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surabhi chandgothia

@chandgothia

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

All the three parts were superb...amazing...loved dem...

Plz koi mirza and jodha ka scene mat banana...scene as in love wala...and shivani and jalal ka...i knw u wont...simply clearing it...

Now congrates on your new thread...plz next update jaldi dena...itna time laga kar nahi...and plz thoda lamba lamba updates dena...i simply love reading it

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Ann Louis

@Anaya13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

I swear like everyone updates when I'm sleeping 🤣😡

Edited by Anaya13 - 10 years ago

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swatiluthra

@swatiluthra

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Congrats for the new thread Aisha 👏
N wat a beautiful ch and a long one too 😆 😊 . Loved it. Finally jalal n Jo are starting to feel something different regarding each other.
N loved how ja got jealous that Jo uses mirza wallet. N that bechara mirza , must be thinking kahin dishes na wash karni pad Jain 😆 . Truly dear, I wonder where u get all these funny thoughts 😆 and again beautiful poems choices.

Continue soon dear. Can't wait to c both ja n Jo reaction on not sharing the same room .
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Thanks for the pm 😛

Edited by swatiluthra - 10 years ago

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

woah!! loved the comments! will reply later!! a bit tired now🤣

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Lasya

@Dexterity

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Firstly...Congo for your new thread...

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Lasya

@Dexterity

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

"ohk!! done!, now can i go to the wash room, or you will accompany me?" asked jalal sarcastically.

"oh! no problem!! i will give you a company, letz go!" said jodha and was all ready to go inside.

"are you mad!! idiot" said jalal and quickly walked inside the wash room, jodha laughed her heart out seeing this jalal.

😆

A lovely part 1 of the chapter...full of fun and stirring👏

Edited by lasyap3 - 10 years ago

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Lasya

@Dexterity

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

"you know!! my mom says that every life in this world has been painted by god's own hands, and we should be thankful to him for that, and you should be grateful to him because when he painted your life, he included a lovely colour that is - me"

That was a beautiful line😉

Edited by lasyap3 - 10 years ago