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~~Story So Far~~
jodha nd jalal -- two different people!
for one life is full of enjoyment but for the other...life is to become the best...his work is his first priority, attitude is his second name nd ego is much bigger than anything!
the two souls are tied together for their whole life in a relation, named MARRIAGE!
For one, marriage was an agreement and the other, was not mature enough to understand it's actual meaning!!
their life turned upside down when they started living together!
if he would make rules then she would break them!!-- this was their relationship..
But things were changing slowly without letting them know!
As the time passed, her tantrums, her cravings, her stubbornness, her childishness became habitual to him.
On the other hand, jodha was feeling something new, something unknown, totally undefined!
she started showing certain right over him, she was craving to spend time with him, while jalal was just avoiding the changes in his life, he was trying his best to not get affected by her, he was just not ready to accept that his heart had already started developing feelings for jodha.
(for those who are confused about their ages :-
JODHA - 16 years - 11th standard
JALAL - 20 years - 2nd year of his college + owner of khan's industries!)
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"that means tomorrow is my day?" asked jodha to which jalal nodded.

"matlab you will be with me, the whole day without any works, just what i like, yes!! you will be there with me without any works" said jodha all happily, to which jalal looked at her in horror, as he thought that her wish would be for an hour for so, but here she was thinking of 24 hours, and this was like a punishment for jalal, as a whole day without any work, that means cancelling a lot of meetings.

||Chapter - 8|| {part 1}

||No Day But Today||

"wait...just wait!! a whole day? what are you saying? a whole day?? ...why...when?? are you mad?" asked jalal, not thinking what he was saying, his mind was just not working, he was shocked, may be beyond that, he is addicted to his work, it is his habbit, it never happened in the last 3 years that he had ever stopped his work or ever took a leave, and this sudden information was just unacceptable, a day, with this girl who was standing opposite to him, with her hands resting on her waist, eyebrows raised, wide eyes and her mouth in the shape of '0', and was just ready to say something, he looked at her and then at his mother in law, she was smiling at him, he pleaded her by his eyes, to support him.

"what i am saying?? i am saying the truth pagloo, you are such a lier, you only promised me a few minutes ago that tomorrow is my day and now, see this man, he is denying me, me!! jodha singh!! huh!" said jodha in her over dramatic way.

"ahan!! not singh, khan, jodha khan!" said mirza, still engrossed in his phone, but was listening the whole drama.

"haan haan!! khan! but see him, mummmaaa" whined jodha pointing towards jalal.

"beta!! he is not free, try to understand" said maina to which jalal nodded quickly, agreeing with his mother in law.

"nobody loves me!!" cried jodha and again went to her room, but only after throwing mirza's phone on the floor, while the boy just got a shock of his life, his bestest friend crashed his phone on the floor, yeah!! it was common for him, but still what was his mistake, he was just sitting on the couch, busy chatting with his friends, but who can tell him that jodha was super angry and she just wanted it to show this to his brother.

"bhaii!! see!! what your wife has done!! see bhai see!! my mobile got a scratch, see bhai, it got a scratch, A SCRATCH bhaii!!!" acted mirza picking up his phone and showing it to jalal, and continued his acting, so as to get a new one.

"SHUT UP!! just shut your mouth for few minutes" said jalal, as he was already frustrated by jodha's reaction and now his own brother, these two devils are just impossible, and their over reaction to 'not so big things' is just another irritating problem for jalal.

"bhai...but it got..a ...a scratch" said mirza still caressing his phone's screen.

"then go and get some medicines for your phone" said jalal irritated by mirza's continuous complains.

"bhaaaii" cried mirza.

"you will get a new one in few minutes, now just go from here" said a frustrated jalal to which mirza smirked and moved to his room.

"Open the door idiot" said jalal knocking the door, while maina went downstairs.

"noo!! i will never open this door" said jodha in an emotional voice, while she was just trying her new nail polish.

"are you mad? why you are like this?" asked jalal, now in a bit harsh tone, to which jodha frowned and looked at her nails, silver glittery nail paint is complimenting her beautiful hands.

"see kanha!! my husband is such a moron!! i just asked him a wish, but see he is so bad, just help your bachi kanha" said jodha loudly, carrying her acting to the next level,i.e , overacting.

"oh..ohkk!, tomorrow is your day, now open the door" said jalal as politely as he can.

"oh you are so sweet pagloo" said jodha after opening the door.

"you were acting?" asked jalal in an irritated tone, and pushed her a little so as to enter the room.

"noo!! i was not acting, i was just trying to make you understand that we should not break our promises, you know it is bad manners" said jodha trying to defend herself.

"leave it, and yes! dare to come in my study, i have to do a lot of work today because of your stupid wish" said jalal and left to his study while jodha jumped in happiness and picked up her phone.

