AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3) - Page 12

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

What a chapter PP !! So so thrilling yaar 😛 👏 Loved the way you described jalal's desire...restlessness... and Jodha's hatred and disgust for him...

The burst out of Jodha was amazing..!! And ofcourse, the tedha Jalal was back to his lustful desirous antics..😡😆

Lets see what happens next !! Wonderfully penned down... ⭐️ 👏

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

yaar the chapters are always amazing..

ab kya bolun...am like...sharam se pani pani😳😳

but i want ki jodha doesnt feel disgusted when jalal touches her... i want some change in jodha's feelings...

main bhi chahti hoon...but that will take time dear...jodha ke bare me bhi toh soch

jalal is getting changed .. i observed plss

actually he has always been this for jodha...coming chappys me pata chalega...so he is just being himself with jodha...bas uska tareeka thik nehi hai

... update sson..plsss😳😳

Originally posted by: spvd

part 11
awesome...
lovely...

🤗

Jalal loves her or its some kinda attachment?

yeh toh jalal ko bhi nehi pata😆

Jodha despises him...
she never had any feelings for him?

no she never had

who is this person?
and why did he call Jalal that word?

keep reading...pata chal jayega

hes so shocked that Rico is missing...
poor Jodha...
cont soon dear...

love u sweety for such beautiful comment😳

Originally posted by: hely

that was an amazing chappy di..

thanks dear...

bt i hv doubt..jalal is rapist
what jalal would do on hearing it...?????

yeh ane wale chapy me pata chalega😆

so he raped jo😡
jalal doesnt luv jodha i know..
he only wnt his son..

aisa kyun lagta hai tujhe???

Jodha's pain and anguish... She's so broken inside😭😭😭

dont worry...jalal will compensate everything

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

Originally posted by: justlovetv

PP loved this update!

Jallu is getting so restless😆 Kitna desire aur lust bhara hai usme for Jodha!😳

woh toh hai...

but tu itni khush kyun ho rahi😆

Thank God he restrained himself!😳 Nahi toh bechaari par toot padta!😆 She was anyways in tension because her son has been kidnapped aur agar Jalal kuch karta toh satyanash!

bhag jati...😆 jalal ko fir use dhondna padta😡

Jodha is so disgusted by his touch and gaze! Poor girl must be still traumatized after what she must have been through! And Jalal, still trying all the tricks to get close to her, inspite of all that has happened in the past. It's like the guy loses control over his mind when he sees her!😕 For him, the need to feel and be with Jodha is like hunger and thirst or probably even a drug which has gotten him terribly addicted to being with her and feeling her!

woh...u penned it so well...itni achhi tarah se toh maine bhi nehi likha...

loved reading it dear...very nice...👏

Rapist? Did I hear that right? Did Jalal actually do that to her!😡 I was thinking that she had to sleep with him because of some majboori or something! But Jalal wronged Jodha terribly! I want to see what exactly led the situation to that juncture that Jalal had to actually do that to Jodha!😡

you will get that very soon dear...hopefully within next few chapy

PP please jaldi update dena!😳

late hoga