AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3) - Page 88

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

WouldyoudanceIf I asked youto dance?

Wouldyou runAnd never look back?

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no thanks 🤣

Bohot din bite yeh update milke 😆

Hey PP! Both the parts were fab!😃

SUPERBB UPDATE...I LIKE HW U DESCRIBE EACH SCENE.. WE CAN IMAGINE HW D SCENE IS TAKING PLACE...LOVELY DEAR...

Amazing update Pri.
Jodha still thinks she can get away from him now after he came to know about Rico. He finally found her after 4 years and he will never let her go this time. Especially with Rico.
It felt good to know that Jalal realized his mistake. He felt guilty. He understand what horrible thing he did to her.
It was really foolish of Jodha to go like that alone to an unknown place after getting a message from a stranger. Just because someone gave her mssg on Disha's name she can't go like that. (Btw my one friend's name is Disha too 😆 )
U describe the whole scene so beautifully it felt real. My heart was beating fast when she entered the guest house thinking what's gonna happen next.
And Jalal he loves her so much. He cant live without her. He went on his knees and begged to her for the first time. Her love made her do that. Even Jo melted for some time seeing his pain. I like the way she too get on her knees and tried to make him understand.
I want to kill this Sanjay now. Why the hell he came to Jo's life. If he would not have been there she would have accept Jalal.
For the first time in his life Jalal begged for something to Jo and she refuses. That made him take that dicission.
Btw Pri Did Jalal left her like that and went to delhi? And what happened to Jo after that? How did she met HB? And didn't she contact Sanjay after that? What happened to Sanjay and her relation after that?
Pata hai tu sunegi nahi phirbi saying Pls update soon. 😭
Le kardiya cmmnt ab khush. 😛

Awesome update

WOW, i am waiting for their past

Update soon yaar

Wow!! Lovely updates and great detail about the past. I love how In depth your story is. You have a wonderful way of going from present to past retelling the story. It is a wonderful story that keeps the reader engaged and sitting at the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen next.

I am intrigue how Jo's anger and hatred will turn to love and how Jalal will make amends for his wrong doing? What a beautifully complicated story you weave! Can't wait for the next chapter .

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

ab to udpate dedo😡

Fabulous update pp 😳 You described evrythng so beautifully... 😳 so jalal tricked Jo lik this ... From day one I was thinking how that night wud hv happend 😆 I felt pity for Jo as she gonna get bura haal that night... I felt bad for Jallu wen he kneel down n begged her but just aftr hearing Sanjay boyfrn devil inside woke up... Nxt wil b JJ painful night... Present Jallu understood wat horrible he had done to Jo n I can understand Jo it's difficult to see the person who did sme lik thing lik that... Pri plz let Sanjay marry rukayya 😆 my dil wil get sukoon 😆 waiting for ur nxt update 😳

Fabulous update pp 😳 You described evrythng so beautifully...