****

"sweet as sugar, hard as ice, hurt me once, i will kill you twice:P" jodha updated her new status, which was just showing her fun mood.

"I am in my bed, you are in your bed! one of us is in the wrong place" edited mirza - his new status.

"work so hard that one day your signature will be called an autograph" updated shivani.

The three friends updated their new facebook status at the same time, it was common for them, whenever they would be happy or sad, the only thing they would do is just to change their facebook statuses.

"lolz! did you saw shivani's status?" asked mirza coming to jodha's room.

"i saw yours" laughed jodha.

"what was wrong in that?" asked mirza with his signature wink.

"your dirty mind" said jodha, slapping his arm lightly

"i don't have a dirty mind, i just have a sexy imagination" said mirza with a smirk.

"but did you ever noticed that her status are always regarding hard work or success?"asked jodha looking at mirza.

"yup!! she is a lil studious, naah!! she is a little boring, may be a little more than that, and of course a little scared" laughed mirza

"but still you likes her" commented jodha to which mirza looked at her.

"yeah!!! she is different, and kind of challenging too" joked mirza to which jodha kept quiet as she is now a friend of shivani too, and she liked her, shivani was quiet, descent and good by heart.

"but your status was the weirdest" said mirza trying to change the topic.

"arre!! what was wrong in my status, it was so cute" laughed jodha.

