UNPREDICTABLE LUV #2 (closed) new link added- pg-1 - Page 76

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Actually I loved this chapter so much ...so muje acchi comment deni thi... but me lazy khich rahi thi... yaar chapter bhi kitna lamba hai... comment bhi long honi chahiyena😆

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

sab res kerke bhaag jaao😆

Originally posted by: arpita1226

When are we getting updatee

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

abe mene ab unres kiya... ab tu muje detail me reply kar😆

Originally posted by: arpita1226

When are we getting updatee

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

dii rukko let i see yr comment pehle arpita ko btati hu

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

yello is thread ke bhi 100 pges complete

2 chapters mei he 100 ker diye

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

UNRES

👏👏👏AMAZING MIND BLOWING MASTER CHAPTER

ohh teri dii sachi mei bohut bada comment hai

What a mind blowing beginning... I am seriously speechless...

What an update... I read this chapter... about weak ago... but still I feel I just read it... I still remember many beautiful moment of the updates... The way receive letter... and the best part she wake up right on time... just five min before the her special day

dii kya kere uthana pada usse😆😆

Love how he told her to come up and said there is no need to mention his name... touched my heart

hehehehe...thankz dii

... I knew he is going to something special. I pictured Jodha... How she would have run without shoes in excitement... entire porch decorated with roses... aww... this Jalal is way too romantic... It was her birthday... and that day was very tuff day for her... she needed to cry out to get over the past... poor Jalal... He must be feeling vulnerable to make her cry on her birthday... When she screamed out loud with her pain and tears my heart cried ... What a mind blowing writing aishu... U deserve clap for that para... What a intense painful scene... What she has gone through ... remembering everything and blurted out with tears... thank god for that... I love how he answers her...and try to make her understand what happen was destiny not her... Poor Jo got unconscious... but glad that is normal.

yeaa dii...yr memory is really awesome...👏👏

Finally fun time... Jodha sweetly open chocolate box... and Mirza surprise with this cheap gift..hehehe ... Jalal knows is Jodha ... she wants love...she looks happiness in little sutff... (baby elephant ) heheheh than a necklace ...vow... he know what girls loves... I love how she got shocked with each gift...and when she screamed... mirza was so confuse with her behavior ... and cute little veer... really very cute... gift.. he so thoughtful and he knows what she love... what reaction she will have seeing each gift...

uss lil gift kaa naam kheer tha

U don't miss anything... vow... I love clarification between santaram ... ek hi din me Jalal ne kya kuch nahi kiya Jo ke liye... vow... he gave her memories back... her photos... superb... yaar... I have no words left...

hehehehe!!!! dont know what to say...so just laughing

I love how he took away her tears... and they got disturb... oooppps... Abhi vo ladki ko aana tha... kya naam hai any way Jalal ki sis...

rishika...i take my words back...aap bhi bhoolte ho😆

Hamida ne to bas usko apni bahu maan hi liya hai...purkho ka haar de rahi hai...vow... but good she didn't took this expensive gift... and Jalal understood it too...

He took her to her parent house... yaar yeh Jalal ne kitna kuch kiya vow... and dress... aur uspe itne sare compliments... Jodha to bichari mar hi gayi... besharam ladki kitana Sharma rahi thi...heheh

diii aap credit jalal ko mat do...thinking is mine😆

Vow... birthday party... What a surprise... and the way he said... I love U... I was like what... he finally did it... amazing... the way Jodha was doing dance... she is really cute...

hehehe!!! just like me🤣

Finally he propose her for marriage... I was really lost in them... While writing I realized I still remember most of the part of the chapter... How can I forget about their precious kiss... Jodha has to do some drama... I love their first kiss... gooses bumps...

aap ko kyu aa rhe the😆😆

U R mind blowing writer... U can write about romance... comedy... love... emotion... and everthing... Keep writing ...and sorry for late comment... mafi dedo baba...

dii aap jitna late krte ho utna bada comment likhte ho...isliye aap ko maaf krna padta hai...intelligence to koot koot ke bhari aap mei

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Kya score hai... IF KA RECORD BREAK KARNA HAI KYA😆