forgive Moti or not and the she says- I have forgiven. Now you listen what I was saying. Moti thinks Oh kanah! Not again for the past few days I'm hearing this from Jodha that Shehanshah did this for me, Shehanshah is so cute, Shehanshah Love me a lot and blah... blah... actually etc...She is never tired talking about him, but I am tired listening. By the way there is no fault with her that she keeps on speaking nonstop about Shehanshah after all I so agree actually badly agree that Love is so blind. If anybody needs a proof here is a live example of blind love. Jodha turns to go and sit on the bed. Moti finds her chance to escape and she runs off to the servant quarters for sleeping. Jodha sees this and says- I will not talk to you Moti anymore. I wanted to talk to you because my mind got drifted away from Jalal, because when I was talking to you I was drifted away from the pain. Jodha blows the candle and goes in here bed. On the other hand Jalal is busy thinking about some political work so that his mind would get drifted away from Jodha, but it was of no use. So he also blows of the candle and goes to bed, but his mind keep on asking - why did Jodha sleep off? It is midnight by know. They both keep tossing and turning on their respective bed for the rest of the night. Both were thinking about each other Jalal thinks should I go and ask her why did sleep off? No she may be asleep right know it is not good to disturb her and Jodha thinks should I go and explain him why I slept off because he is hurt by my behaviour? No he may be asleep right know it is not good to disturb. Only some time was left for dawn Jodha could not hold herself anymore the guilt of hurting him was killing her and she could not let the guilt hang on her head all the day. So she gets up from her bed and covers herself with a shawl as it is cold outside and proceeds towards Jalal's room.

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I know this was the most bakwas chappy I've ever updated. Sorry, I promise next one will be more interesting. Sorry 4 d errors. If u like this crap plzzz hit the like button and cmnt. Thanks 4 reading.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a cute chappy😉..loved their restlessness...
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Poor moti tired of listening about jalal from jodha
In short totally lubby dubby chappy...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sonali96

Such a cute chappy😉..loved their restlessness...

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Poor moti tired of listening about jalal from jodha
In short totally lubby dubby chappy...🤗


thanks 4 d cmnt dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

beautiful emotional update


thanks 😊

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