"mirzaa!! beta come here" called maina, to which mirza ran from there leaving jodha alone.

~~~

"mom!!! i am hungry" said jodha as soon as she reached the kitchen.

"hi hungry! i am mom" said maina trying to have some fun with her daughter.

"MOM! i am serious" said an irritated jodha.

"no! you are hungry" said maina teasing jodha.

"you are joking" said jodha in an angry voice.

"no, i am mom" said maina and winked at mirza who was laughing seeing jodha's irritated face.

"huh!! i don't want to eat" said a super irritated jodha.

"see jalal!! you made my dodo like this, she is now getting irritated on small issues,just like you, pehle toh aise nhi thi" said maina with fake tears.

"mum! you are an bad actor, but better than your idiot daughter" said jalal to which jodha again shouted in anger.

****

"idiot, from where you got this idea of spending one day with me?" asked jalal.

"nothing! just mirza told me" lied jodha so as to save herself.

"ohh!! umm.. can you inform mirza that i am waiting for him in my gym" said jalal in his rude voice.

"mirza, pagloo is calling you, in his gym" said jodha and ran from there as she know something is going to happen.

"what is wrong with her?" asked mirza to himself, and went to jalal's gym.

"bhaai!! you called me" asked mirza scanning his brother's gym.

"yup!! i am really very impressed with you" said jalal sarcastically.

"really?" asked an excited mirza

"yeah! and for this you deserves something! isn't it?" said jalal

"noo...noo...i haven't done anything" said a fearful mirza as soon as he saw a pair of boxing gloves in his elder brother's hands.

"ohk!! so what about a boxing match" asked jalal to which mirza shook his head, and in the next second he got a punch on his face, just below his eyes, but a light one.

"bhaii!! face!! no bhai not on face" screamed mirza and ran to the other corner.

"ohk!! no face" said jalal and next punch was on his chest.

"bhai!! not on chest, my heart is there" pleaded mirza, but it was of no use.

****

"are you ohk?" asked jodha with an uneasy smile, as soon as she saw mirza coming out from the gym, she was initially relieved as mirza's face was fine but the way he was walking, something had happened for sure.

"i h..hate you jodha" said an angry mirza.

"arre yrr!! sry naa!!" said jodha holding her ears.

"it won't work" said mirza walking towards his room.

"i will do the first aid" said jodha taking the medicine from mirza's hand and started applying it on his arm.

"is it hurting?" asked jodha pressing his wound a little harder.

"no i am enjoying it" cried mirza in pain.

"arre sry naa!! you know naa, i can't tell him that i want to spend some time, i mean just a day with him" said jodha applying ointment on his wound.

"do you like bhai?" asked mirza turning towards her.

"noo" said jodha

"really?" asked mirza, this time looking at her eyes.

"i don't know" said jodha with a sigh. which was showing her disappointment that she is not able to name the feeling, her new feeling.

"you do? isn't it?" asked mirza to which jodha pressed his wound harder.

"are you mad! it is hurting" screamed mirza in pain, to which jodha laughed and left the room throwing a pillow on his face.

****

"you know your brother is such a big flirt" said jodha sitting opposite to jalal while he was not paying any attention to her, he was in his study, dealing with one of the most important case, and then all of sudden jodha entered and sat opposite to him with crossed legs.

"you should read his status" laughed jodha but still jalal didn't said anything to which jodha pouted.

"you know yesterday he updated that - 'i wanna do bad things with her', ab tell me who is 'her' here?" asked jodha to which jalal again didn't answered.

"and you know this time what he updated..." jodha was about to say something but was stopped by jalal's stare.

"i know my brother well, anything else?" asked jalal closing his file and keeping his mobile and laptop side, looking at her.

"umm...nothing" said jodha concious by his glares.

"then can we sleep?" asked jalal and moved out of the study leaving a pouting jodha.

"you never talks to me" complained jodha walking behind him.

"what you want to talk now ?" asked jalal settling himself on the bed.

"anything, there are so much things to talk" said jodha excitedly.

"right!! so if i will talk to you then your tomorrow's plan will get cancel. is it fine with you?" asked jalal

"noo!! not at all" said jodha hurriedly!

"then sleep" snapped jalal and turned off the light.

Jodha looked at him and pouted - "he is such a pagloo" cribbed jodha and slept at her side of bed.

~MORNING~

Jodha woke up as soon as the alarm rang, she rubbed her eyes and a smile adorned her lips, she looked at jalal, he was still asleep, she glanced at the wall clock, it was correct 5 at the morning, she looked around the room, there was nothing to do at this hour , she looked at cotton, he was also sleeping, while sleep was far away from her.

Today was not a usual day for her, there was something different that day which was unusual from the rest of the days, she was feeling something new, excited, which she never felt in the previous years of her life, may be the excitement of spending a whole day with her new feeling, which she feels when she is near jalal, when he is with her.

"uhh!! you wake up so soon" asked jalal disturbing her train of thoughts, jodha looked at him and smiled, "his voice sounds a little more sexy at morning" thought jodha.

"yeah!! itz my day, you forgot?" asked jodha going behind him.

"listen idiot! i have some work today, and we have to leave tomorrow for arjun's wedding, so! lot of work is pending, i hope you will understand what i am trying to say" said jalal with lot of patience in his voice, trying to make her understand.

"excuse me!!! but you promised me!! i don't know anything!! today is mine day, bass!!" said a hyper jodha.

"not today but some other day" said jalal

"no day but today!!" said jodha with a confirmed voice.

"uhh...ohk!! we will go for your shopping at 4 in the evening" said jalal, knowing that there's nothing in talking with her.

"what do you mean by that, you said that today is my day, and the day has already started, it means whole day, 24 hours, you have to be with me, that's it!" screamed jodha.

"what the hell you mean by 24 hours, a few hours are more than enough for your stupid shopping, idiot!" said jalal.

"when i said that we will only go for shopping, we will enjoy the whole day together" said jodha with an excited voice.

"you are joking? right?" asked jalal stepping a step backwards, as he was a little afraid, not really afraid! but spending a day with jodha is like something he would never wish to do.

"no!! i am not joking, and i thought khan's never break promises, maybe it is just a rumour" said jodha knowing that now it came to his self respect, his ego and his words, he wouldn't refuse now for sure!

"ohk!! done!, now can i go to the wash room, or you will accompany me?" asked jalal sarcastically.

"oh! no problem!! i will give you a company, letz go!" said jodha and was all ready to go inside.

"are you mad!! idiot" said jalal and quickly walked inside the wash room, jodha laughed her heart out seeing this jalal.

(continued below)

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chapter 8 {part 2}

Jalal entered his room all ready for his work out, but as soon as he entered, he saw jodha all ready in her black track suit, with her hairs tied up in a pony, and yeah! her sports shoes.

"are you going somewhere?" asked jalal

"yess!! WE are going to beach" said jodha showing her million dollar smile.

"idiot!! you are really stupid! i agreed that i will be there with you today, but let i do my work outs and all" said jalal frustratingly, this promise is going to be a tough job for him.

"i know!! but as today is my day then there will be a change in your routine, i mean today we, together will go for a jog" said jodha and dragged him out without listening him, not even a word.

~ JUHU BEACH, Mumbai~

"hey!! i think we should stop now" said jodha, trying to catch jalal's speed

"half n hour more" said jalal jogging a bit faster.

"hey we are jogging from the past 45 minutes" said an irritated jodha.

"i din't told you to cancel my work outs" taunted jalal.

"uhh!! leave it!! umm...! do you believe in god?" asked jodha, running a bit faster, so as to catch his speed.

"no! not really" said jalal

"are you mad!! you know everyone in this world, you, me or anyone is because of him"said jodha with joint hands and looked upwards "kanha, forgive him, bacha hai" jodha send a silent prayer to her kanha.

"how you can say this?" mocked jalal.

"you know!! my mom says that every life in this world has been painted by god's own hands, and we should be thankful to him for that, and you should be grateful to him because when he painted your life, he included a lovely colour that is - me" said jodha to which jalal looked at her, that look was not of teasing or anything else, it was a real look, a genuine one, which jodha had never seen in the past few months.

"we should leave" said jalal and jogged faster leaving jodha behind, deep lost in her thoughts.

****

~ Neptune Magnet Mall, Mumbai~

Jodha and jalal just entered this mall of Mumbai after a hard time in handling the crowd, security and media.

"Wow!! itz so beautiful! and so big! i mean you never brought me here!" said jodha looking at all the directions.

"oh now you want me to bring you here , from 5 at the morning, you are behind me and now, your demands are increasing" said an irritated jalal as he was tired listening her useless talks, and yes! her rule of not touching his own phone, it was like a punishment for him, but still! he was himself confused why he was still fulfilling her wish, if he really want, he can deny her but knowing this too, he was not stopping her childish wish, maybe because, he too was liking it, but how can he? it can't be possible, he never changed himself for anyone, and neither today he will do something like this,he made a note regarding this in his brain.

"hey letz go there" said jodha and dragged him to ladies section.

"how's this?" asked jodha showing jalal a pink colour lehenga.

"how could i know, i never came for shopping like this" said jalal, much in embarrassment as the sales- girls were looking at him.

"i think red colour will be best for arohi di's wedding" said jodha and showed him two red colour traditional dresses.

"tell me this or this?" asked jodha making him face her.

"yaah yaah this one is nice." said jalal quickly, so as to stop this guessing session.

"matlab this is not good?" asked jodha with a pout.

"then take this!" said jalal with a loud voice.

"but you said this one" said jodha showing him the other dress.

"don't ask me, i don't know about these dresses" snapped jalal.

"umm you are confusing me" said jodha

"then buy both" said jalal

"wait!! let i see" said jodha and searched mirza's wallet for money.

"why his's wallet is with you" asked jalal

"shh!! don't tell him! i took it but itz a secret between us, actually i don't have any money, so from where i will buy these clothes?" said jodha to which jalal frowned.

"i am here for paying your bills" said jalal firmly and took the wallet from jodha's hands, she was his responsibility, or maybe because he wanted to, he started showing his right over her.

"no no!! you go and pay that ruqaiyah's bill" said jodha and snatched the wallet.

"from where ruqaiyah came?" asked jalal.

"she was always there?" said jodha

"she was not! you are bringing her in between us, everywhere, even in our talks"

"oh really?"

"yeah!" said an equally frustrated jalal.

"may be! it can be true, but itz because of you!" said jodha.

"huh!! now! itz not my mistake if you are getting jealous for no reason" said jalal with his signature smirk.

"shut up!! and pay for these" said jodha handling the dresses to jalal and went to the other section of the mall. "i hate that smirk of his!! huh!" cursing him under her breadth.

