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Posted: 10 years ago
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its awesome update dear.. continue soon & do pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful ch dear.
Finally my confusion is as to who veer n aShta are 😆 .
N wonder how both aastha n veer gonna react to wa h other after their wonderful bike experience 😆 .
N plz do post the character sketch dear, as I m still confused for arjun n his sis 😆

N thanks for the pm dear. Continue soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome continue soon and do pm
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Very interesting please pm me from next time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Hey.. Nice update
Plz continue soon.
Pm me plz whenever u update.
I am sending buddy request.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
thank you so much!!
will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Awesome chappy!!! You write really well..
veer n aastha's 1st encounter was nice n their fight was cute😆..now they r going to marry 😳
who is arjun...??
.have been reading this FF for quite a while and I love it!! Do update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 4



Anandi, her son Veer, Veer's Grandparents Shiv and Kala, Aastha's parents Jagat and Sheetal, were all seated in the living arena of the Haveli. Ganga and the other maids were running here and there to serve snacks and drinks to the guests. The whole room burst into friendly chatter. But two souls were in their own world.

Aastha and Veer kept staring at each other amidst the chaos in the hall.

Aastha tore away her gaze and focused it on the juice in her hand. Her head was aching. She couldn't shake of what happened as soon as their car entered the vicinity of Kishangad.

"And we finally reach kishangad!" Sheetal beamed at Jagat. Aastha who was sitting in the front seat smiled at her parents who were seated in the back seat.

But what made her loose her sanity was the two roads that were getting closer. Infront of them, the road was divided into two. One that leads to Roopgarh and the other that led to Kishangad.

Roopgarh and Kishangad was separated by two things, one a huge river and the other was a huge hill. Both of them were blocked for people to travel between two sides, the only way anyone could reach Roopgarh was through the roads.

Aastha read the huge ASI board that mentioned,

Entering the borders of Roopgarh before sunrise and after sunset is strictly prohibited. Legal action would be taken against anybody who does not follow these instructions

There is no electricity or accommodation facility inside Roopgarh.

Please Register your names and contact details on the checkpost outside the Main Gates.

A huge wind blew in their direction which hit directly to her face. Aastha coughed but the voices in her hand started with their act.

She could hear gunguro sound and also laughter of kids.

"Mohan!! Pakdo muje! Haha!" a small girl probably of 4 years old started running around the palace holding her lehenga in her hands. A small boy probably of 10 years age ran behind her "Array! Ruko Meera!! Pakad liya toh chodoonga nahi.. Ruko Meera!"

"Mohaan.." A voice a teenager rang in her ears. "Mein intezaar kar rhi hoon Mohan.. kab aoge tum?"

"Mohan! Tum sirf mere hoo! Sirf mere.."

"Meera, yeh mohan sirf tumara hai.."

"Mohan, iss meera se shaadi kab karoge? Ab intezaar nahi hota.. muje tumari patni banni hai!" Meera said hugging mohan.

"Bahut jald Meera.. bahut jald.. Ab tumse juda hoke nahi reh sakte hum!"

"Mohan!! Tum aise kar sakte ho?" A tear strained eyes asked him. she fell on the ground crying..

"Mohan! Yeh tumne sahi nahi kia! Buktoge iski keemat!! Mohan sirf Meera ka hai!!" a angry woman yelled holding a handful of mud in her hand.

"Mohan! Dhoka diya hai tumne muje!!"

"Jalao mat muje..!! Muje bachaooo!! Bachaaooo muje!!!!" A woman who was burning alive screamed shaking the gates of a huge fort.

"Aaoge tum sab!! Tum sab aaoge yahan!! Intezaar karooongi mein!!! Intezaaar!" she screamed.

Aastha jerked back in her seat. There was a checkpost at a distance. They were on their way to Kishangad.

Aastha wiped the sweat from her face. She could see the way to Roopgarh at a distance. Goosbumps ran over her skin. Once again she could hear the song and the sound of gungoroo..

"Aaa... aaa..aaa..

Mere saathiya sun, Payal ki run jun..

Mere saathiya sun, Payal ki run jun..

Saath hai apna janam janam ka

Apna hai yeh rishtha saatho janam ka

Nach yeh man mora chanan chanan chan chan!

Mere saathiya sun, Payal ki run jun.. hooo oh..

Mere saathiya sun, Payal ki run jun.."

The song was soo powerful that she felt 1000 voices were singing it at different times. It was a jumble of lyrics and hit her head hard. She felt her head would explode.

She shut her ears with her hand and screamed NO!

"Aastha! Tum teek ho?" Sheetal asked pulling her out of her misery. Aastha started panting.. "Haan.. Haan Ma.. mein teek hoon.. I just.. that wind.. it hit my eyes.. that all. I need water"

Sheetal gave her a bottle of water, she gulped down some water and stared outside. It was as if that world was calling her.

She kept staring at it with passion. The driver started the engine and the car sped through the way. She kept arching her neck towards Roopgarh at every curve the drive took. It was as if there was strong pull towards the place.

"Mohann" she heard the voice again. A voice full of passion, desire, wait and honesty!

"Aastha!! Whats wrong nanhi are you okay?" Sheetal asked touching aastha's forehead. She was sweating profusely.

"Um.. haa.. I am fine.. I am just.. kind of tired.. er.. Ma.. shall I go and see the Haveli?"

Sheetal thought for a while, Aanadi spoke before that, "Ofcourse! You were so young the last time you came here! Ah, Veer, why don't you show her around?"

"What? Me?"

"Haan, why not beta? Go, show her around!"

"Okay.. Come on.." Veer said.

Aastha smiled and went with him.

Aanandi and Sheetal smiled, "They look cute together!"

Jagat laughed, "Toh shaadi ki tayyari karlu?"

"Haan! Kar dijiye!" Sheetal smiled at her husband.

Aanandi beamed, "I am so happy today!!"

"By the way, where is Maya?" Sheetal asked not finding Maya around.

"She had been to cottage last night. I guess she is still sleeping there.. Usse itni jaldi subah nahi hoti.." Anandi laughed.

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Guys its my vacations so, i have become a bit busy with roaming around the places. hope u understand. and thats why the delayed update!!


will try and update next chapter very soon!!


Please get me more readers and i will be very regular promise 😉


Love

nams! :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
it was as always awesome nams!

but i didnt get one thing..astha was in hall with veer right..so how she was in car?? and then back to hall?? 😲
im really confused about this yaar


waiting for your next update 👏
Edited by anael24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Nice update
Waiting for astha and veer confrontation
And this roopgarh dreams of astha is very intersting n mysterious

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