~TORN APART~ ch 23 * updated!* 17/7 - Page 71

Originally posted by: swriter

Not again but i m pretty sure that this man is adham means the most cruel man wear face of angel 😡. Iss par to mujhe start se doubt tha😡 ki ye itana innocent kaise ho sakta hai😡. Ya fir aap humara mind adham ki taraf lejakar kisi aur ko surprisly humare sama lana chahati ho.but i think 70% he is adham and 30% mean jalal'dead brother.but anyway it nice chapter.
Plz update soon and don't take long time di.

This is interesting that everyone just assumes he is dead well i guess you'll find out soon😉😉 and thank us😳😳

Originally posted by: 155pari

Loved it... Please update soon... I hope jalal and jodha will be all fine...

Thank u drr!😳 yeah i'll try to update soon!!

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Nice chapter continue soon eagerly waiting for nest chapter pm me don't be late thanks for pm update nest chapter soon

thank u!! yeah I'll try my best to update it sooner!😉😳

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA

Will comment soon... 😉

okie

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA

Di... u r ending this story... 😡
Plz plz write a new story... plz 😃

say what???😲😲

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Awesome dear

yep I understand 4 ur late update

but try to update soon dear

abt the chappy it was really awesome dear

thnks 4 the pm dear

Thankuuu , yes i will try my best to update sooner sorry bout that 😕 and you're welcome😳

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Awesome dear

yep I understand 4 ur late update

but try to update soon dear

abt the chappy it was really awesome dear

thnks 4 the pm dear

yes i will try really hard to update soon!! and thank u dr!😳

Originally posted by: rima4ever

smashing update

Thank u😳

Originally posted by: geeta.M

Awesome update Divya..🤗

Continue soon.

aww thank u🤗 yes i will😳

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

superb update dear...
finally jalal found jodha...
so sad of them thay r facing so many think...
what happened to jalal nw...
u end d chapter with a question again...
update next chapter soon nd pm me...
thank u for d update dear...

hehehe i always end it with a cliffhanger 😆😆 and thank you!!! 😳😳😳