AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct) - Page 75

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 16
awesome dear...
excellent...
Jodha and Rico's convo was so lovely...
they love each other so much...
how is Jodha gonna manage?
hope Rico does something so that Jodha will and stay with them...
Jalal's patience is wearing out...
when hes smart made Rico not to tell anything to anyone about his mom...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Res for comnent on chapter 16
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Lovely update Priyanka!

thank you dear😃

I want Jodha to come to Mumbai and stay with Rico...why shud she and Rico stay apart and get punished for what Jalaal did, they dont deserve that!!
She shud stay in front of Jalaal and stay away from him, this is his punishment for what he did!
jalal toh pagal hi ho jayega fir...😆

Anyway in future also if there can be any hope for Jodha to forgive him, she needs to atleast see some change in him to think about forgiving him! The only way she will forgive him would be for her son, to give him a normal family life, otherwise she can never forget what he did to her, I don't think Jalaal deserves forgiveness, but for the sake of Rico may be Jodha shud forgive him but not this soon, atleast after feeling and seeing Rico safe and happy. Just for Rico Jodha will have to think about moving in with Jalaal...no child should have to stay with one parent when he can with both!
jalal ko maaf karna near to impossible hai...but as this story is about Jalal and jodha...hence I will have to work out something...but I will never make it a cake walk for for him.

But it will be a very difficult decision for Jodha! Let's see how you take the story forward!

Preet
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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks samy😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ppuuu...🤗 ... btw teri pals kidar hai 😕 ... shez been gayab since many days re 😒
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love my desire jalluuu 🤗☺️

le har roz mein sirf itna post karungi ... 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Ppuuu...🤗 ... btw teri pals kidar hai 😕 ... shez been gayab since many days re 😒


usko bukhar hua re😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Staring at these midnight stars...means many thing for Jalal. These blinking dots in the unseen darkness...reflect the hidden self of Jalaluddin Mohammad. It was more like a mirror to his soul. In other words...Jalal's life was just like this starry sky. Few glittering dots visible to all...the rest...too dark to see through. If you go by the dots...you miss the truth...and if you try to decipher the darkness, it swallows you within its riddle

A RIDDLE...that's what Jalal's life was. A riddle...he never let anyone solve...a riddle...he never let anyone sneak into. But it was not like he never wanted it to be solved. He wanted...once.

It was Jodha.

He wanted HER to solve this riddle named Jalaluddin Mohammad. He wanted her to take over his being. He wanted her to tie up his scattered life. But she refused. Hence...it was the same Jalal again...UNSOLVED...UNSEEN.

What an analogy PP!! What a description!! 👏 And with such a prowess to pen emotions, you dare say that you're going to quit writing.. 😡 I instantly loved this description of Jalal symbolizing his life to the starry sky. ⭐️ And I so badly wish Jodha to solve this RIDDLE as soon as possible, but I know it is going to be a long journey before that.. So, what is that "HIS WIFE can sign on his behalf?" What plan has he cooked up to bring Jodha back.. I'm curious, anxious, nervous and all other "ous"-es you see... 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
Res... Priyanka... crazy busy at work... I will read it tonight and comment
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch


I have a better IDEA for you...😃
in our mass com classes...who were taught a particular thing (which I never got a chance to apply in real)...you can apply that...

here it goes...(in my style)

when its RISKY to take side...go neutral...😉





when its RISKY to take side...go neutral...😉 ( I don't agree with that line Priyanka, I feel opposite.. I believe when there is a necessary to give your opinion never keep your mouth shut... ) Actually I am typical Aries... I can't act like politician. hehehhhe

Aur Meri Varsha to Jalal ke pyar me hai... pyar me to gadhi bhi pari lagti hai... to Jalal kya chiz hai...hehehehhe🤣 Varsha Ka Jalal best hai... 😆


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