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Divya Louis

@Divya879

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awww such a romantic teaser!

Update soon wo bhi looong okay

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Anshita..

yaar first of all, sorry for late reply..

Have exam on monday to uski preparation chal rahi hai..😭

But awesome ss yaar👏👏

Never knew you're such an awesome writer.!😃

Pehle bolna tha naa..😆

Sorry once again but ye kya..😲

Aapko chapters to 3-4 lines ke hote hain😲😲😲

Iss baar 3-4 pages (In MS Word) hone chahiye..

Bataao.. ek to teaser ne mujhe hila ke rakh diya hain.. aur aap ho ki itne chote chapters dete ho...Not Fair!😆

Ek bahut long chapter dena wo bhi soony soony.. okay?
Love you!🤗❤️

Thanks for the pm sweetheart!😳

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anshita priyadarshni

@marshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Ok .long chapter jarur milega sabko but u know what story bahut jald end hone wali hai bcoz its a os but i promise iske baad ek ff start karungi ok.

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ruthshalini
yeeep

offo.. pehle update diya nahi ki dara diya..Anshita!

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anshita priyadarshni

@marshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Guys sr hai at the end of the story.

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: marshi
Guys sr hai at the end of the story.

really😆😆

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anshita priyadarshni

@marshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

chappy 4
at the cafe
sab ne shopping khatam kar di aur kuch khane keliye cafe mein aaye
jo- omg varun tumne meri pendent dekhi kahin i cannot find it its very precious to me.
varun- ok calm down love said varun by holding her by shoulders jalal was too angry with varun he said stop consoling her and lets find it ya ya and they started finding it
after 5 minutes
jo- i got it , she came back to the table.
ruks- kuch jyada hi azeez lagta hai ye pendent .
jo- it is
fb

joodha joodha shouted jalal kahan ho yaar tum
haan kaho said joodha
tumhare liye gift hai he handed her a box she opened it there it was a beautiful heart shape pendent .
jalal said tumhe jisse pyaar ho uska photo lagana apne saath.
jall self talk and the photo should be mine
thank u said

jo and hugged and hugged him tightly jalal hugged him back his one hand on her waist other on her back.
fb ends
jalal noticed that this is the same pendent whicch he gifted her par
agar woh mujhse pyaar nahi karti toh isse abhi tak apne paas kyun rakha hai.
ruks-jo tum bill pay karke aajao hum tumhara bahaar wait karte hai said rukku arrogantly .
jo-ok. she left her hand bag and went to pay the amount with her card.
jalal-tum log chalo mein apna phone table pe hi bhul gaya hun .jalal went back to the table and jo ke hand bag se woh pendent nikali aur use kholke dekha he was shocked joodha ne apne saath jalal ki photo lagayi thi now he was sure jo usse kuch chupa rahi hai she does not loves varun she loves him.usne jo ko aate hue dekha aur jaldi se pendent uske bag mein rakh ke bahar aagaya.
jo- mrs muhammad so good to listen thought jo jab cashier ne use uski card lautayi par use pata hai ki soon she is going to be x mrs muhammad.
parking area.
before jo could go near varun somebody pulled her it was none other than jalal he held her from waist and told tell me the truth u love me right jo was confused and struggling but more she struggles his grip gets stronger i only love varun got it said jo and pushed back jalal with all might but jalal kissed jo and told u love me and i will make u confess it and left jo and went.
at the muhammad mansion
in jo,s room jalal was standing outside the door to listen the talks of varun and jo.
sorry guys for mistakes and maybe this is the2nd last chappy of this os

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Ruthshalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Awesome blossom 😳
Can't wait for last chapter

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Anshita kuch samajh nahi aa raha yaar
Akdha love each other,haina
Phir ye Ruks ur Varun kyun hai?? 😡
Amd m pretty sure ki unke beech MU hui hain 😡
So wrong. Humesha Akdha ke beech mein hi MU kyun hoti hai bhai!!! 😡
Jall knows dat she loves him lekin tab bhi jaake confess nahi kar raha 😡

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anshita priyadarshni

@marshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Anushka8722
Anshita kuch samajh nahi aa raha yaar
Akdha love each other,haina
Phir ye Ruks ur Varun kyun hai?? 😡
Amd m pretty sure ki unke beech MU hui hain 😡
So wrong. Humesha Akdha ke beech mein hi MU kyun hoti hai bhai!!! 😡
Jall knows dat she loves him lekin tab bhi jaake confess nahi kar raha 😡

yaar anu patience first jalal shuld know the truth then confessing a very big revelation in the nxt chappy have patience