AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3)

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#881

When are you giving the 3rd part PP😕😡...Kidhar gayab ho gayi hai...Chutti to nahin hai na aaj teri😕...

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J2lover

@J2lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#882

sorry for late reply miss.PP...😃😃...honestly coudn't find WORDS to comment...😳😳...n secondly...after READING the update i was MAD ON JALAL like anythng...coudn't think of commenting at that tym!!!😆😆...your potrayal of jalal is more THE MOST complicated i have ever read...simply saying di...NEVER heard of A RAPIST regretting of molesting a girl even before doing IT!!😔😔...but one thing i PECULIARLY noticed IS THE MEANING OF YOUR "FF''S" TITLE...you meant it in this chappy...i think in this chappy the DESIROUS MAN jalal won over the GOOD PERSON in him!!!🥱🥱 ...i think u showed it that MEN ARE EXTREMELY WEAK at heart... n men like jalal...THEIR DESIRE to JUST OBTAIN what THEY wants ruins INNOCENT lives like jodha!!🥱...POOR gal...😭😭...jalal dosen't love her..HE IS RIDICULOUSLY OBSESSED of HER!!!!😡...n THE most IRONICAL part...THEY BARELY KNOW EACH OTHER!!!😡😡...forcing on A GAL you barely knw is like a SIN to do!!!!!!!😡😡...i got the glimpse of TODAY'S RAPSITS in jalal...🥱🥱...now i knw HOW these gals GET VICTIMIZED!!🥱🥱...though it WAS foolish of JO ALSO to go there in the first place......going till that door was OK but going inside A LONELY COTTAGE...was not a very BRILLANT idea!!!😕😕...BUT COMING TO YOUR WRITING DI!!!👏👏...you REALLY IRATE ME!!!😆😆...i felt LIKE throwing jutta chappals on JALLU for the first tym for whom am "CRAZY" tooo.. like anythng!!🤪...sorry for that!!!!😛😛..but coudn't help reading HIS behaviour with JO!!!😛😛...BUT SUCH IS THE POWER of your WRITING DI!!!!👏...JAI HOO aapki!!!🤗🤗...ITS GETTING DARKER N DARKER!!!😉😉...AM SOO SOO LOVING IT!!! KUDOS FOR THIS CHAPPY PP DI!!!!😉..Ab JALDI JALDI UPDATE KARNA...n lastly sorry FOR SOME HARSH WORDS here about YOUR CHARACTER OF JALLU..😭😭...i just wrote what i thought...😭😭...NO OFFENSE HAA DI...😳😳...Eagerly waiting!!🤗🤗

Edited by J2lover - 11 years ago

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#883

what is this PP ...?? where r u hiding 😡 ... update de do ... cannot wait any longer 😡

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#884

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
what is this PP ...?? where r u hiding 😡 ... update de do ... cannot wait any longer 😡

PP it seems is too busy with office work...I don't like her at all...But she is being missed🥱...I need the UPDATE too...

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chyetta

@chyetta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#885

shahbhvani, update urs tooo. wat ar u waiting for

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#886

Originally posted by: Pals2411
PP it seems is too busy with office work...Idon't likeher at all...But she is being missed🥱...I need the UPDATE too...

Yeh toh mr.India ban gayi hai. Update toh dur ki baat yeh toh aajkal forum me bhi nahi ati.
Kidhar gayab ho gayi yeh?????

Edited by Arieltabi - 11 years ago

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#887

Originally posted by: Pals2411
PP it seems is too busy with office work...I don't like her at all...But she is being missed🥱...I need the UPDATE too...

Pals ... i desperately need part 3 for for my own desire 🤣 ... kuch karo pals ... kahin bhi ho usko pakad ke lao ... chahe woh patal mein hi kyun na chupi ho 😆

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#888

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Yeh toh mr.India ban gayi hai. Update toh dur ki baat yeh toh aajkal forum me bhi nahi ati.
Kidhar gayab ho gayi yeh?????

Tabi ... woh darr gayi hai ...😆 ...part 3 ko leke shayad se ... nahi toh kisi aur ke thread mein faint ho gayi hai 🤣 shayad lashy ke thread mein 😆

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Pals ... i desperately need part 3 for for my own desire 🤣 ... kuch karo pals ... kahin bhi ho usko pakad ke lao ... chahe woh patal mein hi kyun na chupi ho 😆

Varsha...Tera desire mein meri Jodha ka haal bura hoga

... 😭

By the way, Varsha and Tabi --- PP is under too much office pressure

...But her no show in IF is boring me now...And when she will come back, I think she will say I was very busy...Still writing...Update late hoga

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Tabi ... woh darr gayi hai ...😆...part 3 ko leke shayad se ... nahi toh kisi aur ke thread mein faint ho gayi hai🤣shayad lashy ke thread mein😆</font>

Finals me uska Argentina har gaya na shayad bechari us gam me faint ho gayi hai. Hosh me nahi aa rahi. 😆