AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct)

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: Anushka8722
Read Varsha di's and Mehak di's comments...😆
Varsha di.. aapka to mujhe pehle se pata tha.. your love for this Jalal...😡
Mehak di... beautiful rape? seriously?😲 are you also hard core Jalal fan like Varsha di?😲

HEY RAAAMM😲😲😲😲 MEHEK beautiful rape😡😡😡😡😈😈😈😈😈

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Sam

@sam_0506

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Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Wonderful update PP..

Arre, this Jalal is like that cookie, Dark fantasy.. Full of chocolate. But till the time you don't take a bite you don't know it. When will Jodha take that bite?? (OMG, that sounded so naughty.. 😉) What I mean I can't wait till the time Jodha decides to unravel this mystery, understand the enigma called Jalal..

Sahi tha yaar.. Ekdam mast. The way he's possessive about her..

Apart from the part where he kinda forced himself on her, I have loved this Jalal of yours to the last T. Please please please update soon dear.. You have found a new fan here for your story.. 😳

And thanks for the PM. 😊

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#753

Prianka! Great update! Main toh impress ho gayi yaar tumse, waah! Kya likha hai tumne! Waaahh!
Okay i know i should shut this thing up, so yes! Jodha and rico's conversation was the super emotional factor in this update and you nailed it there girl! Amazingly written! That part when jodha controls her thought of telling rico everythinga and just says some lovely comforting words to her son was breakthrough part! 👏
Then jalal and rico's moments were very sweet and lovely in the whole update, the little boy is so fragile and jalal is enjoying this new phase of his life, being a father. These developing and growing emotions inside him were perfectly depicted by you!
Then maham and ruku lol i loved when jalal insulted ruku, that kiss my arse moment was bang on! XD
Maham the cunning lady uff "beta hai toh biwi bhi hogi" statement is enough lol she will start her horses now :p
Then the cute jalal rico moment :) he making the kid understand not to reveal her mom's identity was nice, glad that he chose this way. Then his urge to meet jodha! How can i forget that. Mai dar jaati hu tumhare jalal se kabhi kabhi lol when he says that when it comes to jodha it becomes too difficult for him to keep on his own words! Phew yeh aadmi toh danger hai boss! But i am very keen to see his transformation in your words. You know what i mean right...like he way you described his desire towards her in the past updates were different than this one...the way he is yearning for her...sitting beneath the sky and gazing at the stars, i can see the moonlight rising in him.
And precap! Update sooon!! 😃

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SUSMITA SUR

@Susmita96

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Posted: 10 years ago

#754

Please update. ...I hv been a reader of u r ff fr a long time. ...plus continue n update. ..love the concept of this ff please update. ...lookin forward to reading it