UNPREDICTABLE LUV #3 (closed) new link added on pg 1

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#881

loved all your comments will reply later 🤗

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gauriS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#882

wonderful update😃

that dialogue by hamida aur mai kaisi lagti hoon 🤣

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Sush

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Posted: 11 years ago

#883

Oh...Aisha what a update yaar...today I got sometime..so no res...sidha comment!!!!!😆 😆...

At first...As usual a blockbuster & a LOOONG chappy...👏 👏

& Yaar...I am also agreeing with Jalal...yeh Rishika bhi na...Jo ko bigad kehi chhodegi!!!!!!!😡 😉 😆

& Jo bhi...Jalal se ye sab baat aise kar rehi hai!!!!!!!!Height of innocence!!!!!!🤣 🤣...

Koi Jo ki ye to samjha do...ki intimate moments pe automatically hormones arouse ho jate hain!!!!So...no need of learning tips, seeing videos & SMS s & all...😆 😆

Yaar...Aisha tu abhi hi iss Rishika ka setting karwa de...warna isko control karna impossible ho jayegi!!!!😉 😉

& Jalal-Jodha scenes...very very romantic!!!☺️

& don't ever think to stop it now!!!!!! Yaar.abhi to mere Salim aana baaki hain...usse pehele story kaise ewend ho sakti hain????😉 😳 😆...

Continue soon.soon.soon...

Edited by --Sush116-- - 11 years ago

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--a.ishu--

@--a.ishu--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#884

Wowww aisha!!!! Ozzm update yaar!!! Loved it!! Super cute!!! Cant wait for the next part yaar!!! Plzzz update soon!! Luvv ya!!! 🤗

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#885

Chapter was awesome! 👏
Baaki ki comment kal ke exam ke baad 😆

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#886

Aur rahi baat tere uss ghatiya note ki to beta uske liye to ek accha khaasa lecture tera wait kar raha hai 😡 Miss.Aisha,yiur soo gone! 😡

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ahaana kapoor

@ahaana00

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Posted: 11 years ago

#887

terii toh!! i will kill u itna mast plot sochne ke baad u r asking should i continue it or not😡

ofcourse u have to! yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai, i have telling u for the 1000th time

now coming to the update, oh god!! u know i loved it but there are few lines i liked the most :

"jodha are you inside?" asked jalal as rishika was blocking his way "nhi toh" said jodha so as to save rishika

ohhh god this line was just fab!! my innocent jodha, she is just sooo

"you know that nurse take all the blood from my body" complained jodha

and this line!! omg! so sweet and cute, beautiful,,i can understand jodha is really insecure about her past, she is scared of losing jalal😭

"why are u whistling haan??" said veer slapping mirza's head to which mirza glared him "maine kuch kiya tha?" asked mirza

this line😆, veer is soo naughty🤣

that seen where veer and mirza was describing girl but jodha thought that they are talking about her mehandi😆

there was a girl and a boy, i think they were not wearing anything, not sure about it as there was a blanket over them naa, you know the girl was screaming, but how could you know, you were not there with us naa"

jodha was so disappointed that jalal was not there 🤣

ohh, its her childhood problem"

and this last line by jalal, oh god his devil sister😆

oh god i loved the above lines,,,bbye going to the classes😆

Edited by ahaana00 - 11 years ago

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#888

Originally posted by: Anushka8722
Aur rahi baat tere uss ghatiya note ki to beta uske liye to ek accha khaasa lecture tera wait kar raha hai 😡 Miss.Aisha,yiur soo gone! 😡

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