@@FF: The Travel Diaries of Jalal and Jodha@@CHAPTER 1 UPDATED 7/14

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Samanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Hey Lyra!

That update was fab!

I liked the way you described the entire place that they visited. I am sure a lot of research must be going in writing these chapters!

Keep up the good work! And update soon!

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AntaresVega

@AntaresVega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: justlovetv
Hey Lyra!

That update was fab!

I liked the way you described the entire place that they visited. I am sure a lot of research must be going in writing these chapters!

Keep up the good work! And update soon!

Haha. Thanks. It's not a big deal since I had once visited Jerusalem myself.😃

Sure. I'll try yo update as fast as I can.

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Akanksha_33

@Akanksha_33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Fab update Lyra! 😳

Can't wait for the next chapter.

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AntaresVega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: rima4ever
wonderful start

Thank u.😳

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

That was a wonderful update Lyra😛...Your writing style is quite different from others...

Jalal and Jodha have started lying (majboor hai becharo ki) and I think they will have to lie in the future too😉😆...But I am not complaining...In fact it is funny and I think these small white lies will bring them closer😉...The man at the Church made an akashwani and blessed them when he told Jalal about how they make a great pair, happy marriage and lovely kids😉...Jalal will realize it in time and so will our smart but buddhu Jodha but I think thodi der se😉...Sharing room, pillows in middle😆...Loving them all😉...Continue soon Lyra and do PM😊

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AntaresVega

@AntaresVega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: rima4ever
please continue soon

Will do.

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AntaresVega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Rak014
Lyra!👍🏼

😳

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AntaresVega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Akanksha_33
Fab update Lyra! 😳
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks a lot. I'll update as soon as I can. 😊

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AntaresVega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Pals2411
That was a wonderful update Lyra😛...Your writing style is quite different from others...

Jalal and Jodha have started lying (majboor hai becharo ki) and I think they will have to lie in the future too😉😆...But I am not complaining...In fact it is funny and I think these small white lies will bring them closer😉...The man at the Church made an akashwani and blessed them when he told Jalal about how they make a great pair, happy marriage and lovely kids😉...Jalal will realize it in time and so will our smart but buddhu Jodha but I think thodi der se😉...Sharing room, pillows in middle😆...Loving them all😉...Continue soon Lyra and do PM😊

@bold, OMG!

They'll have to tell many lies and that too to many people because they're forced to.😆

Jodha too knows..she perhaps just doesn't express it you know.😊 I'll update as soon as I can.😳