@@FF: The Travel Diaries of Jalal and Jodha@@CHAPTER 1 UPDATED 7/14

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: AntaresVega

Will do.

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Rasika29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Nice concept and lovely start...😊

Continue soon and do PM me if possible.

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AntaresVega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Rasika29
Nice concept and lovely start...😊

Continue soon and do PM me if possible.

Thank you. 😳

I'll definitely continue soon.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: AntaresVega

You can always tell me if it's boring. It is actually a travelogue and hence there were many places where I mentioned old landmarks. If there is inconvenience regarding anything , you can always tell me.😳Most welcome

No i found it very interesting actually...knowledge pf unknown things is always good:)

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RadhikaS0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Oh, Lyra! Amazing!!!⭐️

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it 🤗

What a great start and what a promising story it seems! I have read a lot of fiction and it sounds very professional. 👏👏👏 Kudos to you and update soon.

Great map! When you had mentioned the route that day, it had struck me you were talking of the same route as taken by Marco Polo and hey, what do you know, he made his appearance today. 😆 I'm glad you haven't made Ruq tag along on this road trip. 😛

All the best! 👍🏼

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AntaresVega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: RadhikaS0
Oh, Lyra! Amazing!!!⭐️

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it 🤗

What a great start and what a promising story it seems! I have read a lot of fiction and it sounds very professional. 👏👏👏 Kudos to you and update soon.

Great map! When you had mentioned the route that day, it had struck me you were talking of the same route as taken by Marco Polo and hey, what do you know, he made his appearance today. 😆 I'm glad you haven't made Ruq tag along on this road trip. 😛

All the best! 👍🏼

Well, thank you so much. It's my pleasure. 😳

Ruq was never meant to tag along. She'll only serve a minor role. But I had to mention her in the character sketch as we all know her name so I wouldn't have to introduce her.

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NutellaWaffle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Hey Lyra awesme update 😳 loved it 😳 hv u been to Israel ??its good to see all places in ur map n described them nicely 😃 loved JJ cute nokjhok moments while traveling n in bed 😳 waiting for ur nxt update 😳 plz update soon 😃

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AntaresVega

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Akdhaparijatluv
Hey Lyra awesme update 😳 loved it 😳 hv u been to Israel ??its good to see all places in ur map n described them nicely 😃 loved JJ cute nokjhok moments while traveling n in bed 😳 waiting for ur nxt update 😳 plz update soon 😃

Ty. Yes I've been to Israel.😳