AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct) - Page 78

Originally posted by: Chin2_n

Yet again u nailed it, and it was awesome update👏

Originally posted by: RKholic

Mind blowing update loved it hats off⭐️ 👏
Thanks for the pm 😳

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Hey Prianka 🤗

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kalgi my love...sorry for late reply re...main ghumne gaye thi...😭

Pouty Rico & Poor Jodha.. what an heart melting touchy touchy convacation between both.😳

"Sometimes mere presence of your beloved around heals every wound your heart carried for long" Well said Prianka 👍🏼..I just love this line😳

thanku re😳

Curious Ruku & thoughtfull maham. I don't know why but started to worrying about rico's safety might be 'coz of serial effect😡

'This is Salim Mohammad Mirza. MY son.' the Xerox copy of jalal.. proud father😎..incompatible Rico 😒 crushed maham and shocked rukku😲.. oops quite interesting encounter😆

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Such a delight to see this new father-son ponding😳+

am glad u liked it

Will jodha come to solve the RIDDLE of Jalaluddin Mohammad? I'm little curious here.. How on earth jalal could find a way that will bring jodha to IMPERIAL?????😕

age padte raho...pata chal jayega😆

Overall such an outstanding update and great come back Priyanka👏 and I'm really excited as well how this story is going to grow further.😃

aww🤗..will try to fulfill ur expectation re😃

Oops again very exciting pre-cap. Eagerly waiting for the next chappy😛 update soon 👍🏼

love you...

Originally posted by: aviaanya

OH I love ti. I can't wait to see what answers he gets. I want Jodha to come and for them to have some lovely family moments together.

Update soon :)

Originally posted by: spvd

part 16
awesome dear...
excellent...
Jodha and Rico's convo was so lovely...
they love each other so much...
how is Jodha gonna manage?
hope Rico does something so that Jodha will and stay with them...
Jalal's patience is wearing out...
when hes smart made Rico not to tell anything to anyone about his mom...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: lashy

PP sweetheart.. LD ka koi ataa pataa nahi... na NJAPA mein hai... na Desire par.. 😕

But she did say she was busy till Diwali end!

pals ke cousin ki shadi hai...so she has gone to MUM...uske mom-dad ka ghar😳

Kaise ho tum 🤗 abhi bhi sikkim ka glow uttra ki nahin 😆

hai...ane ka maan hi nehi tha

Aur koi good news ho tho jaldi bataa de 😉 because 1 month se gaayab na... tho I hope you understand 😆😉😛

kamineee😡

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Staring at these midnight stars...means many thing for Jalal. These blinking dots in the unseen darkness...reflect the hidden self of Jalaluddin Mohammad. It was more like a mirror to his soul. In other words...Jalal's life was just like this starry sky. Few glittering dots visible to all...the rest...too dark to see through. If you go by the dots...you miss the truth...and if you try to decipher the darkness, it swallows you within its riddle

A RIDDLE...that's what Jalal's life was. A riddle...he never let anyone solve...a riddle...he never let anyone sneak into. But it was not like he never wanted it to be solved. He wanted...once.

It was Jodha.

He wanted HER to solve this riddle named Jalaluddin Mohammad. He wanted her to take over his being. He wanted her to tie up his scattered life. But she refused. Hence...it was the same Jalal again...UNSOLVED...UNSEEN.

What an analogy PP!! What a description!! 👏 And with such a prowess to pen emotions, you dare say that you're going to quit writing.. 😡

hema...damnt mat...likh rahi hoon na😳

I instantly loved this description of Jalal symbolizing his life to the starry sky. ⭐️ And I so badly wish Jodha to solve this RIDDLE as soon as possible, but I know it is going to be a long journey before that..

main bhi chahti hoon re

So, what is that "HIS WIFE can sign on his behalf?" What plan has he cooked up to bring Jodha back.. I'm curious, anxious, nervous and all other "ous"-es you see... 😆

why you think yeh Jalal ka plan hai😆

sorry for late reply re😭

Originally posted by: sam_0506

Wonderful update PP..

thanku re😃

Arre, this Jalal is like that cookie, Dark fantasy.. Full of chocolate. But till the time you don't take a bite you don't know it. When will Jodha take that bite?? (OMG, that sounded so naughty.. 😉) What I mean I can't wait till the time Jodha decides to unravel this mystery, understand the enigma called Jalal..

bapre!!! such an erotic comment...😲...main toh lal lal ho gaye😳

Sahi tha yaar.. Ekdam mast. The way he's possessive about her..

hmm

Apart from the part where he kinda forced himself on her, I have loved this Jalal of yours to the last T. Please please please update soon dear.. You have found a new fan here for your story.. 😳

love you knew FAN...🤗

hope you keep reading this...

And thanks for the PM. 😊

welcome dear

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Prianka! Great update! Main toh impress ho gayi yaar tumse, waah! Kya likha hai tumne! Waaahh!

surbhi...kitni tariff karti hai yaar😲😆

Okay i know i should shut this thing up, so yes! Jodha and rico's conversation was the super emotional factor in this update and you nailed it there girl! Amazingly written! That part when jodha controls her thought of telling rico everythinga and just says some lovely comforting words to her son was breakthrough part! 👏
Then jalal and rico's moments were very sweet and lovely in the whole update, the little boy is so fragile and jalal is enjoying this new phase of his life, being a father. These developing and growing emotions inside him were perfectly depicted by you!

yaar rula dia mujhe...mere FF se toh tera comment achha hai😳

Then maham and ruku lol i loved when jalal insulted ruku, that kiss my arse moment was bang on! XD

thats my fab portion too...

Maham the cunning lady uff "beta hai toh biwi bhi hogi" statement is enough lol she will start her horses now :p
Then the cute jalal rico moment :) he making the kid understand not to reveal her mom's identity was nice, glad that he chose this way.

SMART man😆

Then his urge to meet jodha! How can i forget that. Mai dar jaati hu tumhare jalal se kabhi kabhi lol when he says that when it comes to jodha it becomes too difficult for him to keep on his own words! Phew yeh aadmi toh danger hai boss!

yaar...trust me...mujhe bhi darr lagta hai isse

But i am very keen to see his transformation in your words. You know what i mean right...like he way you described his desire towards her in the past updates were different than this one...the way he is yearning for her...sitting beneath the sky and gazing at the stars, i can see the moonlight rising in him.

Hmm...about this...no cemments

And precap! Update sooon!! 😃

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