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Hi akdha fans

Hey my sweet Reader's , ! this is my 6th or 8 Attempt here! So i am Here with a A different story from my other FF. Which is getting quite Hot,Romantic and Happy Shappy Update This story is revolving around a superstar like anushka's secret crush one but with different concept so i thought to share this one with you all ! I Hope U guys will like it !😛


Credit for the pic - Tohru





So here are the charcters

A new superstar Jalaluddin Singh Mohammad uff JS(25 year old),

Suryabhan Singh uff Surya-JS's friend and a co star,

Rukaiya uff Ruks- girlfriend of Suryabhan,

Man Singh college old and best friend of JALAL who knows all about JALAL,

Hamida -JALAL's Mom (JALAL have no father and her mom is single. But his father had left lot wealth for their family and he died in a car accident when JALAL was 15 years old),

Bairam Khan - JALAL's launching director and a good well wisher and adviser of JALAL,

Abdul- Secretary of JALAL and

Sukanya Sharma uff Suku a upcoming model,

Jodha Sharma (21 year old) -Sukanya's sister

Bharmal and Maina Sharma - Jodha and Sukanya's Parents.

Bhamal works in Bank as General Manager.

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Ek Duje Ke Vaaste ...

For Each Other......



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Chapter 1 - JALAL saw his Beauty' for a first time.

After a long and hardwoJalaling moths superstar JALAL was holidaying with his friends Surya, Ruks, Manu to New YoJalal. They had gone to night party to a disco. There Sukanya had also came for some modelling project and Jodha was accompanied with her. They both had also come to same disco. Jodha was wearing blue jeans with Maroon top on it. She was looking out of this world. Her beauty was attracting everyone. But she was forced to come here by her sister and so she was little feeling uncomfortable with the environment.

There JALAL was not interested dancing where all his friends were dancing and enjoying but he was enjoying his owns company with his drinks.

Surya, Ruks and Manu ( Man Singh ) came to JALAL.

Surya- "JALAL come yaar have fun with us. What yaar, this is always a problem to come with you. You don't know to enjoy."

JALAL-"Who said I am not enjoying. See I am having my beauty in my hand- my drink. So better leave me alone with my beauty."

Ruks coming behind- "JALAL beauty is in girls heart and not in your glass of drink. Common JALAL You is lonely inside and need a company. Come we will find a girl for you. Say us which type of girl you like."

There Manu was caught from a simple beauty of Jodha. He instantly interrupted all and said. "A girl with blue jeans with Maroon top decorated with serene and pure beauty of heart with reflects from her eyes."

JALAL spilled all his drink out and Surya, Ruks was also shocked as now what happened to him.

JALAL- "I am damn sure Manu there is no as such girl in this world and if it would be I promise to lean down to my knees and offer her to dance with me tonight."

Manu raising his palm- "Promise"

JALAL holding his palm friendly- "Promise"

Surya,Ruks- "Manu but where is this girl?"

Manu- "JALAL you should have turned around before giving me a promise. Now you have to do what you said."

JALAL turned around giving mad expressions on Manu. Surya and Ruks too turned around.

JALAL was astonished from Manu's explanation or choice. He just thought- Manu truly knows me.

Manu keeping his friendly hand to his shoulder- "What happened astonished from her beauty. You know that I know you and your choices so well."

JALAL gave a smile and said - "My beauty Ahaaan."

There JALAL lost in her serene eyes that speaking volume. He was lost in her and it was like he forgot all around him. He just thought that there is only two people in this disco- one himself and another his beauty.

He just stood up like hypnotised and went straight to his beauty.

He went straight to a girl and lean down on his knees like he promised and offer her to dance with him.

JALAL said softly- "May I have a pleasure to dance with the beauty."

Jodha shocked and astonished searching her sister who was busy enjoying and dancing here and there.

At moment she was so nervous that she not even able to recollect that a newly superstar is leaned on his knees.

Her heart started beating fast and she started sweating. Seeing her uncomfortable to this level he decided to lighten the moment. He stood up and started laughing.

JALAL said- "Relax it was a challenge from my friend which I was doing. It seems you hadn't recognised me yet."

Jodha without saying any word ran from there.

Sukanya saw now her sister running and saw a back of JALAL but it was back she either too not recognised and went behind her sister.

JALAL came back where his entire friend is laughing.

Surya said- "What had happened JALAL? Your magic didn't seem to be worked. She was Indian but still seems to be not recognised you."

JALAL said- "Hmm she was very nervous, don't know nervous after identifying me or nervous for a guy near her. Forget it may be she too stayed over here and you all know that I am still a new superstar and I am not gained popularity to foreign countries. Chalo lets go back to India, fed up of this holiday."

Surya, Ruks and Manu together- "That is not fair JALAL, you are been rejected but our mood are still on."

JALAL said- "But I guess I should go back to my shoot and gain some more popularity. You see guys it hits me. You guys can enjoy back here for some more days but I will leavefrom next possible flight I get tomorrow. Bye all I am going to hotel back for arrangement. Cya in Mumbai."

Whole night JALAL was just trying to figure out behaviour and where about of his beauty as why this all happened. May be it hit him somewhere because this was first time he felt for someone so special and then not even got back a sweet gesture from a girl but a question mark for life time.

There Jodha's heart was skipping a bit and Sukanya was calming her down asking about what happened. After Jodha told her everything, Suku got relaxed.

Sukanya relieved and said-"Aww Jodha that guy was only asking for a dance and you started sweating. Swear what he must be thinking about you. Common Sweetheart comes out of your little cup of small and self world and starts facing everyone with brave. Come now we have to pack as our flight is early morning and haan my sweetypie please do not say this entire story to mom and dad or else they will hide you more."

Jodha smilingly agreed- "Sure Suku"

-In Mumbai after two days-

JALAL holding his phone from his left shoulder and tying his shirt- "Abdul where are you? You were supposed to be at my place till now. Now meet me directly on location. "

JALAL headed for shooting all angry on Abdul too burst on him. On the way his car got stuck in heavy traffic and he keeps watching his watch and his anger was reaching its peak.

Precap. First touch of love

So howz it... should i continue or not

Edited by --Mrs.Tokas-- - 10 years ago
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First off all Many-many congrats for new ff 😳
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ok now I'm going nuts or u r chocholate cake🤪
i think u r going nuts due to ur studies🤣
ok ok the chapter was wayyy awesome sis
update soon
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Originally posted by: -RuthShalini-

ok now I'm going nuts or u r chocholate cake🤪

i think u r going nuts due to ur studies🤣
ok ok the chapter was wayyy awesome sis
update soon

nuts due to my studies . yes i'm 😆😆
i'm serious about my studies coz my school helds exams every month and this month too😭😭

thanks for liking chappy😳
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