~~~~
Mirza was roaming around the mall, actually the same one!

"today is the most boring day, jodha is also not there!" sighed mirza, he was bored at home so thought to come in this mall.

"Shivanii!!!" screamed mirza as soon as he located shivani in the same mall, with two bags in her hands.

"you?" said shivani, it was a pleasant surprise to her, she smiled looking away, she herself don't know from where she get this habbit of smiling for no reason when he is around her.

"me!!" grinned mirza as he got his company, he took the bags from shivani's hands.

"i am ohk!! i can carry them" said shivani

"you must be tired because you have been running through my mind all night" said mirza. and peeped inside the bags.

"why are you smiling?" asked mirza as he saw shivani smiling.

"nothing!! i think i should leave now" said an embarrassed shivani

"why you bought this?" asked mirza taking out a pair of earrings from shivani's bag.

"oh!! this is for arohi di's wedding" said shivani moving towards the other contour.

"itz great then! you can accompany us, we will go there tomorrow" said mirza.

"i will ask dad" said shivani with a low voice.

"ohk!! till then what about a coffee" asked mirza

"no thanks" said shivani taking her bags back.

"it will be from my side! come" said mirza and took her to the nearest coffee parlour.

~~~~

"what you think this or that " asked jodha, now showing him a pair of jeans.

"i don't know" said jalal for the hundredth time saying the same words again and again.

"ummm let i try these" said jodha

"you are doing it from the last 2 hours" said jalal

"you plays with your rings when you don't have any work? isn't it" asked jodha as she was observing it since morning.

"no...noo!" said jalal after stopping his act of ring play.

"yes you do!!" said jodha with a chuckle, she got one more thing about him.

"ohk! letz go to the men's section, i will choose something for you too" said jodha.

"no need for that! i have many" said jalal.

"i haven't asked your opinion" said jodha and took him to the opposite section

~~~~

"will you read my palm!" asked mirza forwarding his hand.

"i don't see anything" said shivani looking at his hand.

"i didn't expect you to, because love is blind" said mirza to which shivani looked the other direction, smiling to herself, meanwhile there coffee arrived.

"soo...why don't you have a boyfriend?" asked mirza sipping his coffee.

