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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Wow that was an amazing update

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AkankshaJA

congo for new ff di...🤗🥳

its an awesome ff...👏😃
Jodha rejecred Jalal...🤣😆😉
Jalal bend on his knees for Jodha😳...Wow
Jalal embarrass wo bhi do baar...🤣
update the next chapter soon...😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3- You Have Become Centre Of My Life.


At night-on Jodha's bed room

Jodha on her room (she have separate room from Sukanya as her father is great position and so there have a decent home.)

Jodha was all in trance thinking about what happened with her. There was something on his touch that she felt somewhere very badly. She did not like this feeling as she never knew all this things. She

was very quite conservative and introvert girl on her studies and that's all. She completed her B.com and does some part time projects at home that his father brings. Beside this she was planning to study further. She has no plan of love or life after marriage. This is how natural she was different from this world.

Somewhere this touch was making her go restless but she doesn't know why and what happening to her but there was something in this touch. She not even shared this incident to her sister yet out of scare. She carefully sat on bed and put her leg on bed and started caressing same leg where JALAL touched her. She wants to feel what he did there that till now she cannot find it.

On JALAL's bedroom

JALAL was standing near window all thinking about her beauty.

JALAL Thinking - "There is something strange about this girl whenever I see her I forgot all my identity as actually who am I. I don't know why I forgot my self too."

Next Morning

JALAL went to shoot early from his timing in hope of seeing his beauty. He gave his shot perfectly that day but to his disappointment his beauty didn't came that day. Sukanya was alone on shooting. Two days passed as same and JALAL also became little friend with Sukanya now.

Third day

JALAL was upset and really sad for not seeing his beauty for two days. His heart was pushing him to meet her but he doesn't know how.

It was same bring shooting day and JALAL was busy in his scenes till lunch break.

It was God gift to JALAL that Sukanya had forget her lunch box that day and so during lunch time Jodha came to give her a lunch box.

So as it is said you cannot hide from your love and so did even Jodha who notable hide from JALAL. Then what spajalal came in JALAL's eyes, he saw his beauty and gave a sweet sexy smirk and said happily- "Beauty Ahaan".

There Jodha was having no idea of JALAL looking at her. Her each move was like a photo click to JALAL. He keep seeing her and taking long breathe hiding from all world.

His happiness was having no end. But he got tensed in glance seeing her Jodha going away from shooting area.

He ran behind her and no one was interested to know about what going on as it was really a busy day for all.

Just then outside the location near the gate JALAL catches Jodha's hand from back. He gripped her hand tightly giving shiver to her body. She just felt same touch and got scared. She was not ready to see back. Her heart was beating too fast she opened her eyes very widely and then closed at once tightly. There JALAL was no mood to leave her, she turned around with closed eyes and there JALAL kept mesmerizing Beauty. Jodha firmly opened her eyes finding JALAL standing in front of her. He left her hand and started coming close to her without breaking his eyes on her.

Song started playing on background for some shoot- song...

Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha - (2)

Dekhatee hai jis tarah se teree najare mujhe, mai khud ko chupau kaha) - (2)

Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha

More JALAL try to decrease this distance between them and more Jodha goes behind.



Yeh pal hai apna ,toh iss pal ko jee le
Shwalo kee tarah jarah chal ke jee le, pal jhapakte kho na jana

JALAL was not ready to hold his emotions. He holds her hand tightly to stop her to move.

Chhuke karlo yakin, na jane yeh pal paye kaha Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha

Jodha looked at his hand on her hand and then up, she drank her saliva.

Baaho me teree yu kho gaye hai, arman dabe se jagne lage hai
Jo mile ho aaj hamko dur jana nahee, mita do saree yeh duriya

JALAL gave sexy smirk to her on seeing her small behaviour.

Jadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai, tujhko bhulake aab jaau kaha Dekhatee hai jis tarah se teree najare mujhe, mai khud ko chupau kaha

They shared a passionate eye lock and the heat between their bodies was passing each other some positive vibration. Jodha's scared breathe was touching bare neck of JALAL and JALAL's satisfactory breathe was touching her bare neck. JALAL's eyes were giving her a charm to make her crazy. She was scared and happy both at same time. He pushed her near and near and takes his lips near to her ears, Jodha's heart was beating fast that could be heard by JALAL. JALAL warm was felt by Jodha till inside. Her belly was paining sweetly and dancing in some rhythmic tune feeling him so near. Her leg was losing their grip and her hand was getting cold. He was inches away from Jodha's ears when he left her hand and declares her to go. Jodha gave a long satisfactory breathe and turned back to not see him again.He keeps seeing her till she was visible to his eyes and Jodha walk away from there in rocket speed.

He gave a sexy smirk and kissed his own hand from which he holds her hand.

At night on Jodha's room.

Jodha sitting all alone thinking about JALAL- She was thinking "What is that pain I got when he touches me and when he was so near me? I so got scared feeling him so near that I ran away but what he wants. He is just a co actor to my sister and a great superstar- why he behaving such with me. Is he doing some prank with me- na not possible. There is something to all this. I want to meet him again, have to clear it all. Why he behaves such with me or else I need to be far from him."

She very slowly brought her hand where he touched her near to her lips. She can still feel his touch. Everytime she sees her hand she started thinking about all that happen and then again her belly pain arise a lot. There were so many questions in her mind. She was liking it and at the same time opposing it.

At night on JALAL's room.

JALAL was resting on his long chair leaning down to his back. His eyes were closed and he was mesmerizing each moment of his beauty he clicked in his mind. His scared breathe was still can be felt on his neck. Thinking his beauty he went to sleep.

Next day JALAL decided to talk to Sukanya regarding her sister.

Next day

JALAL to Sukanya- "Suku so aj tumhari sister nahin ayi, seems aj tum apna lunch saath layi ho."

Sukanya "Yes JALAL, she don't likes to come here daily."

JALAL- "You know Sukanya how much I saw world I noticed a strange behaviour in your sister. She never gets open soon. You know she should come out of her world why don't you help her in this... just a friendly advice."

Sukanya said to JALAL- "Yes, my sister is too introvert to get mix up with everybody soon. She takes her own sweet time to get along. I insisted her to accompany me everywhere so that she not disconnected herself from world fully."

Just then were called for their next shot and then whole day they normally shoot but JALAL was happy and satisfied to gather some information about his beauty.

Same night

JALAL called Manu ( Man singh ) lying on his bed- "Yaar I want a serious help dude. Just come to my rescue. This girl man she is making me crazy yaar."

Manu ( Man singh ) laughed teasingly- "So JALAL finally cleaned bowled by a girl and who is this ... wait a minute let me guess same beauty, right."

JALAL ordered- "Ya and now you catch a next flight as I think I will need you."

Manu ( Man singh ) - "I can do anything for you my friend."

Then JALAL cut the call and gave Abdul a secret task to find address of Sukanya and her sister.

JALAL giving smirk said aloud' "Bhaag kar jaogi kahan... ana toh meri baahon mien hi hai Beauty."😆

Next day

It was last day of his shooting before his four days of holiday. He wants to fully utilise this holiday for himself. He kept a lavish party at his farm house at panvel and gave Abdul all tasks to arrange the party. He did not invited much friends - only close one to his farm house including Sukanya and also insisted to bring her sister along with her.

Precap : Love punishment to jodha by jalal

done ...hope you like it😳

Edited by --Mrs.Tokas-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww!!! Amazing chapter!! Super cute!! Loved it pari.. Plzz do continue soon.. Exciting precap!! Cant wait yrr!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dharshu

Wowww!!! Amazing chapter!! Super cute!! Loved it pari.. Plzz do continue soon.. Exciting precap!! Cant wait yrr!!!

thanjks ash dear😃😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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as always!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dharshu

as always!! 😆 😆

said true😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Usually ppl do res if they have some work to do!! But for shalu.. 'Res'ing is the only work!!! 😆 😆
Edited by dharshu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dharshu

Usually ppl do res if they have some work to do!! But for shalu.. 'Res'ing is tge only work!!! 😆 😆


very well said mainly she has done 50 % res in my ffs😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dharshu

Usually ppl do res if they have some work to do!! But for shalu.. 'Res'ing is the only work!!! 😆 😆

wht the hell😲😲

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