AKDHA FF: LIVE OR DIE (note on page 11....27/02/15) - Page 4

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RECAP: Everyone left the room and jalal went and sat near jodha and took her hand in his a gave a small kiss!!!!!

CHAPTER 5

Jodhas Room

As soon as he gave her the kiss he was struck by a promise that he gave Jodha after their marriage. And it was that he will never touch her against her wish. But now he broke it. Keeping the negative thoughts away Jalal went to her kahna and started doing aarti and said " Kahna plss plss give me back my jodha..i here by promise you that I will always protect her and will love her..plss give her back".Saying this he sat there with his eyes closed.

On the other side jodha gained semi consciousness and was feeling thirsty due to the medicine effects. She opened her eyes a little and saw a glass on of water. She looked around her room for help but didn't see anyone. She couldn't see jalal as he was sitting.she again felt sad thinking that everyone left her alone and also sad thinking that her suicide attempt wasn't successful...jodha with great effort lifted her weak hands and was about to reach the glass when her hands lost strength and hit a jar which was kept next to the glass...the jar fell down with a big sound...

Jalal who was praying heard the sound and turned to see jodha struggling on her bed. He quickly got u and went next to her and caught her weak and shivering hand. Jodha was shocked to see jalal there. She tried releasing her hand from his strong yet gentle grip. But all this time jalal was lost in his jodhas beauty.jodha again pulled her hand with a greater force and this caused her hand to pain. She left out a small cry and this brought back jalal from his dream world. He in anger asked her "jodha what do you think of yourself?are you gone mad?are you hating yourself this much that you tried to do suicide?answer me jodha!!". But jodha was in no mood to listen to his speech. She was extremely thirsty and didn't have the strength to ask for water or to give jalal reply.

Jalal sensed by seeing her face that she was in need of something. So he slowly released her hand and gently kept his hand on her forehead. This was another shock for jodha. She never thought that jalal will sit next to her or give her comfort...

Jalal asked her"jodha do you want something"...jodha tried to speak but then she couldn't.so she lifted her hand and pointed it to the glass of water.jalal quickly got up and gave her water to drink.meanwhile he ordered the dasis to call moti and hakim and also to inform everyone about jodha.

Jodha was shocked and happy at the same time. She loved the jalal who was sitting next to her. Thinking this a small smile appeared on her face. But the smile disappeared when a negative thought struck her mind. She thought is this another game of jalal to hurt me or is it genuine.she was lost in her thoughts when she saw hamida and salima entering her room..hamida came and sat next to jodha and said"forgive me jodha..i did a big sin by doubting you.lplss forgive me..from today I will take care of you...u wont be my daughter in law u will be my own daughter...will u forgive me?" jodha with great difficulty replied"ammijan plss don't make me do a sin by asking forgivence...u are my mother and mothers never apologize to their daughters"..ammijan wiped her tears and kissed jodhas forehead..even salima apologized and gave her wishes...all this while jalal was staring at jodha and was thinking how to start talking with her.

Jalal rushed out of the room and on the way he met moti.he went to moti and spoke "moti thanks for showing me whats right and wrong.thanks for giving me the name of my love.i grand you one wish which I will fulfill"saying this he went from there.

JALALS CHAMBER

Jalal called his ministers and informed them about his plan to visit shek chisti. He also told that he will be going there as an aam aadmi and he wont use any of the royal facilities

Narrator:two days passed and jodha was almost alright..but still hakim told her to take rest.but jodha was sad as jalal didn't visit her after that day.and jalal didn't know how to face her.but at last he decided to go and apologize to jodha.

JODHAS ROOM

It was morning and jodha was sitting in her balcony.she was enjoying the natures beauty.but then her mind was desperate to see jalal as moti told her everything which happened when she was unconscious.

Moti and some other maids were clearing jodhas room.it was then when moti saw jalal entering the room.moti and the maids left without informing jodha.jalal got in and saw jodha sitting in the balcony.jalal stood a little behind jodha and said "adaab jodha begum.can u spare some time coz I want to talk to you".

Jodha was shocked to hear jalals sound and she got up quickly.but the sudden action caused her body to lose balance and she was about to fall down when jalal came and caught her. She opened her eyes and saw herself resting in his warm hands. She was embarrassed and a little shy.jalal understood this and helped her in standing straight. Jalal was about o speak something when jodha interrupted "pranaam shehanshah..you don't have to tell anything..moti already told me every thng and I know what you are gonna ask me.i know that you are going to apologize but please don't as husband should not fold his hands in front of his wife and also..."she was brought to a stop by jalal who was covering her mouth with one hand as he was confused listening tp her long speech.jodha was shy again.jalal took his hands from her mouth and told"jodha begum calm down. Who told you I came here to apologize? I came here to tell you that am more angry with you bcoz of you immature acts and I also want to tell you that if you repeat anything like that I will send you back to amer.jalal notice jodha expression turing from anger to sadness.jodha was angry bcoz of jalal and was sad listening to amers name as she never wanna go back there. A lonely tear appeared as she thought about amer.jalal saw tears crawling down her cheeks and he swiftly wiped the tears abd cupped her face and said"jodha plss forgive me.i didn't mean to hurt you.its just that am angry with u bcoz u tried to leave me alone and go.but now I also came to know that I love u more than anyone.i know u may not accept me but this is my promise that I win your heart one day and that will come soon"saying this he left her and was about to leave when jodha back hugged him.jalal was happy...he was wondering whether its his dream or is it reality.he brought jodha to the front and cupped her face again.jodha said"shahenshah u can do anything you want to but plss don't send me back to amer I don't want tp go there plss...and I already accepted to long back..it was you who never loved me.it was you who never wanted to accept me"saying this she broke down and jalal felt guilty for not loving her till now.for giving her comfort he took her into a deep passionate hug and whispered in her ears "so do you want to be mine fully ?" jodha broke the hug and told"shahenshah plss forgive me I want a little more time..but then now I love u and that time will also come fast this is my promise."saying this she made a puppy face..jalal broke into a giggle and told"I cant wait for long..i will give you time.u should be ready when ui return from sheik chisti".jodha said "then even am coming with you to sheik chisti...I told ammijan and even she allowed".jalal thought for a while and said" u sure u can come with me?i mean u r still weak.i think u should be here and take rest kk?" jodha again made a pupy face and said"am allright now and even I want to pray so plss take me and as long as u r there with me I will be fine"jalal was lost in her purity and with a smile he sad"ok then plss be ready by tmrw morning and ya we will be going as aam aadmi so dress according to that...now you take rest have some work pending">saying this he left the room happily..and even jodha was happy with the confession...

PRECAP:they go to sheik chisti and some more fun..

I know I didn't update for a long time and it was bcoz of my exmas and studies...i know the confession was a little fast and I even want to know whether I should include akdhas sr soon or later..plss give me ideas...

Me first to comment it's a wonderful story and very nice update,pls continue and pm me.

Hey nice to see ur update. Was waiting since a long time.
Pls dont show sr so soon. I think u shld give them cute romantic moments to get to be close to each other bfr the actual sr.it will increase the anticipation.

awesome update continue soon ya don't show sr so soon let them enjoy

Loved it..at last it happened..update sn...pm me

very nice update dear.update soon and do pm me please.