"i am just not allowed...and what about you, i think you too are single now a days" asked shivani

"because you are still not allowed to have a boyfriend" said mirza

"can't you stop your flirting for some time" asked shivani with a laugh.

"noo this time i am serious, i mean we are in the first category" said mirza

"category?" asked a confused shivani.

"yeah!! you know there are like four categories, first one is, in which both boy and girl are smart , so it leads to a happy relationship, second one is like, in which the boy is smart but the girl is stupid, so the result is pregnancy, third category in which the girl is smart but the boy is stupid, then it leads to marriage and the fourth one where both are stupid, then the result is disastrous...so according to this, we comes in the first category" said mirza.

"i don't know what to say now" said shivani feeling a little awkward.

"do you know what my shirt is made up of? - Boyfriend material" said mirza

"this is the same line which you said me 5 months ago" said shivani finishing up her coffee.

"oh sorry let i try the new one" said mirza

"forget about spider man, batman or superman, i will be your man" said mirza.

"it is the new one" remarked mirza to which shivani chuckled.

"yeah!! i noticed" said shivani.

"ohk!! i think i should leave now" said shivani taking out the money for her coffee but mirza stopped her.

"it is from my side" said mirza and checked his left pocket of his jeans for his wallet, but it was not there, he got a little panicked and searched all his pockets but except his mobile and keys, there was nothing.

"any problem?" asked shivani

"n..noo nothing, by the way, how much we have to pay?" asked mirza with a tensed voice.

"ummm...itz 1500" said shivani glancing the bill.

"1500!!! what the..." said a shocked mirza

"arre!! it is including taxes, and you came here many times before too...don't you?" asked shivani to which mirza nodded.

"actually i don't have cash, and i don't think that they take cards" said mirza.

"no sir! we do!" said the waiter.

"ohk we will pay then, just come after a few minutes" said mirza

"hey!! are you planning for another round of coffee?" joked shivani

"noo!! a...actually...i do..dont know where my wallet is!" said mirza.

"wait!! let i check how much i have" said shivani.

"umm...here it is! i have 1600 " said shivani taking out all the chillars from her bag.

"don't you have a card or something, it will not look good giving 100, 50 or 10 rupees notes to them" said mirza, embarrassed seeing it as first time in his life he was facing something like that.

"noo!! i don't have any cards, you know why because i am from a middle class family whose income is less than that,which you spend in 2 months, and these chillars are not my pocket money or whatever you call it, but it is my collection, my savings" snapped shivani, she was hurt of course! firstly she was giving her 5 months saving and secondly he was insulting her self respect, not intentionally but somewhere he did.

"hey i am sorry!! i din't meant that, and i will give the money back, i am sorry come on"said mirza going behind her as shivani paid the bill, and gave 100 rupees as tip glaring at mirza, like showing him.

"i am sorry!!" said mirza now holding his ear in front of everyone but it didn't affected shivani.

While on the other side, jodha was busy shopping for jalal, she took some pair of jeans for him and some sweat shirts and tees for him and pushed him in the 'trial room', which was just beside her's, the two rooms were separated by a wall with no roof.

"hey pagloo!" said jodha

"where are you?" asked jalal, looking around consciously.

"we are just separated by this wall" giggled jodha listening the nervousness in his voice.

"what if i peek inside?" asked jodha trying to control her laugh

"noo!! are you mad" said jalal pulling his jeans up as he know she can do it.

"ohk then tell me! which is good, pink or the blue one?" asked jodha throwing the tops at his side.

"i will not tell you" said jalal irritatedly as her tops landed on his head.

"are you telling me or i peek inside" asked jodha still trying to control her laugh.

"noo!! this blue one is good" said jalal and threw the blue top back to her.

"jeans or shorts?" asked jodha knowing the answer well.

"dare to wear those tacky shorts" said jalal rudely

"acha tell me! which will look more sexy, waist band or waist chain?" asked jodha

"how could i know?" asked jalal trying the other sweatshirt

"oh! now don't tell me, that you don't notice it, mirza says all boys do that, tell me waist band or waist chain?" asked jodha making jalal embarrass

"there is hardly any difference in both of them" said jalal trying to save himself while cursing mirza under his breadth.

"arre!! how can you say that... waist bands are little broad while chains are thin" said jodha

"acha now tell me?"

"waist chain!" said jalal whatever came to his mind.

"i knew it! you do that too, lolz! by the way, it will look good with loose crop top! isn't it?" asked jodha

"i don't know! ruqaiyah know more about these things" said jalal

"see now you brought her and by the way, you are my hubby not she!" said an angry jodha.

"letz leave her!! umm acha tell me gold or silver, which will suit more?" asked jodha after getting no reply from jalal.

"go with silver" said a man.

