Akdha OS: || Do Dil Ek Jaan..|| - Page 5

Originally posted by: vinitaj27

Wow nice writing. Hot n beautiful at the same time. Waiting to read more of ur work soon.

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

wow!! it is my favourite OS now!! Itni acchi lagi?😲i really don't like to read one shots Sorry yaar I didn't knew it...😕but after reading it, i will wait for you to write an OS and then, will just grab a bowl full of popcorn and a coke, and will enjoy it reading your OS.😆 Hayee Popcorn.. Mouth watering

literally!! yrr it was just soo soo soo!! beautiful! ❤️it was your comment that made me read the OS again😳 it was not showing any other feeling than love, pain of rejection and a contentment of acceptance, jodha's and jalal's emotion were just the cherry on the cake and reading it was a royal feel!! ⭐️ Royal

everything yrr!! be it from the clothes or their confession, all the things or be it the emotions or feelings, everything, every word was having a royal elegance, a royal addition,a reflection of their love. ❤️ Lovebirds they are😳

the consummation wala part in a single word was a true definition of purity!!I was soo nervous while typing it😃 a feeling to being together was reflecting in your OS!! 👏 Aww.. I know that saying thanks would be against our rules.. but I couldn't help but say thanks to you...😃

best suited title - do dil ek jaan ❤️,Love...❤️ i think no better title can suit it other than this. Arrey.. I should have added Gargi's suggested idea: Do JISM ek jaan🤣☺️

noww!! time to confess!! pehle i was one of your fan but now i m your biggest fan and i mean it!! (kisi ko batana mat...shhh) Aiyyyo meri biggest fan.. aa gale lag jaa🤗

now!! some deal related talks!!! (and the most important one!!)Pakki businesswoman hai tu... 😆

it is sara's gift - i m jealous😡, it is the best gift and plzz i want something like this after almost 5 months on 17th feb 2015.😆 Oye meri jealous dost...😆

and i don't want any thread vagerah, i m a little greedy, so i want two two OS and one SS, and one FF also.. Baap re...😆 Apni saari stories band karke bhi ye sab nahi likhne waali main..😆 But I'll try for 2 OS and an SS😉 FF to bhul jaa😆

orr bohut saari wishes, arre mera 18th b'day hoga naa😆 Dil ki dua hogi naa tere saath😳

bass itni si wishes hai, fulfil it😆 bola naa try karungi..😳

love, naam toh jaanti hai naa mera🤣 Haan.. Aisha Sharma..🤣

Phew..commenting from phone..

Originally posted by: najma123

why are you nervous sweetheart? bahut achcha tha! IT WAS EPIC!!!!!!!👏

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

@Bold.. Aisha ab tu ga.. main hun ek angel aur devil mera yaar🤣