UNPREDICTABLE LUV #3 (closed) new link added on pg 1

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anshita priyadarshni

@marshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#861

Awesome and continue the story even after akdha.s marriage yaar

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sara

@SARA4444

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Posted: 11 years ago

#862

gdkgs 🤣...marriage k baad bhi cont. kar 😡

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: SARA4444
gdkgs 🤣...marriage k baad bhi cont. kar 😡

ab maine kya ker diya aisa?🤢

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shikha

@shikha-aggarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#864

Awesome update...
And pls continue this..
Best of luck for exams

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#865

😆😆😆😆😆😆 😆😆😆😆😆 😆😆😆😆😆

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#866

Bahahaha, hahaha lol🤣

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#867

Okay, now serious.😆

I loved this update.❤️

I like this Jodha. She is so sweet and innocent.😳😳😳

Grr...yeh Rishika patta nahi Jodha ko kya sikhaal rahi hai..ab toh Jalal ke saath saath main bhi pareshaan ho gayi hoon. 🤪

Jab Hamida Begham ne dono boys ko dekha Mendhi ke function mein..it was soo funny.
The boys were admiring the girls one by one and she's like "or mein keisi hu"😆
😆 And the boys' answer was quite funny. "arre aunty aaptoh bohut he zyada sexy lag rahi hu"😲

Jodha texting Jalal was cute ;) Jala was shocked and impressed by her cute antics. hehe😆

Last but not least, superb ending to this part. Rishika interrupts Akdha AGAIN.😆

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Whaaat???😲😲😲

Is that even something to ask?? No way are you ending this story. Better continue it.😡
What will I read if you end this?🤢 No my decision is final...you will have to continue it.

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Overall: Totally liked this update. Loved how Jalal was concerned about Jodha being brainwashed by Rishika.😆 I have said this before and will say it again, you are a really creative person. God has given you this talent of writing which not everyone has. So keep up your great work Aisha!! :D

Love you❤️,
Pookhi😳

Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago

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Uzma Ahmed

@RKfanatic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#868

Lovely chapter 👏
Loving this ff, continue it after the wedding chapters & the dresses are way too pretty 😳
Thanks for the pm 😃

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Uzma Ahmed

@RKfanatic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#869

Sorry the like button isn't working

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surabhi chandgothia

@chandgothia

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#870

An amazin update...couldn't stop laughing at the innocence on jodha...superb writing...damn excited about the first night part...plz do update it soon...shall desperately be waiting for it...u truly are worth the appreciate... <3 <3