AKDHA FF: LIVE OR DIE (note on page 11....27/02/15) - Page 3

very nice update !😊

Thanks for the update. Update next chappy soon.

Thanks for the PM.

Nice FF, good to see atleast moti stood by JO and talked with Jalaal..

its a different concept.i like it.so pls pm me.i promise u i will cmnt and like in every update.but nw my exams r near.i wil n't cmnt till nov 28

RECAP: Jalal was confused with his own mind.why does he feel so much about jodha?why does he always think about her after their marriage?is it called love?with all these questions in his mind he walked to the dargah located in the palace.

CHAPTER 4

Jalal reached the dargah and sat near the tomb.se closed his eyes and automatically tears started flowing out of his eyes.he didn't knw why or for whome was he crying.so he started talking with allah."ya allah...plss save my jodha..pls bring her back to lyf...I want her back safe and healthy...pls...I promise you that from ow on will take care of her..will not insult her n will give her all the happiness in the world..i will give her the LOVE that she wished to get"..suddenly he opened his eyes n thought about what he said a second before...he thought in his mind"did I just say love?does that mean I love her?oh god that's not possible!!i don't have a heart to love or to be loved...but why am I getting this sort of feeling whenever I think about jodha..ya khuda plss help me!"with this he closed his eyes again and all he could see was jodha peaceful and happy face.he took this as the signal from god and assured himself that he loves jodha n she is everything for him.this thought bought a smile on his face!a satisfactory smile..and he felt peace all of sudden...the peace he hadn't experienced for a long time.but the smile disappeared when he thought about jodha..will she ever accept him as her husband?he went back to motis words n his newborn heart was filled with guilt for not supporting and loving jodha...then he promised allah that he would go to sheik chisti and dargah if jodha gets alright!with ths promise he left the dargah to his love...

IN HAMIDA BANUS ROOM

Hamida banu was sitting with tears in her eyes and pak kuraan in her hands!he have never felt this much guilty before..hamida was scared whether moti would do something to jalal so she followed them and listened their hole conversation about jodha.

She was sad thinking about jodhas childhood...she was sad thinking that she was never able to love jodha who had such a pure soul..she was shocked in hearing that jodha wished to get love from her mother in law!she looked up and spoke"ya khuda plss forgive me for doubting jodha...for not giving her the love which she wished for..plss make her alright and give her back to me so that I can love her..plss allah plss..."

She kept the kuran back and lest for jodhas room...

JODHAS ROOM

Jodha was still unconciouss and salima was sitting next to her due to jalals order..hamida reached the room and saw salima reading a book.she went to her and said"salima begum jalal gave you the responsibility to look after jodha and you r reading a book here?"

Salima was shocked to hear this from hamida as she never trusted or care for her!hamida understood salimas mind n said"salima we both have done a big sin by doubting jodha..""what do you mean ammijaan...I don't understand"a confused salima asked hamida.

Hamida narrated her the whole story and salima was shocked to the core after hearing this.her eyes were filled with tears.salima was about to say something when they saw jalal standing near the door and that too smiling...hamidas anger rose as she saw jalal smiling as she thought that he would not be sad even aafter listening to moti..but the real reason for jalals smile was his newly discovered heart and love!

Before hamida could say anything he ordered everyone to leave as he wanted to be alone with his love.

Everyone left the room and jalal went and sat near jodha and took her hand in his a gave a small kiss!!!!!

PRECAP:same as before!

Plss do comment and like...n sorry for the short update...will try to update longer next time...and plss do share ur ideas with me!!!!😊😊😊

Awesome blossom chappy and update fast dear

Awesome update. Update the next chappy as soon as possible waiting jodha and jalal"s talks

short but lovely update continue soon nd do pm

I'm in love with ur story❤️