"j..a..l...a..l" called a scared jodha and came out from the trial room after changing her clothes, and at the same time, the changing room hung open, in which jalal went and there was siddarth khurana, classmate of jodha, and ofcourse the so called boyfriend of sunaina.

"go with silver waist chain jo! it will suit you!" said siddarth with his irritable smile.

"he came again!! chipkoo"

"did you said something?" asked siddharth.

"nothing siddharth" said jodha with a forced smile while she was just looking for jalal.

"ohk then i have to go" said jodha while was just ready to run.

"why so soon! don't you want to buy those low waist jeans which will suit your silver waist chain" said siddharth.

"noo!! i was just thinking to buy those bikini tops for sunaina which will suit her golden waist chain" said jodha

"letz go" said jalal as soon as he reached there, he looked at jodha and then at siddharth.

"arre Mr. Jalal, my father is signing a contract with you" said siddharth being the spoilt brat due to his rich father.

"letz go!" said jalal, this time more firmly.

"what happened to you all in sudden" asked jodha running behind jalal.

"we are going back to home" said jalal rudely.

"why are you becoming this snappy all in sudden?" asked jodha getting a little irritated by his change of attitude.

"i said, we are going that means, we are!" said jalal, he himself was confused, he didn't know why he was behaving like this, knowing that jodha was just talking to him, but still their talks were not descent, and siddharth being the spoilt kid, so! believing him was not just possible! jalal just got irritated, seeing her talking to a guy like siddharth.

"i am hungry" said jodha looking away! she too got irritated by his behaviour, but knowing that he got jealous somewhere, she smiled a bit.

jalal looked at her, she hadn't ate anything since morning, knowing that well he took her to the restaurant without saying anything to her.

"now what happened to you?" asked jodha as soon as the food arrived.

"arre listen naa!! he is just like that i don't even talk to him, i swear" said jodha looking at the food.

"acha sry!" said jodha

"eat" said jalal as he noticed that jodha was not having her food

"firstly, tell me what happened to you?" asked jodha, the same question again

"what happened to me?" asked jalal playing with the rings on his fingers.

"see!! firstly you are not talking to me, i don't know why! and secondly you are again playing with your rings" laughed jodha to which jalal stopped his activity, but what can he do? it was his childhood habit.

"have it" said jalal passing her favourite pizza towards her, and having his regular salad, seeing him eating the food, jodha too grabbed her pizza.

"you know i hate ruqiyah" said jodha

"see! you are again talking about her" said jalal, whatever it be, her antics did made him lose his anger.

"what i can do!! that bitch did black magic over me" said jodha to which jalal looked at her and stopped eating for a moment.

"why you hate her so much?"

"oh come on!! she deserves that, you know the only thing i hate about her is her attitude, i mean i have never met a girl like her,you know she is a true vamp" said jodha which was showing her hatred towards ruqaiyah.

"then i think you don't know ruqaiyah well! may be she would be a little selfish but come on who is not, and i think being selfish or what you said, yaah! vamp is necessary in today's life" said jalal eating his salad, while jodha looked at him, shocked.

"you know she is only behind money!" said a shocked jodha.

"correction!! not only she, everyone! even me! and i think everyone should be like her only, i mean! she is a girl who would behind money but let i tell you, if i am here, in this position today, then i would say that somewhere it is because of ruqiyah only! you are only seeing her negative points , you don't know the real ruqaiyah, she is practical, and this quality is only in few people, you know i didn't wanted to marry you but ruqaiyah broke our relation for my father's last wish, and i don't think that anyone can be like her!" said jalal and then looked at jodha! and by looking at her eyes, it was clear that she wasn't agreed by what he said.

"i doubt that if she is your true friend, maybe she is with you because of her personal benefit, or she would have helped you or whatever you think about her is just a lie" said jodha, not knowing that her each word was true.

"i know she loves money but i am sure that she can't lie, and doubting our friendship, itz impossible, you know i don't have any friend except her, she helped me when no one was with me" said jalal remembering some bitter memories of his father's death.

"maybe she just didn't let anyone to come near you" said jodha.

"i think we should stop this topic here, i don't want any fights regarding her, she is a friend now, nothing more than that" said jalal as he knows one more thing and he may loose his temper.

"ohhkkk!! so tell me umm..haan!! about your favourite actresses?" asked jodha so as to light the tension between them

"what??" asked jalal as he didn't accepted this question

"arre!! tell me do you like kamli katrina, or lovely deepika, fashionista sonam or jannat girl isha, bebo kareena or baby doll sunny, sri lankan beauty Jacqueline or bengali beauty bipasha, miss world priyanka or hot anushka, dhak dhak madhuri or the diva herself aishwariya rai" asked jodha while jalal was just looking at her surprisingly.

