UNPREDICTABLE LUV #2 (closed) new link added- pg-1 - Page 74

Originally posted by: ..dreamygatz..

😆 will be waiting!! 😉 tab be ek jashn ailaan karungi! 😉

Originally posted by: ruthshalini

y ru targeting my ff mara pas laptop nhi ah nd update 31 ko milaga 😡 😉

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

gud excuse😡

ur excuse queen not me 😡 nd I'm going to update on 31

Originally posted by: ruthshalini

ur excuse queen not me 😡 nd I'm going to update on 31

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

noo...maine perso he update kiya tha naa...u said yr laptop is ohk now

babez I broke my laptop so who can it be ok 😭 😭

Originally posted by: ruthshalini

babez I broke my laptop so who can it be ok 😭 😭

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

u said that yr father is ready something like that

ready to buy new laptop

Originally posted by: ruthshalini

ready to buy new laptop

What a lovely update Aisha!! It was sooo nice the way he got her out of her misery world and made her birthdya special with all the lovely giftsand specially the ILU and then the way she pinched him to check if it was real or dream and then cutely asked him hum bhaag kab rahe hain? She is such a cutie pie!!
Their first kiss
The whole chapter was just awesome...bahut maza aaya!!
Next update kab milega??

Aishaa.. wonderful FF.. Jodha is so lively innocent girl...OMG I couldn't stop laughing when she calls the HOT Guy " DIRTY DOG" only she can give that name & poor Jalaal now accepted the name happily..😃

Just loved all the parts especially the shayaris are superb.. Good to see Mirza and Jodha cute fights😆 ..I just loved the part where JO goes and live in Jalaal house with sweetu & tweetu...In between Veer and she named the DOG as veeru, so innocent Jodha and also ..

Your FF have so many pairs. Santaram was a protective brother.. Good to see the way Jo rushed to Santaram & piya room .. OMG asked why he took time to open.. Kya ladaki hai 🤣

I loved the flashback of sad Jodha and how Jalaal fall for her & now how he showered his love to overcome Jodha past and gifted her the most beautiful presents on her 24th birthday..

Aisha.. just like your FF unpredictable love, you are the unpredictable writer I have till now read... I just loved your FF a lot... It's full of fun & I just laughing madly with each chapter...

The best chaper was JO living in Jallu house to take care of him & also getting ready to watch cricket, shyaris, veer, truth & dare game, Hamida love, mirza & veer convo with Jo is so lively .. Would love to see more Jo & Mirza convos along with veer..Waiting to see Rony & Moti marriage also..

Please PM me & waiting for your next chapter... Would love to see JO innocent like this ..