Originally posted by: hemakeerti
"Two hours on and who could predict how the police constables would have treated a detainee in their custody - especially one who wasn't being backed by any big-shots!"
This is when I ACTUALLY got your gist and that is when I anticipated where this is leading to and what I'm going to read in the succeeding chapter.. 😉 I completely loved these two parts deeply, madly.. 🤗
Awww okie dokie... 😳 And I love you too JhanuEvery thing is so perfectly knitted in this update.. I loved Vishal congratulating Jodha for Jalal and demanding his reward.. he surely deserves it.. 😆
Oh yes he does need a reward... 😆 Poor thing... he sacrificed himself after all..Bhabhi also pleasantly surprised us with her naught gesture and I just lol-ed at this line "one fine day, when he DOES become a part of this family na... his interactions with your bhaiyya would be worth watching!'"
Yes.. she understands her hubby spot on, right?😆
I actually imagined Bhagwant's awkward, edgy expressions sharing the living room or dining table, one fine day, with so called "MANHOOS" Ladka 🤣 That would really be a treat to watch for Bhabhi and Nannad and I'm sure they'll share evil eye talks then 😆
I know... that scene would be so much fun to watch!
JALAL.. what should I say.. HERO IS BACK WITH A BANG.. (actually I loved the sullen angle of his too.. so I never missed him, though I can't see him devastated).. Again he guessed the stalker on his own with a simple equation 1+1=2..
Jalal!
I loved loved and loved the entire chatting convo.. all the messages are well-thought and well-framed by you.. 👏Thankooo Jhanu ☺️
And Lashy, a special mention for the way you penned Jo's feelings before taking up his call and after listening to his voice.. that excitement, that nostalgia, that passion took me to those good old days of my before marriage period.. 😆 I could completely relate to Jo's state.. 😉
Acha? And I was thinking you were talking about Ja Jo.. yahaan madam khud ki love story flashbacks soching .. 😆And what an amusing climax.. "Ufff Jalal! The stuff I do for you na...' 🤣Unfortunate na.. par she knew it .. her mamma's a light sleeper so she went inside bathroom instead of speaking in bedroom.. fir bhi, she heard teh khusar pusar.. esp at 2 am when rest of house is pin drop silence 🤣So Jalal is skeptical about Maan being the stalker.. and ready to fight for them if they are wrongly framed.. what a friend he is dear!! 👏
Yes 😊 not fair upon them if they're not the stalker na... you'll learn of HIS angle of this stalker thingy in next chapter.. all this while we've seen Jodha's lukka chuppi and feelings with Maan/Payal.. now it's time for Jalal's side..
Thank you for this dhamaka updates Lashu.. love you 🤗🤗🤗Love you too sooo much dearie.. 🤗