"umm...i..i got confused with so much names, leave me tell about your favourite actors?" asked jalal so as to save himself

"arre!! there are many, starting with hottest shahrukh or cute salman, cool ranbir or sexy hritik, hero varun or kukdu kamaal siddarth, uff there are so many" said jodha

"you are crazy about movies, isn't it?" asked jalal

"yes!! no doubt in saying that, and in my opinion we should go and watch rangrasiya!! colour of passion!" said jodha with mischievous in her eyes.

"you are crazy" said jalal paying up the bill

"yes i am crazy for them, acha tell me which type of songs do you like? i mean emotional types or dhoom dhadaka types? you know i toh just love rock music, i can never understand those sad songs, but you know there's one romantic song which i like but only mirza knows it" said jodha all the way giggling, seeing her jalal to smiled unknown to himself, he never went out like this in these years and that too without any work, whatever he say to jodha, but somewhere in his heart, he have enjoyed it.

"let's go" said jalal to which jodha pouted and followed him

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Edited by aisha.....11110 - 10 years ago
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chapter 8 {part 3}

Mirza was trying his best to manofy her but she was not giving any reaction, seeing no other chance left, mirza went near the karaoke machine, picking up the mike, and at that same moment jodha and jalal, both reached there.

"Kyon Aaj Kal neend kam Khwab zaada hai

Lagta Khuda ka koi neek iraada hai
Kal tha Fakeer aaj dil shezada hai
Lagta Khuda ka koi neek iraada hai
Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya"
mirza looked at shivani but she didn't looked at him before he could continue, jodha jumped up and took the mike from him.

"Pathar ke in raston pe

Phoolon ke ek chaadar hai
Jabse mile ho humko
Badla har ek manzar hai"
sang jodha doing her favourite step , mirza looked at shivani who was laughing staring at jodha, he snatched the mike from jodha's hand.

"Dekho jahaan main neele neele asmaan thale

Rang naye naye hai jaise ghulte huwe
Sohye se khwab mere jaage tere waaste
Tere khayalon se hai bheege mere raaste
Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya"
sang mirza going towards shivani but at the same time, jodha arrived and again took the mike from him.

"Tum kyon chale aate ho
Har rozz in khwaabon main
Chupke se aa bhi jaao
ek din meri bahoon main"
sang jodha looking teasingly towards jalal.

"Tere he saapnein andheron mein ujaalon mein
Koi naasha hain tere aankhon ke pyalo mein
Tu mere khwabon mein jawabon mein sawaalon mein
Har din churaa tumhe mein laaton hoon kyaalon mein
Kya Mujhe Pyaar hai ya
Kaisa Khumar hai ya"
sang mirza while fighting with jodha.

"how dare you it was my favourite song" said jodha angrily

"but it was of her's too" said mirza pointing towards shivani

"how you get to know?" asked shivani

"arre i know everything about you" said mirza

"acha then tell me in which position she sleeps?" snapped jodha

"i sent an angel to watch over her while she was asleep but sooner than expected the angel came back, when i asked why?, the angel said that angels don't watch over another angel, soo! i do't know her sleeping postilion" said mirza still trying to take the mike back from jodha.

"what is happening here?" asked jalal making everyone stop at their places

"pagloo!! see your brother is singing my favourite song" said jodha trying to take the mike from his hands.

"mirzaa!"

"bhai!! she was angry" muttered mirza looking at shivani.

"sir!! you are my biggest inspiration..i mean i just can't believe that i am meeting you again" said shivani with her baby excitement to which jodha and mirza both looked at each other.

"why was she angry on you?" asked jodha moving towards jalal.

"it was all because of my stupid wallet, it got lost i think" said mirza to which jodha coughed and jalal looked at her.

"but i think someone has stolen your wallet" said jalal looking at jodha.

"arre nhi nhi!! i think it would be in your room only" said jodha glaring jalal

"and how you are so confirmed" asked jalal

"dekho!! i know everything" said jodha trying to shut him up.

"i think i should leave now" said shivani

"ohk!! bye!!" said jodha

"now we should also leave" said jalal

"buss one last place and then you are free" said jodha looking at her watch.

"noo!! not again" said jalal irritatedly.

