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SerialMasti

@SerialMasti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

No words for this amazing chapter. best part messages too good. Please update this story soon I am waiting eagerly what will happen. I think Jalal will go back to meena bajar and i can't wait to find out what she has planned. Please update this first.

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: SerialMasti
No words for this amazing chapter. best part messages too good. Please update this story soon I am waiting eagerly what will happen. I think Jalal will go back to meena bajar and i can't wait to find out what she has planned. Please update this first.

Thank U so much for your reply... Everyone loved messages part... including me😆 soon I will update. Glad to see your comment soon i will update😃

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
wonderful update bhaavi (hope i can call u that )...😊
it was worth wait . so far it was one of d best chappy of this FF loved every bit of it . fire is on both the sides .eventually . jodha is also giving in n jalal toh jalal hain hi . he is also getting driven in to his obsessive passionate side which is highly amusing n very much exciting . its a lot more getting interesting day by day n making desperate for more so when u'll be updating next...😆

thanx...😃
luv u so much ❤️

THANK U MANSI ... I love u called me Bhavvi... I am glad u find it worth to wait... hooray best chapter... i felt the same way... Yap you right they both are falling in.. I am so much happy you find this story exciting... I will update soon sweetheart😃

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@old_charm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
THANK U MANSI ... I love u called me Bhavvi... I am glad u find it worth to wait... hooray best chapter... i felt the same way... Yap you right they both are falling in.. I am so much happy you find this story exciting... I will update soon sweetheart😃

finally kisiko time mila reply karne ka...😉

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Congratulations on the second thread bhavini di 👏 You've truly come a long way eh! And i must say, totally deserving! 👍🏼
This was a class update! I mean what a gorgeous blend of emotions you've mixed here :O I truly loved it, i know its a regular thing for you to hear i loved it, fabulous stuff, stupendous, brilliant and falana par kya kare! Isse upar words bhi toh nahi bane! Matlab kya likhte ho yaar aap. Superb!
This update had too many best parts, it was so amazing to see jodha getting affected by jalal to such great extent! Oh man she has fallen for this mughal so bad, her feelings emotions were amazingly descibed! The letter thing was too amazing, poor abdul haha witnessing their crazy antics! It was so funny and cute! The way he is having an effect on her its going to be very problematic for her when this all is going to finally end. Climax would be very amazing i can smell from the crux of all these updates.
The meena bazaar stunt by jalal was so unexpected! He ignored jodha, oh gosh, well he should have done that before but now the timing was bad, it was mean of him to do so after being so friendly with her...he acts like she means nothing to him. Not cool!
Whole update was marvellous including rahim's care for jodha, salima begum returning back and then her conversation with hamida begum and amusement regarding jalal radha's closeness.
Will be waiting for the next 😊

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ash

@ashpat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

First of all, I want to apologize one more time that I could not proofread it on time and also read ur update earlier and comment, When I came on IF today, I saw 52 unread pms. I am just glad that finally I could read ur update and as i told u in text the reasons i could not proofread this time for you. so sorry again.

This update reminded me of few things that I have read somewhere which I will tell you when I text u. Anyways, first of all, why did u give us a cliffhangher? I was so looking forward to read and u just left us hanging at the end. not fair start typing soon,pleasee

Ok, now back to ur update. as I have said so many times before, the way you put emotions into words is very commendable and I repeat you are one of the best on IF JA who can do this effortlessly. One has never have to guess the chararacter's feelings and no I am not pulling ur leg as u mentioned in one of your reply to my comments. I am telling what I feel. Jalal's feelings were shown nicely and loved how u showed radha's conflicting feelings and then bringing her back to reality that she is jodha.

Jalal stopping radha with different ways and finally succeeding was done nicely too. It is always great to see Rahim and radha's bonding. Salima was touched seeing radh'as purity and shocked after hearing all about her from HB. Entire letter exchanging between jalal and radha was diifferent and was suprised to c it, too. I was so happy to c the way Radha replied to ruq- just loved it, I know ruq has right on jalal but did not like to c their kiss and all that when he went to her khema but was feeling nice to c he was uncomfortable. I was shocked to c jalal not stopping at radha's khema considering how he felt three days ago. not only radha but even jalal is in dilemma regarding his dil.

update soon, plzz thanks for pm. muahhh

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sri divya desamsetti

@sri_divya

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

UPDATE PLEASE...!!!

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Gayuraj
Superb yaar loved it awesome update

Thank you so much!!! I am glad u enjoyed this chaper😃

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Tehzeeb89
OMG!!!OMG!!!! wat a chappy!!👏

AWWW... so sweet... Thank U so much... I am so so so happy with OMG😆
i love this update verrryyy muccchhh!!!!!!!❤️
awesome, mind blowing n really no words to describe ur writings!!!😊

Me blushing😳😳😳 Actually I loved this update too
i'm totally speechlesss diii...👍🏼
but y u end the chappy at cliff hanger... i was like pls stop kidding me i want more pls pls pls!!!!
pls pls pls update soon really can't wait for it dii.

I will update soon... I have already written 5000 wordings...😃
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i love to read ur update n i dont care if it is more than hundred thousand words diii i'll surely read...

Omg😲😲😲 hundres thousand words... 😆 sachhi...😳 LOVE U SWEETHEART😃