~TORN APART~ ch 23 * updated!* 17/7

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

@Magpie_

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#691

Di 🤗 ...how r u?
shocking chapter😆
again u end chapter with a question ...it's frustrating... continue soon plz ❤️
thanks for the pm :)

Edited by ....Shefa.... - 10 years ago

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KanJmaskis

@KanJmaskis

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#692

Amazing update divya totaLly horrifying ...heart beat increasing updates u give nowdays with cid type theme an u nailed it 👏...jo ja met...very well described 😃... As always Ur update was full of thrill and mistery ...waiting fr mistery unfold😊

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harsh

@sirat.kaur

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#693

finally u updated after a long time
ch is superb n whole of suspense... update ASAP... eagerly waiting for next ch...n thanks for pm...

Edited by sirat15 - 10 years ago

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Divu di🤗
amazing update as usual... 😃
di if this story is coming to end then pleej start a new one naa... 😉
thnx 4 the pm di
love yaa❤️

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Amazing story with many ups and down. pls. update soon.

As now ja is going off air .If it is possible can u write your take five at least once for ja fan. Its a treat to read in ur writing. Because I always love to read it.

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Ann Louis

@Anaya13

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Divi that was awesome!!! Gah you write sooo damn well!! Everything was soo good!!! Please tell me ur updating soon??

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#697

jalal found jodha still stucked in bunglow... omg he is jalal bro... wat will happen now is jodha safe??? Rahim wil able to save them??? Pls update next chapi asap eagerly waiting for the update

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Divya Louis

@Divya879

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: savindi.db
haha😆 btw..the chappy is superb. ur writing is amazing dr..the way u discribed about feelings and emotions is awesome.. i want ask, is that usman jalal's brother?

thank uuu 😳 and no he isn't 😉

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Divya Louis

@Divya879

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#699

Originally posted by: swetiii
really u left it on the cliffhanger
suprb chappi
was that really ja's bro means adham

update sooon

well what can i say i always leave at a cliffhanger 😆😆 , hehehe i will! 😆 and thank uu😳

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Divya Louis

@Divya879

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: nhbr
Nice update Divya.
Finally Jalal and Jodha met.
Was that Adham or some other Bhai??
How is Jalal responsible for his Father and Brother's death????
How the hell are they related to terrorists😕😲
Thnx for the pm and pls update sooon.

so many questions nah🤣 oh glad🤣 all of it will be answered in the most terrible way 🤣 and thank uuu