"last place" pleaded jodha.

~~~

"oh why we came here? again!" asked jalal as soon as the car stopped at juhu beach

"we started our day from this place so we will end it here only" said jodha.

"now what you will do here?" asked jalal

"come only 2 minutes are left" said jodha

"where?"

"chalo" said jodha holding his hand.

"see there" said jodha as soon as they reached that spot, and there was the most beautiful scene, the sunset of Mumbai at correct 6:02pm.

"you know! everyone says that this is the wonderful place for watching sunset which seems like a dream for everyone who visits this beach" said jodha,removing her shoes and rolling up her jeans till her knee, feeling the cold water.

"come"

"noo!! i don't wanna come" said jalal

"arre come" said jodha trying to pull him

"noo!!" said jalal

"arre just remove your shoes and join me" said jodha trying her best to convince him

"are you mad! it doesn't look good" said jalal

"oh just shut up! now don't tell me i have to do this for you" said jodha and for once was about to remove his shoes but was stopped by jalal

"i will do it" said jalal at last.

"come!!" said an excited jodha pulling him near the shore.

"how's it?"

"it's cold" said jalal, as soon as the wave hit his skin, his clothes was partially wet now, but the feeling he felt at that moment was something that he have never felt before, he was actually feeling nice, peaceful.

He looked at jodha who was still laughing at his answer, and suddenly jalal felt himself wishing that the day would never end, that the time would stop there, he recognized that he was feeling something he had never experienced before, the desire to live in one place forever, with this childish girl having raven hairs, but as soon as he realised what he was thinking, he just stood up, not wanting it to happen, never in his life, but it had already happened, the destiny had already finalised their rest of your journey together.

"arre sit naa!!" said jodha making him sit on the land, covered by sand.

"i think we should leave now" said jalal.

"wait!! see i made a castle" said jodha pointing towards the castle she made by sand

"yukks" remarked jalal looking at her hands which were fully drenched with sand.

"huh!!" pouted jodha and threw some sand over his hands too.

"are you mad" asked jalal trying to catch her.

"why you said yukks" laughed jodha still running away from him.

"i am going to kill you" said jalal running behind her without thinking about the people who were staring them, he forgot the world, and everyone at that moment, there was nothing in his mind except her.

"sirr!! i think we should leave this place" said one of his bodyguard making jalal to come back to his usual mode, jalal glanced his surrounding, the crowd was looking at him, and at that moment he realised his mistake and went to the car without looking back at jodha.

"why you left me there?" asked jodha in between her irregular breathing as she came to the car all the way running.

"it was all because of you, that i behaved like that, you are just spoiling everything"spatted jalal.

"what i did?" asked jodha

"you did everything" said jalal angrily to which jodha turned her face, angry on his changeable moods.

"sorry" muttered jodha as it was now half an hour and jalal was not talking to her.

"you should be" said jalal while jodha was just confused what she did, but in-spite of that she asked a sorry and he is not even apologising to her.

"you should also!" said jodha

"why should i?"

"because you are pagloo" said jodha angrily

~~~~

"Mom! you know, this is for hamida maa!! i know she will love it" said jodha showing all the things she bought today.

"itz lovely, now go and take rest, you have to leave naa" said maina

"haan!! mirza plz help me in taking these gifts to mine room naa" said jodha to which mirza nodded but they were stopped by maina

"noo!! jodha now you will not stay with jalal but with your hamida maa, in her room"said maina and signalled mirza to leave them alone

"mom!! but hamida maa herself told me to share room with jalal" argued jodha not understanding the sudden change.

"i have discussed this with her, and believe me i am doing it for you" said maina

"no!! mom you know naa, i am scared to sleep alone" said jodha

"that's why you will stay with your maa" said maina

"i know, that jalal told you to do this naa" said jodha angrily

"noo! dear he didn't told me anything"

"then who?" asked jodha

~~~

so that's all!!
sorry for mistakes! umm!!yes!!...nothing!🤣

i know itz quite boring, so just bear it😆

Edited by aisha.....11110 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo , for your new thread dear👏👍🏼

now tell us update kab aayega...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats dii
But this was unpredictable's turn
do update ASAP 😃
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🥱i know it ever if you watch Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai you will find out what am i talking about.
Hina khan is the Director real life girlfriend after playing roles in the show .she wearing top clothes
her role is top in the show why because she is the lover of Director ,its ever on the news too.
same thing ruka is the lover of jodha ajkbar Director, POINT REMEMBER JODHA WAS IN THE NEWS THAT THE Director TRIED TO TOUCH JODHA AND AFTER THIS AS EVERYONES KNOWS JODHA NOT GETTING ANT RESPECT AND ALL OLD CLOTHES AND HER ROLE CHANGED AFTER HER FIGHT WITH Director. REMEMBER IF THE Director OF THE SHOW HAPPY WITH ACTRESS HE CAN MAKE HER TOP AND SHE WILL BE THE QUEEN SAME TIME HAPPY WITH RUKA SHE IS HIS BEST ACTRESS AND HE IS THE BOSS OF THE SHOW NOW EVERYONES GET IT WHY RUKA NOT GETTING PUNISHED ITS NOT BECAUSE AKBAR DOESNT WANT PUNISH HER ITS BECAUSE Director DOESNT WANT PUT HER LOW IN THE EYE OF PEOPLE. I AM REALLY UPSET WITH WHAT IS GOING ON .


Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai

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congratulation for the new thread
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Congratulations on new thread Aisha!🥳
Now, will be waiting for your update.

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