AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3)

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1001

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Let me accept it was an impromptu decision just not to lose her.. but why can't he stop with one such devilish attempt.. claiming a lifeless soul again and again is like ____ with a corpse.. I may sound harsh, but that's what I felt.. and thank god PP aptly named it "DESIRE", not LOVE...

Yes that point even I agree & is correct ... that was his crazy suppressed desires i would say... but i guess he did suffer & repent ... as god punished him for his deed by that dreadful accident & unable to father child , in future ... I think he is paying for his callousness😡 ... I hope he resurrects himself atleast now ... i think he has ...to some extent ... 4 years without seeing her must have been difficult for him ... as she had already made him run for her like a mad dog 😆

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1002

I am SPEECHLESS Pri ... I don't know what to say..

Ek toh a bada wala sorry for a late reply... don't get much time for IF...

it was so EXCELLENTLY written... I can hardly imagine any better than this..

I am still in a shock..

the write up was excellent... but I am so so so broken for Jodha's condition!

I hate Jalal for this.. Desire desire desire... killed a woman for his desire😡

Anyways, LOVED the way you have written this piece... very detailed, thrilling..

Kudos⭐️

SO, Salim mil gaya.. yay! Lets see what happens next..

Continue soon!!

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Saumya

@tinkylove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1003

PRIYANKA!!!!

I AM REAlly amazed and surprised to see ur ff!!!!!

what an teriffic writer u r !!!!!

my mouth was wide open wen I was reading ur latest updates!!!!

truly speaking!!!

AM SPEECHLESS!!

I DONT HAVE ANY WORD TO DESCRIBE IT!!!

U POTRAYED EVERY EMOTION SOOO WELL!!!!

HATSS OFF!!!!

STANDING OVATION!!!!!

A BIG ROUND OF APPLAUSE!!!!

👏👏👏👏👏

MAIN KUCH NAHI BIOL PAUNGI!!!!!

I AM TOTALLY DUMBSTRUCK AND WOWE!!

AND I AM STILL IN UR UDATE LAND!!!

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Tabassum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1004

Pri I m speechless. I really don't know what to say about this chapter. It was one painful and scary chapter.
U have written Jo's emotions and pains beautifully in word. I felt like crying reading Jo's emotions. She was in so much pain. After going through this torture it won't be hard for her to forgive Jalal it will be impossible for her to forgive. After what he has done to her why would she care if he live or die.
I was cheerleading for Jalal all this time. But today I don't wanna talk about him. What did he think after doing this with her he will say sorry and marry her and try to give her all happiness and she will forget everything 😡 . He does understand he did a mistake but don't understand how much horrible crime it was, He does understand he had hurt her but he don't understand the depth of her pain. I can understand he wanted her in his life, I can understand his obsession but this is just unacceptable.
And the part where u described how she was lying like a corpse was most painful and I was disgusted with Jalal.
Thnk God they found Rico. The chapters r incomplete without him.
And Pri u r a very talented and brilliant writer 👏 . I m telling u apna job chor de and start writing novels u r going to be famous 😆
Pls try to update soon.
Btw I like that line, "Love is selfish " .I think love is both selfish and selfless.

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1005

Originally posted by: Arieltabi
Pri I m speechless. I really don't know what to say about this chapter. It was one painful and scary chapter.
U have written Jo's emotions and pains beautifully in word. I felt like crying reading Jo's emotions. She was in so much pain. After going through this torture it won't be hard for her to forgive Jalal it will be impossible for her to forgive. After what he has done to her why would she care if he live or die.
I was cheerleading for Jalal all this time. But today I don't wanna talk about him. What did he think after doing this with her he will say sorry and marry her and try to give her all happiness and she will forget everything 😡 . He does understand he did a mistake but don't understand how much horrible crime it was, He does understand he had hurt her but he don't understand the depth of her pain. I can understand he wanted her in his life, I can understand his obsession but this is just unacceptable.
And the part where u described how she was lying like a corpse was most painful and I was disgusted with Jalal.
Thnk God they found Rico. The chapters r incomplete without him.
And Pri u r a very talented and brilliant writer 👏 . I m telling u apna job chor de and start writing novels u r going to be famous 😆
Pls try to update soon.
Btw I like that line, "Love is selfish " .I think love is both selfish and selfless.

That was exactly what I felt too Tabi. All these days, I assumed this to happen in a totally different situation like an unexpected one under the affect of alcohol or so.. but here he did it deliberately in his full senses.. Ah! This is too much to forget and n forgive

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1006

im totally speechless... u hv written excellently bt d scene is really terrifying cant even think how jodha would hv dealt wid all dis...

cant say more on dis...bt yes ur writing is really adorable u hv sooo superbly describe all different emotions n all...

do continue soon wid next...eager to knnw abt kidnapper...i feel it is jo's Ex only... let c... what u hv plan next...

DO CONTINUE SOON DEAR...

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Rutuja Deo

@Rutuja...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1007

First of all u have written brilliantly this story. ..

just read all chaps in one goo.. its awesome really..

omgg!!

she went through dreadful, horrible situation!!!

Jodhaa... can't imagine her state... she suffered alot... m feeling like killing him... such a evil.. monster..

god also punished him for his deeds.. immediately he met with an accident na...

plz plz update soon... I wanna know how she ll handle him now onwards. .

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1008

lovely... superb update dear... hope u wil clear MU soon... awaiting for the next pm

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1009

HATS OFF to your writing 👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️ I liked the chap to bits!! Awesome Awesome Awesome! 😳😳 beautifully written😳

Your concept and writing are growing better n better everyday ! 👏👏 I so much love this story😳😳 the way u described jo's emotion was fab..jalal is devil...animal...very disgusting he hurted jodha badly😭 ...n now he expects he will fill her world with happiness...no never he dont desrves jo's hate...toh love to boht door h.. richo is safe..finally..plz update soon di🤗

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roshaeldsouza91

@roshaeldsouza91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1010

Gosh pp.. am sorry for being so latye.. but am very busy these days.. never get time for replying.. but i make sure to read your work.. and you are amazing...

i am clueless.. should i hate him or should i pity😔

god you wrote it amazingly... all of their emotionas feelings everything were captured perfectly..

i know how difficult it would have been for you to pen it down.. such heartwrenching part..

god i read the part 3 .. thrice.. felt like crying for jo...i pray no girl has to go through such thing..

you did a remarkable work by writing it so superbly..

i dont want jo to forgive him so easily... he should understand what he did was not at all unforgivable..itna desire.. itna stubborness😭

am just waiting for the next updates...

all hail PP ..all hail PP👏

i am so bad... am feeling like hitting Jallu but not able to hate him fully... its all because of the way you wrote... ..😳 mar\vellous

Our magic queen writer PP..lots of love..🤗

Please update soon.. cant wait...

how will she try to run away from him now... ?

and how did she meet HB...? so many things.. gosh am curious

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